The story of the everyday life of a human hired by mares to provide comfort for their needs, all the while exploring Equestrian life through the eyes of his customers. Set in the Gentlemanverse.
I think you touched base with Cheerilee nicely. My only concern is Cheerilee will have a hard time moving on considering Harry was the only one, pony aside, to make her feel special.
Yeah.... I think that's the sad part of the whole situation. Harry always left before they woke up. I guess this is what happens when the mare beats him to it
Wow. This is your best chapter yet, man. You and your pre-readers did a great job.
I really like Cheerilee, and I'm glad that the mare you've made her in your story managed to find a little peace after talking with Wingman. That was pretty touching. Keep it up, and happy New Year!
This chapter was beautiful I loved seeing Cheerilee get the attention and admiration that she deserves. This entire story has far surpassed my expectations and I am so damn eager to see more from you.
“Yup,” the unicorn replied. “Not a lot of customers for the weekday. I usually get more reservation requests tomorrow. Lucky for you and your girlfriend, skies will be all clear for both of you.”
If I'm not mistaken Wingman is still talking to Surprise at this point so it should say pegasis. Other than that please keep up the amazing work.
I can't add pics cuz I'm on my mobile but imagine every single face that has the text. SO AWESOME and you have my face right about now... Also I feel ship feels. But maybe that's just me.
for a second there when i heard the door slam open and "WHERE IS HE!?" my immediate thought was big mac had come back. But when it was revealed to be eve, plus the whoke moment afterwards I was laughing my butt off. good works man once again. and keep up said good works and have a happy new year.
Damnit... I REAAAALLY didn't want him to leave after that wonderful night! Those last few scenes, partly including the intimate one, made it all feel so real and special! It felt so right!!
WHY WOULD YOU DO THIS, LAHARL?
Harry was able to shed his skin, allowing himself to break free for an evening just for her and provide Cheerilee with honest emotion(A welcome thing to see after that moment with trixie two chapters back.). He had his little romance, took his time and had a moment of purity here. And she opened up to him the next morning! SO WHY CAN'T THEY JUST... GRRR. Such a wonderfully heartbreaking experience this was...
This Cheerilee & Harry relation better go somewhere...
Went out to smoke after reading this chapter and it literally had me kicking the air once or twice. Gahhh, this story you've made is just fantastic, man. Haven't felt so torn up since I read the end of Xenophilia. Bra-FREAKING-vo.
I would like to say the quality of this story is great. It well written, sets ground on an emotional level, and explores a region of thinking that seems less tread upon than it should be. When you have a story that is based around sex and you actually forget that in favor of the emotional bits, youve succeed in so many ways. The intimate scenes are well laced too. Wingman's development in the story is fun to just to observe. Amazing. -Sturrn
1880170 It isn't too bad yet. You're good enough at this that reading 11k words really doesn't feel like a slog, but it can be a bit daunting when chapters get to 15k+ words.
Thank you. Like I said, I was inspired by a certain story that's sitting at 2K likes. I'm happy that, while I haven't reached that level yet in terms of storytelling, I'm getting there.
1880184 Says the guy with a chapter sitting near 14k in rough draft.
I kid of course. I was intending to get started on a new fic of my own, but now it's 4am. You make a convenient target of blame for my procrastination.
Nice job with the new chapter. I noticed a couple of grammar mistakes, but you've been improving quite a lot. Thanks for the great New Years present, and to think I didn't get you anything
1880225 They've been filled with great friends, great family, great food (all made by me, I don't have harry's problems with cooking), and blowing up mechs with bronies
first
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Congrats. You win a Mac.
Poor Harry (it's always poor Harry)
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Wha... poor Harry again!?
... Well, yeah, true, at this chapter at least... for now.
Ahhh, the pleasures of seeing the number 1 pop up next to the Favorites icon. And what luck with it being a new GfM chapter!
DEL, you've made the evening. Cheers!!
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Cheers dude. Happy New Year.
Best new years gift ever!
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Enjoy.
I think you touched base with Cheerilee nicely. My only concern is Cheerilee will have a hard time moving on considering Harry was the only one, pony aside, to make her feel special.
wow. a great way to end the day before new years day!
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It was a great chapter, but now I really can't help hoping that Cheerilee finds herself with foal.dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Cheerilee.png And I sense jealousy from Eve.
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Yeah.... I think that's the sad part of the whole situation. Harry always left before they woke up. I guess this is what happens when the mare beats him to it
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Well, Cheerilee has to settle down first. I'm just hoping, barring any future with Harry, that she fixes her relationship with Mac.
As for jealousy..... Maybe....
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Glad you enjoyed it. Happy New Year.
That, simply put, was amazing.
D'awwwwww.
Fucker, I swear if you gave me cavities I'm sending you my dentist bill.
Great chapter as always.
Harry is now the relationship expert so it seems. Also, can't wait to see what happens with Rarity.
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Glad you liked it. Come again. We have more coming next year.
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Have some pancakes?
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Still thinking about it to be honest.
Next Chapter is about Harry's arrival in Equestria. Just wanted to give people a head's up.
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Yes! I really like me some backstories!
Can't wait!
Wow. This is your best chapter yet, man. You and your pre-readers did a great job.
I really like Cheerilee, and I'm glad that the mare you've made her in your story managed to find a little peace after talking with Wingman. That was pretty touching. Keep it up, and happy New Year!
