The story of the everyday life of a human hired by mares to provide comfort for their needs, all the while exploring Equestrian life through the eyes of his customers. Set in the Gentlemanverse.
Chapter 2 has arrived, and thank you coandco and murphy for their hard work on proof-reading and editing. I am currently writing the latest chapter for my other story, but I already have a map for the next chapter. I don't want to spoil it, especially at this stage, so please, enjoy the chapter.
This chapter was fantastic. I honestly wasn't expecting a back story behind this. I really enjoyed hearing more about the stories behind the characters with their troubled pasts and how it shows in their present lives. I guess this is why I like this fic. You see I'm not a big fan of clop...like at all. But in this fic it doesn't bother me. I won't be lying when I related all to well with trixie's story. Anyway I loved this chapter and I can't wait for more.
Neat, protagonist backstory. Now not only did he not get to work in his chosen occupation he is now a prostitute...for horses. Dad must be 'disappointed son'.
Yeah, I think that's why it got the reception it did. I'm going to expand it soon as well, and I'm thinking of having chapters without clop at all. We'll see how it goes.
Yeah, I think this was a better chapter for me. It gave Harry / Wingman a personality, and was a bit deeper emotionally for both the Gentleman and his mare.
I might not always make chapters of the latter, though I will always try.
Yeah. Its probably why he's dreaming of his father. Makes me want to actually write a chapter where the family visits him. . . while he is on a job. Evil
1592536 His mom might be wondering if their next grandchild will be on the fuzzy side. Silly idea yes and it should be impossible with normal biology/genetics, but then magic happened.
If you squint hard enough, you can basically edit the sex scenes out. Glad you liked the story though. While I'm not too confident on my 'clop skillz', I have confidence in my story telling.
It might have been more personal for Harry. Trixie isn't a first-time customer like Spitfire, but one of his actual few firsts. At least, his first dom. They have met quite a few times. Maybe that's why it felt romantic.
But, hey bonus for you, right? XD and Welcome Back.
Nice work on the story. Oddly enough, I can easily picture Trixie in just the sort of focus that you've given her here. It's a nice bit of backstory, for both your Gentleman and for Miss Lulamoon. Maybe, in a future chapter, we'll get a return visit with Trixie and see if Harry's advice and acceptance has had any lasting effect on our somewhat brittle traveling illusionist.
I like the fact that Trixie's been written by a lot of writers in FiMfiction though she never really appeared afterwards since Boast Busters. She has a wide range of personalities and can be a fun to write. I'm glad you liked this version of Trixie, Crashing Star.
To Jack-Pony, yeah, I've seen the spectrum too. I wanted to make Trixie act on both ends, and this came up. Glad how it turned out. Trixie's. . . hawt. xD
1594387 [youtube=D6xa3VcxWtI] ^This was my reaction to reading your comment^ I still can't understand why I found your comment so funny Otherwise, thank you(?)
I love reading stories where Trixie's actually given a little core character work. Maybe even some interesting backstory. Even if it was only for one chapter, I like where you took the idea. Please continue.
AUTHOR'S NOTES:
Chapter 2 has arrived, and thank you coandco and murphy for their hard work on proof-reading and editing. I am currently writing the latest chapter for my other story, but I already have a map for the next chapter. I don't want to spoil it, especially at this stage, so please, enjoy the chapter.
FANTASTIC! I love you and this fic. first non author comment
Great chapter! And great mare, too.
You do good work with this. Looking forward to more.
Holy crap, this has a great story, even if it's clop!
Oh man, seeing as the quality hasnt fallen at all, this is looking promising! I cant wait for more!
This chapter was fantastic. I honestly wasn't expecting a back story behind this. I really enjoyed hearing more about the stories behind the characters with their troubled pasts and how it shows in their present lives. I guess this is why I like this fic. You see I'm not a big fan of clop...like at all. But in this fic it doesn't bother me. I won't be lying when I related all to well with trixie's story. Anyway I loved this chapter and I can't wait for more.
'twas BRILLIANT
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DAMN YOU TROLLESTIA!
Yay new story now do Luna
Somehow this was both sexy and heartwarming . . . howwww?
You underused Spitfire, I think, but Trixie got the treatment she deserved
Neat, protagonist backstory. Now not only did he not get to work in his chosen occupation he is now a prostitute...for horses. Dad must be 'disappointed son'.
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Glad you like it, and congratulations for the first non-author post.
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Don't know when the next one will be, but its planned.
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Yeah, I think that's why it got the reception it did. I'm going to expand it soon as well, and I'm thinking of having chapters without clop at all. We'll see how it goes.
And wildberk, yeah, I can relate too.
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I did notice a few mistakes. Very few. Like only two. And those were the ones that added last minute. xD coandco and murphy do great work.
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Yeah, I think this was a better chapter for me. It gave Harry / Wingman a personality, and was a bit deeper emotionally for both the Gentleman and his mare.
I might not always make chapters of the latter, though I will always try.
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I would like to, but at this point, that's not going to happen. Harry's still. . . new. 'Blooded', but still a rookie. Who knows, maybe in the future?
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I can't understand a word they are saying. The last few minutes though made me
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coandco called it 'cathartic'. And yeah, I did under-use Spitfire. I'll make it up to her the next chapter that features her.
