The story of the everyday life of a human hired by mares to provide comfort for their needs, all the while exploring Equestrian life through the eyes of his customers. Set in the Gentlemanverse.
Its not the popcorn's fault that you returned with a jolt The update was just sitting there waiting for your eyes to tear I'm only rhyming this once Because I'm such a dunce I know you will pounce and my rhymes will be trounced However, I hope you enjoy the read coz I'm now out to enjoy my mead.
So, the details definitely seem to be implying that Platinum is actually Cadence in a costume / disguise... As for our protagonist getting suspended, I suppose we'll just have to wait, because I have -no- idea what that might be for. I'll be keeping an eye out, even if it does take quite some time.
1977714 Wait...wha-oh right couldn't remember,getting ready to play cello for friends. They'll never know I'm reading something. Oh wait. My mind hurts.
xD Right now, I'm torn between the cheap cop-out which is funny, and the more plausible one which (for some reason) becomes a bit too silly if I write it down.
1977819 No seriously my mind hurts from thinking to hard. About the reading. They don't honestly care except they notice I don't play my best. After that I need to go take a rest. Oh wait it's 10:00 pm. Looks like that nap has to wait
The only reason I can imagine he's getting suspended is from someone higher up screwing with him. Well, either that, or he's done something and it hasn't been mentioned in the story. For the most part, I have no idea. I dont find myself really worried either, because there hasn't been much build up to the declaration and Eve doesn't seem too concerned.
lol. Well, I'm glad I mixed character and story development with the clop. Its like... I don't know. What kind of foods combine two awesome things together in one neat package?
Hooray! Update! Too tired to read now, but will when I have more time (and cognizant brain function!) Every time I look at the main picture for this story, I think of the 'Hitman' for some reason
1978086 I was never here. I am also not waiting for another chapter and am in no way just refreshing the page despite the latest chapter being put up today.
Actually, I'm more excited this story broke the 1000 like mark. Getting featured (and I mean no offense to anyone here, really) seems redundant to me as a lot of people faved this story, and they'd check on it once they know its updated.
But what the hell. 1000 plus likes plus feature! Guys! Achievement/Trophy unlocked!
This is what happens when I leave to get popcorn.....
I'm done with popcorn.
1977643
Its not the popcorn's fault
that you returned with a jolt
The update was just sitting there
waiting for your eyes to tear
I'm only rhyming this once
Because I'm such a dunce
I know you will pounce
and my rhymes will be trounced
However, I hope you enjoy the read
coz I'm now out to enjoy my mead.
1977665
Nah to lazy to rhyme.
Besides my years is up so I won't be ryhming until someone says I have to
1977697
*goes and celebrates at the (not-so) hard-earned victory!*
..... and suddenly, I'm tired.
In all seriousness, though, enjoy.
*in rainbow's voice* DUN DUN DUN!
I wonder why Harry is being taken off active duty.
So, the details definitely seem to be implying that Platinum is actually Cadence in a costume / disguise... As for our protagonist getting suspended, I suppose we'll just have to wait, because I have -no- idea what that might be for. I'll be keeping an eye out, even if it does take quite some time.
1977714
Wait...wha-oh right couldn't remember,getting ready to play cello for friends.
They'll never know I'm reading something.
Oh wait.
My mind hurts.
1977738
xD Right now, I'm torn between the cheap cop-out which is funny, and the more plausible one which (for some reason) becomes a bit too silly if I write it down.
1977748
I'll try not to take too long. FH is really occupying my mind. Sometimes I hate world building.
1977750
Its fine. You don't have to tell your friends that you're reading this story. I'll understand .
1977819
No seriously my mind hurts from thinking to hard.
About the reading.
They don't honestly care except they notice I don't play my best.
After that I need to go take a rest.
Oh wait it's 10:00 pm.
Looks like that nap has to wait
1977856
Rest up when you can, though, alright?
1977869
Mind hurts must read last paragraph......
FIRST POST
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Love the story by the way. I love how good the character development is. I never liked clop I mainly read it to see what leads up to it.
Even in background story, sex still happens
The only reason I can imagine he's getting suspended is from someone higher up screwing with him. Well, either that, or he's done something and it hasn't been mentioned in the story. For the most part, I have no idea. I dont find myself really worried either, because there hasn't been much build up to the declaration and Eve doesn't seem too concerned.
1977899
lol. Well, I'm glad I mixed character and story development with the clop. Its like... I don't know. What kind of foods combine two awesome things together in one neat package?
1977920
1977879
.....the story will still be there tomorrow, dude....
1977975
Yeah....
It's just complicated what I'm doing tomorrow or for the rest of the month....