I like it.
This guy's really good at this job.
I had to laugh a "magic Viagra" though.
This chapter was beautiful I loved seeing Cheerilee get the attention and admiration that she deserves. This entire story has far surpassed my expectations and I am so damn eager to see more from you.
If I'm not mistaken Wingman is still talking to Surprise at this point so it should say pegasis. Other than that please keep up the amazing work.
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Just awaiting the right time for my proof-readers to be less busy. I promised them to give it next year. Most of them, at least.
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Happy new year man, and thanks for your time!
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He's been trained well.
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Huh, damn. Nice catch. Gonna correct that. Thank you. You get two Macs.
Ahem.
D'AAAAWWWWWW!!!
Now I wonder who's lined up next.
I don't see it being Rarity, although obvious sub-plot is obvious.
Oh god the diabetus. You are amazing. I cannot even describe the feels. OH GOD THE FEEEEELS!
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No prob, if you ever feel you'd like an extra set of eyes feel free to let me know.
I can't add pics cuz I'm on my mobile but imagine every single face that has the text. SO AWESOME and you have my face right about now... Also I feel ship feels. But maybe that's just me.
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Yeah, but I really liked writing their interactions for some reason. Also, Harry has a type: he likes white unicorns. Who'd have known, eh?
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Cheerilee deserves it.
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I'll keep that in mind.
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Its not only you. Sometimes I even wonder who really ends up with Harry in the end.
for a second there when i heard the door slam open and "WHERE IS HE!?" my immediate thought was big mac had come back. But when it was revealed to be eve, plus the whoke moment afterwards I was laughing my butt off. good works man once again. and keep up said good works and have a happy new year.
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OH MY SIDES!
God, that would have been awkward as hell.
Happy New Year too.
Damnit... I REAAAALLY didn't want him to leave after that wonderful night! Those last few scenes, partly including the intimate one, made it all feel so real and special! It felt so right!!
WHY WOULD YOU DO THIS, LAHARL?
Harry was able to shed his skin, allowing himself to break free for an evening just for her and provide Cheerilee with honest emotion(A welcome thing to see after that moment with trixie two chapters back.). He had his little romance, took his time and had a moment of purity here. And she opened up to him the next morning! SO WHY CAN'T THEY JUST... GRRR. Such a wonderfully heartbreaking experience this was...
This Cheerilee & Harry relation better go somewhere...
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Either eventuality would be fantastic.
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I... can't answer that. All I know is... what they had, Cheerilee won't forget it.
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Yeah. Cheerilee. Loved writing the two part chapter. She's awesome.
Over 20,000 words of Cheerilee. She's definitely one of the unsung heroines of MLP. The awesome and win of this cannot possibly be calculated.
Overprotective she said, eh? Interesting.
I look forward to more chapters of this great series!
Loved it! Better than ever!
Laharl a true writer never knows what's going to happen you merely write what your heart says to write and in the end beauty awaits you.
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Yes, they (the two mares) are. An unsung heroine, and the overpreotective handler.
Glad you liked the story so far. enjoy the New Year.
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Thank you!
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Nice sentiment. Cheers!
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Went out to smoke after reading this chapter and it literally had me kicking the air once or twice. Gahhh, this story you've made is just fantastic, man. Haven't felt so torn up since I read the end of Xenophilia. Bra-FREAKING-vo.
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Heh, maybe you'll see AnonDashie come along somewhere. He sometimes visits.
D'AAAAWWWWWWWWW
That said, your chapters keep getting longer. Try not to let it get out of hand.
1880165
Fine. Next chapter is only 200 words. Just for you.
*checks*
Uh.... wow. Its currently at 13,843. Okay. um... sorry?
I would like to say the quality of this story is great. It well written, sets ground on an emotional level, and explores a region of thinking that seems less tread upon than it should be. When you have a story that is based around sex and you actually forget that in favor of the emotional bits, youve succeed in so many ways. The intimate scenes are well laced too. Wingman's development in the story is fun to just to observe. Amazing.
-Sturrn
1880170
It isn't too bad yet. You're good enough at this that reading 11k words really doesn't feel like a slog, but it can be a bit daunting when chapters get to 15k+ words.
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Thank you. Like I said, I was inspired by a certain story that's sitting at 2K likes. I'm happy that, while I haven't reached that level yet in terms of storytelling, I'm getting there.
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I... don't think I can write something that long.
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Says the guy with a chapter sitting near 14k in rough draft.
I kid of course. I was intending to get started on a new fic of my own, but now it's 4am. You make a convenient target of blame for my procrastination.
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I'll be happy to receive the full brunt of your blame.
Nice job with the new chapter. I noticed a couple of grammar mistakes, but you've been improving quite a lot. Thanks for the great New Years present, and to think I didn't get you anything
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Eh, Archnoix gave us something to tide over. We're all happy here.
How's your holidays, AnonDashie?
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They've been filled with great friends, great family, great food (all made by me, I don't have harry's problems with cooking), and blowing up mechs with bronies
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Man, you get the good stuff xD.
Well, Harry is better at me in the cooking, at least. I can only cook rice. We're gonna have Tacos for this New Year though (tonight). Can't wait!
Very nice.
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Oh don't tease me like that. I'm not that kind of girl.