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Balgie


just some random s̶i̶m̶p̶ devoted Chrysalis follower

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It has been one thousand years after the fateful encounter between the two sisters. The world now shrouded in everlasting veil of shadow, however fear not the darkness that embrace you but the eternal wrath of the gazing light.


The world has become surprisingly industrialized with most things now being powered through diesel, although the social hierarchy has become radically different, as the Bat Pony now consider themselves to be the chosen people by the goddess of the night herself is treated with respect and having considerable authority, while other ponies kinds such as Earth Pony and Pegasus are mostly seen as dispensable worker. The only exception is the unicorn due to their aptitude in magic.


The story follows a promising unicorn by the name of Twilight Sparkle who is supposed to navigate her life in a study environment but due to some forsaken luck, she ends up having to traverse around the land to continue her study.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 5 )

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thank you so much for reading! :twilightsmile:

Comment posted by chicanery deleted March 22nd

Ok I'm interested, although I noticed that you switch the narration from third to second person quite a few times in the story?

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Oh I think that an oversight on my part, could you point to me these instance of switching to second person?

But anyway thank for reading! :heart:

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