Hooray! Update! Too tired to read now, but will when I have more time (and cognizant brain function!)
Every time I look at the main picture for this story, I think of the 'Hitman' for some reason
EDIT: Screw sleep, I can do that when I'm dead!
You give us a cliffhanger like that and tell us we will need to wait extra long for the next chapter!?!
You are evil!
EVIL
At one point, near the end, Five Stars gets called "Five Points". You might want to fix that.
1977944
Nice catch.
1977997
Okay. Just... don't haunt me if your brain gets fried or something from reading this fic?
1977999
lol! For me, Hitman is more of a barcode behind a shaved head.
1978001
Sorry.
1978005
Nice. Thanks dude. You get a Mac.
K, look. As long as this stays alive, then I'll be happy. By GOD don't kill this off.
This is good enough for me to lie about reading it for the story, and be believed.
1978043
Something about a black suit and a tie that does it lol. Have you played Absolution?
1978056
Hard to... considering I'm seriously building a universe around it.
1978058
Enjoy dude.
1978079
I haven't actually played any of the Hitman games. I just know about them.
Not all chapters of a clopper story need to have detailed sex to be good.
Suspended from duties huh? Can't wait to see how that plays out.
1978043
No worries.
Besides I'm only going to England for like a month.
Oh and heads up.
I was done with the story 20 minutes ago
1978086
I was never here. I am also not waiting for another chapter and am in no way just refreshing the page despite the latest chapter being put up today.
Such an awesome story, can't wait for the next chapter
1978103
lol... me too....
1978115
Hope you liked it.
England eh? Going to where next?
1978116
Hehe. I did that to Xenophilia once.
1978157
Hopefully, it won't be too long.
1977899 For some reason it did not show any other comments when it wrote first post. Huh.
1978186
Don't worry dude. Some people here are unnaturally fast in doing first posts.
1978173
No idea.
Mabye see my cousin in Japan.
Then might head down to Sydney,Australia .
Not really caring.
Spending the money I saved
So the guy's name is Harry Larson, huh?
I almost did a double take when I first saw his last name. One of the writers for MLP is named M.A. Larson.
"Wait...what?"
Suddenly cliffhanger.
It seems to me that Ever Ring has some hidden feelings for the protaginist. I wonder how right I am.
Update? Good, I need more pony porm to distract me from sleep and studying for my biology test tomorrow....whatever, ponies before school
1977665 Yeah, the first six lines didn't rhyme.
Wonderful chapter, although I am worried about him getting suspended. Seems like a way of saying "I'm gonna update even less now"
I love your work
I like it. Fuck the short sex scene! The worldbuilding is where it's at here!
Nice world building and explanation of why he's in Equestria. Don't see that in many clopfics.
Keep it up!
Suspended? We're not talking fired are we? Just a temporary leave, like a forced vacation?
1978217
Ja-pan....?
Wow.
1978239
... wha....? *mind blown*
1978308
Yeah... I'm... evil? I think?
1978333
1978334
lol, okay, enjoy!
1978376
Thank you. I'm working on two stories set in this universe, so maybe that's why I'm a bit delayed.
1978385
Yeah. Usually humans just pop out like mushrooms or something. Kidding, but yeah, glad you liked it Velk.
I also owe you, BTW. Sabaton is awesome!
Hell yeah, Feathered Heart is gonna be updated, and this chapter was great too!
1978448
Japan....
Ja-pan
I feel like I'm missing something (maybe popcorn).
EDIT: hey look your story is featured again.... Yay.
1978448
Yeah. M.A. Larson wrote many of the episodes that were popular with the fanbase, the most recent of which being Magic Duel.
I really think everyone should at least know who the writers are. They're the ones giving us these great episodes, after all.
1978456
Still working out the kinks on the second chapter.
1978465
Or bread. Get it?
1978480
Good job man
Oh. My. God. I favourited this story and then it updated the very next day.I must only use this power for good!
1978478
Yeah... true.
*hides the fact that I thought only one woman was responsible for the whole show. Hides the fact I'm attracted to said woman).
Laharl, shut up.
1978484
Please don't. That was the worst pun ever.
1978501
You have awesome powers!
1978508
No your story is featured again.
Go Americans whoo!!!!!!!!!
Michele Obama's birthday for 26 minutes!!!!!
1978528
Oooh... xD
Actually, I'm more excited this story broke the 1000 like mark. Getting featured (and I mean no offense to anyone here, really) seems redundant to me as a lot of people faved this story, and they'd check on it once they know its updated.
But what the hell. 1000 plus likes plus feature! Guys! Achievement/Trophy unlocked!
1978557
Glad you liked it then. ^_^