Thanks for the update!

Nice chapter all around, a couple of the explanations felt bit force fed in a way (kind of like an infodump from the mouths of the ponies, making the conversations feel a little less robotic and more energietic-if that makes sense-would help that) but other than that I'm enjoying this story quite well

Does the character on the cover remind me of Harry Potter?

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Yea unfortunately wanted to get the basic info across but couldn't really work it into a natural way without pulling in characters early to give it. So I bit the bullet to give an dump of info which can later be worked on. Literally sat for a few hours trying to think of a way to make it flow before throwing in the towel with it annoyingly enough

Great chap keep up the good work looking forward to more

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You Are doing wonderfull am hooked on this story

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Fair enough, finding ways to put that stuff in seamlessly suuuuucks.

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Yea and I feel like it's a bandaid you have to rip off early before it becomes overwhelming