If anyone has an idea on who the artist is on my cover, I'd be much obliged if you could let me know. I just happend on the pic via google, and would love to link to the guy's other stuff. Other than that, thanks for reading!

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Looks like John Joseco's art.

One of the much better and more immersive humanized titles I've read. You've caught my attention, good sir! Now let's see if you can keep it ;) Watching, liked and favorited.

Hmm... Not bad, I guess. I'm not gonna like or fav it, but I'm unconvinced that it deserves three dislikes.

This is really awsome. Keep it up.

I liked this story, it's a well done humanized story so far.
I'll check back later for some more, not sure what you did wrong to deserve those dislikes though

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A little bit of everything, I'm guessing.

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Edit: and i looked through all 16 pages of that guys DA page, and didn't see it. Not that I minded looking through his work--I didn't realize he did like, half the pics I have saved to my computer, haha. But a few of them did seem to match his style, so I'm going to assume it's him and do a link to his DA page. Thank you so much for that, mate!

The synopsis caught my attention so I placed this on my read later list since it isn't complete yet... but due to your shameless self promotion I'm going to read it now.
Hah, Yggdrassil. Nice choice for a cow name.
Mhmm, seems good so far. It's all pretty solid. Can't really comment on much since it has only just begun.

Some editorial notes:
There were a number of wordy things in here but I don't want to get into all of them in a comment, so here are a couple of notes that were more straightforward.

-“Your in Saint Joseph, Ms. Apple" -Should be you're
-"She had saw it from the road, but it was felt so much bigger now that she was on its hallowed ground" -Yeah, sentences can get all effed up if you edit the wording and forget to recheck it. Happens to all of us. Should be something more like "She had seen it from the road, but it felt so much larger (or so much more prominent/imposing) now that she was on its hallowed ground.
-student counsel -I think you mean 'council'. Council is a group that deliberates or administrates (and it's student council in real life), counsel is advice or one who advises. I double checked this in the dictionary to make extra sure of their use.

I'll read more tomorrow since it's getting late. Take it easy~

Very intriguing. I like it, your writing is very fluent.

I'm in a serious Rarijack phase, so it's a shame I didn't get to this until now. I see much promise here. Also, that picture is to die for. But that's not what I'm here for. 100k words scares me, but I'll get there eventually. Until then, looks good. Hopefully, I get to it in... several months, given how many Read Later stories I have (though compared to my friends, it's nothing. Oh well). Heh.

Well, it is wonderful but the rampant Christian mentions are assaulting my minds eye

Room 1408...
I see what you did there!

3761591 same here I don't mind a writer doing it if its their faith but if it gets over used it mite kill it for me (even fake ones named after Faust get out of hand at times)

Well it took me long enough but I'm finally going to start reading this one!
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0_0 I started reading this over others on my list cause something told me to and I must say...I am impressed. This seems so...so...professional. Must read MOAR!!!