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Just For Kicks

Rainbow Dash has been one of the best fliers and trainers in Equestria for as long as she could remember. Even Celestia and Luna know this. So what happens when they offer her the deal of a lifetime?

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DRKSEEKERS

DRKSEEKERS #1 · Sep 30th, 2012 · · · Unnamed (auto named on publish) ·

This is my very first Fic so i would appreciate any constructive criticism.

Archivist Nightwatch

Archivist Nightwatch #2 · Oct 6th, 2012 · · · Unnamed (auto named on publish) ·

Not Bad. one of the things that got me was the constant use of Italics instead of " " to talk. I felt like they were saying things in their heads as that is what Italics is used for 90% of the time.

Bronzedragon

Bronzedragon #3 · Oct 6th, 2012 · · · Unnamed (auto named on publish) ·

Besides the aforementioned things those “line break” things are annoying and I think that you trust spell check too much. (Two for to) couple of others . That sort of thing, not a bad premise will wait to see what happens before I vote up or down.

DRKSEEKERS