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Vonpanzer
Here to write stories about famous Historical war figures (Maybe some fictional ones as well)
Vonpanzer
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I love the story so far, I just have one criticism, the chapters are too short.
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Yeah, I know, this is my first time writing so thanks for the criticism, I'm planning to make longer chapters, figured make the chapters short to start, If you have any idea's let me know, I want to hear other users ideas
Beutiful story
But so short?
A chapter should be at least 1.k words
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Yeah, I know, I'm working on a longer Chapter
One question,
Is the rifle that Albert uses a lebel 86?
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Yeah it is, I figured that it would make the most sense since, you know, ww1/the great war and all.
Very nice
An interesting idea I'm looking forward to seeing where your going with this.
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Thanks, I'm still working on the next chapter, but I needed a small break
“Speak for yourself” TWANG the metal pip strikes again