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Izzie1302


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In a world where pegasi, earth ponies and unicorns hate each other, we follow the lives of three different ponies: Rainbow Dash is a pegasus whose dream has always been to enter the army of Pegasalia, the Wonderbolts, and fight for her land against the powerful empire of Unicornia; Applejack is an earth pony that has always worked to provide for her family and wants nothing more than to see them safe and being free from the pegasi control; and Twilight Sparkle, a gifted unicorn with humble origins, only cares about her studies about magic and ancient history. The path of these three ponies are going to cross as a great war approaches the land of Equestria, and with that, big mysteries about the past of their very land are going to unfold.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 6 )

Excellent start, this AU is very interesting and with a lot of potential to be exploited, I look forward to the next chapter

11790912
Thanks a lot, this is my first time writing a fanfic about MLP and I'm really excited about this idea, I'm glad you liked it!

11790927
Good luck, try to be as basic as possible at the beginning, many times authors make too many plot threads in their stories and lose their meaning at the end.

11791199
I already know what to do for the first 20 chapters or so, but I have so many future ideas that I don't really know which one I'm going to follow yet 😂 so many possibilities

11791222
In situations like this it would be a good idea to present the ideas in perhaps a sequel if I am VERY long term, or perhaps Spin-off type stories where you narrate about secondary characters with very long or complicated background stories

This is super interesting!

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