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Wolfeh05


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Rainbow Dash rolled her eyes while Twilight sighed and face hooved. She didn't knew these mares very well, but even when she saw them the first time with Starlight they gave the Princess an icky feeling. However...

Every pony in the back raises an eyebrow. Twilight has mind controlled people on multiple occasions Are you some form of it.

Why in the hell do we think this was a punishment

But nonetheless, the mare tried her best to calm herself. What's done is done. On a positive note, they kept the memories of their escapades with Dash and The Wonderbolts. They'll either learn to live with this new handicap they had or just go and beg the Princess to remove the spell. They were sure that if they said that they're reeally reeaallly sorry, the dumb bitch would forgive them. They'll even cry and sing a song if necessary.

I was about to say I guess no real punishment but now I'm about the same these are the smartest Bimbos that ever live in the Equestria they figure about how to gain the system

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Yeah but Twilight didn't force ponies to do degrading things, not even Starlight did that.:twilightblush:

And like Twilight said, Rainbow was mind controlled into rape.

"These are the smartest Bimbos that ever live in the Equestria"

Yeah I wanted to take the cliche "bimbos are dumb" and transform it more into "wolves in sheep clothing" or "don't judge a book by its cover".

"They figure about how to play the system"

I'm assuming Starlight had a play in this, since they know each other:rainbowwild:

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Twilight made entire town have a fist fight over a doll. It probably wasn't as bad as raped but lucky Celestia came before the real blood start to spill.

I love the idea It turns an old trope up on the head they were not smart enough to figure out what the trigger was but they were smart enough to trick Twilight in rainbow into giving them basically everything they wanted.

Not really surprising starlight would have friends like them.

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Yeaaahhh and Twilight wasn't really the sanest pony at that time when she did that so I guess it kinda gets a pass :twilightblush:


" they were not smart enough to figure out what the trigger was but they were smart enough to trick Twilight in rainbow"

In a way, they figured what the trigger was, either their names or the mind controlling thing. Twilight left it ambiguous and they didn't want to find what exactly the trigger was due to obvious reasons.

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If you do make a part three of this and it's not called the bimbles strike back Star wars reference I'm going to be highly disappointed

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Both stories were commissions (by different people, mind you), so if someone commissions a 3rd part I will gladly make it, and yeah I'll also keep that title in mind :rainbowlaugh:

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