Just before the events of My Little Pony: A New Generation, Sunny and her future friends are transported to a room to react to their future, joining them are some very special guests from the ancient past
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You mean descendant?
Could you do Watching Make Your Mark (The specials and episodes) and Tell your Tale episodes and have the Main 6 and Mane 5 watch in the theater like with this one?
I usually don't like characters react to stories, but it's so much fun watching the two generations interact and the Mane 6 reacting to the events of the future. This was a fun read! Even if it's very obvious that you took most of the dialogues from the story where Sunset Shimmer goes to the G5 future.
You have an interesting story, Wordsmith. But...
The prologue started out strong but faltered real quick near the end. Weird phrasing, two different character speaking in the same paragraph or wasn't clear who was speaking, and this chapter 1...
I skipped practically all of the bold text. There is a rule FiMfiction has in place about copyrighted stuff. Putting the movie's entire transcript here and reacting to that is questionable and plainly boring.
Most of us should have seen the movie by now, so doing a summary of the events is much more preferrable and to the point. Heck, because of this, I skipped all the way to the end of this chapter and noticed not all bold text are completely copy pasted. Which is a tell that this method of writing reactions is not that great.
Also, your self insert oc. There was no indication that this fic would feature such non-canon characters as the main driving point of the story. You should have added the OC tag otherwise people are going in fully expecting official characters pushing the narrative only.
React fics are relatively new here, but that doesn't mean I am going to softly criticise this.