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Yeah. Its probably why he's dreaming of his father. Makes me want to actually write a chapter where the family visits him. . . while he is on a job. Evil
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By the way, I forgot to say it earlier, but murphy is making an extended scene of Wingman and Trixie's first night. Can't wait.
Also, I saw a parody of my story, and I enjoyed it. The story is called Schmuck for Mares if anyone's interested.
>> demon eyes laharl THERE APPEARS TO BE A SEVERE LACK OF THY ROYAL CNTERLOT VOICE AND DAT MOON THING FROM ZELDA, AND THE MOON THING FROM FIM
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Uh I'm sorry, what?
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His mom might be wondering if their next grandchild will be on the fuzzy side. Silly idea yes and it should be impossible with normal biology/genetics, but then magic happened.
>> demon eyes laharl IT IS BOTH A SEX JOKE AND NOT A SEC JOKE DEPENDING ON HOW CREATIVE YOU ARE FEELING
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Oh I am going to explore that issue next chapter. ^_^
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And that is how centaurs are born.
oh god the gentleman with trixie?? ugh i wish him luck xDD
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Comment of Approval.
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I always thought centaurs were created when Lyra drank a potion that would give her hands, but she got the dose wrong?
Hmm, I wonder if anyone recognize one of Harry's customers that rejected him.
I can't decide if I am more pleased or commoved by this. Good job, really!
Wow!
Totally awesome chapter, my favourite so far.
I love the balance and variety you've been writing with, it's really amazing.
Keep putting the chapters up, plz!
~Syn3rgy
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He had... difficulties. xD
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Give it a read. See if it strikes your fancy.
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Thank you very much.
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Its always possible to be both.
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Thank you. I'll try to maintain and improve the story as we go.
1592737 I did read it, but I'm not really into that kind of stuff. I'm going to stick with the story though, because it's still really good overall.
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SWEET TAP DANCING CHRIST ON A CRACKER! DAT CHAPTER!
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Are you sure this doesn't have romance? Cause that felt awfully romantic at points.
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If you squint hard enough, you can basically edit the sex scenes out. Glad you liked the story though. While I'm not too confident on my 'clop skillz', I have confidence in my story telling.
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It might have been more personal for Harry. Trixie isn't a first-time customer like Spitfire, but one of his actual few firsts. At least, his first dom. They have met quite a few times. Maybe that's why it felt romantic.
But, hey bonus for you, right? XD and Welcome Back.
Trixie be kinky as fuck
me like me like
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` Yes she can be.
I generally don't read clop, but this is one of the few examples. Reason I continue to do so it due to the story that it has
A good story it is too!
Harry's clients get together and decide that they want to settle down. Harry then has a herd.
Also, Harry was rather rudely rejected by Vinyl. It's her loss really, she doesn't know what she's missing.
I liked the look into Harry's life that this chapter provided, and I wonder which mare is going to be featured in the next installment.
Wow you did a great job on this. Also i used to not be able to stand Trixie, but now i see her in a different light good job
I am totally loving this story right now. Please keep up the good work!
Wow, now I have seen both sends of the Trixie spectrum...both evil, callous Trixie and soft, vunlerable Trixie.
Props.
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Nice work on the story. Oddly enough, I can easily picture Trixie in just the sort of focus that you've given her here. It's a nice bit of backstory, for both your Gentleman and for Miss Lulamoon. Maybe, in a future chapter, we'll get a return visit with Trixie and see if Harry's advice and acceptance has had any lasting effect on our somewhat brittle traveling illusionist.
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Yay!
Welcome to the herd! As they say in Equestria. xD
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To be fair for Vinyl, he was new and unknown. Who knows, maybe they'll see each other again.
As for Harry making a herd. . . well, we'll see.
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I like the fact that Trixie's been written by a lot of writers in FiMfiction though she never really appeared afterwards since Boast Busters. She has a wide range of personalities and can be a fun to write. I'm glad you liked this version of Trixie, Crashing Star.
To Jack-Pony, yeah, I've seen the spectrum too. I wanted to make Trixie act on both ends, and this came up. Glad how it turned out. Trixie's. . . hawt. xD
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Will do!
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I receive the badge with honor. And yeah. . . we'll see her soon. As a client or on the news, we'll see.
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Probably the best way to end the story, huh? Gentleman of the Moon?
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^This was my reaction to reading your comment^
I still can't understand why I found your comment so funny
Otherwise, thank you(?)
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Good lord she was bitten.
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It is a funny story, can anyone truly blame her?
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I clapped when she was able to finish the segment. Oh good lord, she couldn't stop laughing!
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Dat story.
Dat chapter.
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I love reading stories where Trixie's actually given a little core character work. Maybe even some interesting backstory. Even if it was only for one chapter, I like where you took the idea. Please continue.
Fuck yea.
Damn good chapter. I'll be honest, I was scared you might take it down the road of strictly sex. I'm very glad you did not disappoint.
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I don't think I can ever make a pure sex chapter. Not my nature I guess.
And yes! I finally get the Thor's Request Picture! XD XD
EDIT: I feel sorry for Flutters in your story. Its like everyone was hammering her to get a kitchen or something a
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Thank god.
And hey, glad you read it, hope you likey