A threat has returned to Equestria. Celestia and the Elements of Harmony rush to stop it, but this threat may be too big for them to handle.
I started working on this before Season 3 came out, so this is based only on Season 2 canon.
Edited and proofread by Rabbitude101, Mr.RealityTheBrony, and Daetrin.
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Starswirl is Celestia's father and became Discord? Awesome.
Chrysalis is Celestia's beloved older sister who was banished 1000 years ago? Awesome.
Celestia caused both aformentioned problems AND Nightmare Moon out of jealousy? Super Awesome.
All of it being revealed in one paragraph? Overwhelming.
Hidden seventh element? Painful.
Lots of potential here, but it needs some serious refining. Still, the unique plot twists earn you a
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Also its alicorn not pegacorn, unless you are doing it intentionally.
Lolz I want to preread!
Before, she could stop herself, Celestia wrapped her arms around the sobbing mare and began to cry herself.
Before, she could stop herself... how dramatic! How touching!
#ThatWasSarcasmInCaseYouDidn'tGetIt and yeah, extra comma after "before"? Whoops! 
>> Jet SO changed your name? And I wanna preread.
it was... meh... but its not bad so i'll keep n eye on it