A unicorn called Flash Point has been invited by his friends to join them for a trip to the beach. Being a poor swimmer, he brews a magic potion that he hopes will improve his swimming skills. Testing the finished potion at a local water park goes awry when the potion transforms him into a pool toy. Flash Point then finds out the hard way what life as an inflatable unicorn is like, as he tries to come up with a way to turn himself back into a normal pony.
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That was a nice and well-written story. I always enjoy reading about that kind of predicament. Hope you'll get more ideas like that!
Lovely cover art as well. Was it yours or did someone else make it for you? In the latter case, I'd love to know the artist (unless they'd rather stay anonymous, of course).
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I'm glad you liked it. Maybe I'll write more transformation stories in the future, if I happen to come up with interesting scenarios.
I made the cover art myself. I'm planning to get back into drawing again. Any art I make will be released under the name Flarescale.
Will there be a sequel of some kind for this do you think? Or strictly a one off?
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I have an idea for a follow-up story. It will probably be shorter than the original, so I'll post it as a new chapter when it's finished.
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...personally my favorite tfs are the human to animal kind(tg is fine i just don't have a preference) and Basically anything animate
This was a fun read! What a cute couple of OCs :)
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So writer and artist? I admire your talent.
I'll be looking forward to read your future stories.
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Awesome! Another thing to look forward to.
Tbh I have never even thought about pool toy/any inanimate object fetish transformations before (except underwear.) This was really a good read though! I didn't know what I was expecting but I quite liked the hurtcore-esque aspect of all the twisting and crushing from the foals and worker ponies, the extreme painful inflation and popping. The conflict also actually seems like a genuine FiM plot, which I feel like is quite rare when it comes to a lot of fan fic on here. Many, many kudos
I feel like I'm interested in more pool toy transformations now lol? And will most definitely be on the lookout for more of your stuff.
I’m glad stories like these are still being made!
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The sequel has been released. I got a little carried away and it turned out even longer than the original. So, I posted it as a separate fic instead.
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I'm glad you liked it.