When Princess Celestia decides to put an end to her sister's rebellion, she sends her guards to all towns in Equesria. During these raids Lightning Storm and her sister Shadow Storm make an effort to escape Ponyville.
When Princess Celestia decides to put an end to her sister's rebellion, she sends her guards to all towns in Equesria. During these raids Lightning Storm and her sister Shadow Storm make an effort to escape Ponyville.
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Great beginning dude, can't wait to see where this goes.
One tip, however, you just might want to go through and correct the grammatical errors.
Oh, and have a mustache