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This felt appropriate, considering Jack is watching an opera and this chapter deserves a round of applause:
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very nice chapter, i like very much the "Pendragon's Legacy" things
keep going
About time this updated. Seriously, it was regular updates for quite a while, then nothing for about a month, and then you come back with three chapters.
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Take it from me, man. It takes a LONGASS TIME to make something that's GOOD. To paraphrase Shigeru Miyamoto, a delayed story can eventually be good, but bad fanfiction is bad forever.
That scene with the magic was pretty neat. and I like the idea of Dash as a detective.
Man, I love your portrayals of the princesses and their legendary weapons. It's funny/cute that Luna gets embarrassed so easily.
Yep, story is getting more intriguing. I like it
One small potential note:
"into her own disillusioned world"
Is this really the word you wanted here? Disillusioned is basically when something turns out to be less good as you had thought. Not really something you'd need treatment for. Basically just sounds like she's a cranky old lady.
Delusional or something would be a closer fit from what it sounds like you're trying to describe since that's something related to actual pathological conditions and is often treated.
Ah... I see what you did with the Arthurian Legends tie in. The character development feels natural, a smidge forced in spots, but nothing worse than the show does for plot's sake. More of a 'who's playing the cleric' thing. Also, I love it when people go in-depth with magic!! THANK YOU FOR THAT!!
Pendragon...... This simple word is tearing me apart where have I heard this?! Must have been a book because most of what I do is read but seriously where I have heard this name?
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Pendragon as in King Arthur Pendragon, of which the Arthurian legend revolves.
Interesting story so far. I'm liking the development and going to guess, based off this chapter, the bad guy is the Discord equivalent.
3576698 yeah, the white goatee and hatred of fat-ass but not Luna proves that, by why wine and steak? And not chocolate milk and candy?
Does that make Luna's 'short sword' Carnwennan?
Yes. This I like.