This story is a sequel to Pooltoy Predicament
An earth pony called Turnip Seed, a friend of Flash Point, wants to spend the winter as a pool toy at the water park. In order to avoid the perils of Flash's previous adventure, they both sign a contract with the water park. In return for entertaining the visitors, the park employees will keep them safe from harm. Flash Point and Turnip Seed then find out the hard way what life as an inflatable pony is like, as their so-called winter holiday turns out to be something more than they had expected.
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Fun read keep it up.
A pretty great sequel! I really enjoyed the way you're toying with the perspective of permanence, yet are eventually able to provide a (sorta) happy ending.
Hope your next story will be just as enjoyable (whether it features Flash and Turnip again or not).
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Thanks! I left the ending slightly open because I'm turning this story into a trilogy. I've had so much fun coming up with these shenanigans. I think I'll try writing something different after that.
I don't want to let any characters die in my stories. Not only is it extremely off-putting, doing that would also instantly end the story. It's way more fun to make the characters worry about what might happen to them. That way I get the best of both worlds—I can describe events that have permanent consequences without the need to follow through with them.
Pretty messed up of a pool to just backstab them cause of the "Haha loophole." and then go and turn them into the property. hehe, lawsuit.
Very satisfying, I'd like do see more.