• Member Since 25th Sep, 2020
  • offline last seen Dec 22nd, 2023

rayanscott


English is not my native language, but I hope you like my stories. all comments are welcome to help me.

Comments ( 13 )

where can i get the cover?

That artwork strongly reminds me of Jessica Rabbit from 'Who Framed Rodger Rabbit?'

I would recommend a proofreader to fix some of the more daring issues, cause I see potential in this story.

Like a rough diamond, this needs some edge cutting, especially with the grammar.

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If you mean the image you can go to derpibooru and look for it in the cadence category, sooner or later it will come out, I hope it helps you.

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I really wouldn't know what to answer, this was original to me, but if you say it's similar it's purely coincidental.

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That's right, this story is for the contest, could you help me by telling me how to send it to the group folder?

Interesting story about how there are a lot of flashbacks. When I read this it reminds me of... Remember me in a time of a flashback! lol!

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Thanks, I did it to show more of Cadence and how far she can go without being limited to a certain pony, if she's the princess of love, I'll show you some of her many adventures.

My friend, this is a good first impression. I can't wait to see your next work.
By the way, you can tell that his fic has so many dislikes, don't worry, the story is excellent, it's just that not everyone usually likes NTR (I'm a love-hate type)

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Thank you very much for your words, my next project will be better and without NTR, I'm not a fan of that either, I just did it to see if I'm capable of more.

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I wouldn't mind a sequel to this

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I'm very glad you liked it, I don't think I'm going to make a sequel, but anything is possible.

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I think the a sequel could have a lot of potential or maybe at least a bonus chapter involving the night guards.

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