Twilight's determined to figure out why Applejack keeps inviting her over. It's just not like her. Something has to be wrong, right? And for her to be acting this... weird, it probably is worth worrying about.
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Dunno why nobody has commented on this yet, so I feel honored to be the first! I love the way you set out their progression in the relationship, It just felt very realistic. Too many authors will create some contrived problem so that there's a point of contention to write around and make it all dramatic.
I loved the maturity that you gave them all, they actually felt like adults, which is just so refreshing. Can't wait to see what you did with the next one!