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Aura Chime
I am a unicorn mare who was born without the ability to speak. My specialty came about when trying to find my voice. I can create an aura of magic which vibrates with energy allowing me to speak.
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How did you come up with Callum's name?
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Honestly it just kind of popped in my head. There were a few times where I wondered if I should change it to something else, but it felt unique enough to keep it.
Is this going to get a sequel? I could see a good story resulting from this. Heck it could go a few different routes to. Most of the thoughts i have though would revolve around Twilight being pregnant since he came inside. There is the romance path where Callum and Twilight start to develop feelings for each other while he is trying to help her through the pregnancy. Then there is the slice of life option. Could have Callum taking care of the foal after the birth. Twilight doesn't want a child from someone she doesn't love but didn't want to abort. Instead of adoption though Callum steps up and uses the money built up throughout the pregnancy to get a place for him and his foal. Then there is the last and personally my least favorite path. This deals with an ostracized Callum due to the effects of Twilight's experiment. And unfortunately that also seems like the most likely one with how the ending went. Heck Twilight doesn't even have to play the part of victim. She could even be trying to explain that it wasn't his fault and explain the situation, but her friends and the town are too concerned with trying to get Callum to leave. The only problem is he can't. He doesn't have their currency because he can't get to the bank and he can't get a job when everyone hates him. There are several other paths that this could go but I can't think of them right now. Your the author though soif youdecided to make a sequel that is entirely your choice. I am just a guy who asked a question and let his imagination do the rest of the talking lol.
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Hmm well, when I was writing this story the only thing I could think of for a sequal, or even a continuation was a badly generic potion is used and Callum ends up getting with the other ponies one by one, but I wasn't in the mood for that so I just ended it as I did not want to do just do pure smut. I had not even given myself time to think over things to write up something different. You have quite a few good ideas, I was once told (when inspired) I seemed kind of decent at writing romance. Perhaps I could go for something like what you suggested, build things up over time, but that would take me quite a lot of time to work out how to write out a story with this scenario.
Thank you, I will consider some things, but right now I will have to put it on the side as I have some RL issues to try and resolve first before I can get back into writing fully.
Thank you for seeing more in this story than I did, it gives me a little bit of confidence to try to push myself to do more.
Aura Chime.
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Hey I'll tell you what I tell all the authors that I read stories from. You're your number one priority. You do what you need to do and your readers will understand and support that. You provide stories not because you have to but because you want to. That shows that you care.
As for the whole confidence thing, good be confident. You are a good author. I can and will wait to see what you come up with next because I know that a good story takes time. Take care of yourself.