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Kyoten Fuyu


Writing is my passion... same with Coke Cola, Video Games, and Off-brand Anime

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If this is a Spyro crossover, their names are spelled Cynder and Malefor.

(Might not read it coz I don't like NSFW stories, but this caught my eye and I thought I'd offer constructive criticism)

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His last one was great id had to admit i almost got thrown of by the tag as well but totaly worth it!! What im trying to say is give it a shot.

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Not a SPyro Crossover.but I did borrow some ideas from there. And there won't be much NSFW stuff in regards to sexy-times, if that's what puts you off. Still, I hope you enjoy it all the same. Cindaria is a very brutal individual.:moustache:

"You okay there, Sugarcube? Ya' look like you've seen a ghost," Applejack asked softly, pulling Twilight from her thoughts. She turned around to see the country girl's summer green eyes staring warmly at her. Twilight let out a breath she didn't know she was holding and replied.

"I'm a little worried about the strange girl who fought Nightmare Moon and kept her at bay while we figured out how to use the Elements of Harmony. I've never seen someone take on an Aetherial before and win so easily."You okay there, Sugarcube? Ya' look like you've seen a ghost," Applejack asked softly, pulling Twilight from her thoughts. She turned around to see the country girl's summer green eyes staring warmly at her. Twilight let out a breath she didn't know she was holding and replied.

"I'm a little worried about the strange girl who fought Nightmare Moon and kept her at bay while we figured out how to use the Elements of Harmony. I've never seen someone take on an Aetherial before and win so easily.

Why is this repeating section here?

Her palms were sweaty, knees weak, arms were heavy, she didn't know why she was there, vomit threatened to come out, her mom's spaghetti

I freaking love you for this!

Very promising! Tracked and liked!

Initially I was a little sad when I saw how the story’s plot changed completely but after seeing how badass the main character is and how much depth the story has I really don’t mind.

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Cindaria is a very brutal individual.

BLOOD FOR THE BLOOD GOD! SKULLS FOR THE SKULL THRONE! MILK FOR THE KHORNE FLAKES!

Thankfully, I protected me and saber from the effects, but we still had to view the strange sight of a Manticore being brutally pounded by a Basilisk on the way to the castle. That and a pack of Timber Wolves dry-humping the trees, Cats with Dogs, lizard-chickens with Pheonixes, and crocodiles made of stone with fish. I thought I saw everything messed-up in the world and clearly, I haven't. I needed a drink after causing Animals Gone Wild.

Well i dont want to see what creatures will come out of that:rainbowderp:

I love it, keep it up Winter.:twilightsmile:

Please keep writing the wonderful stories that pop out of your head. :pinkiehappy:

The Last and Most Important Rule of Combat: If there is a magical McGuffin capable of doing the impossible, and pointed at you. Run like a little bitch until you can destroy them.

A rule that many people seam to forget

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Good to know. It was a bit wiered at the first moments. And to be onest Here name sounds almoust like Cynder (Don't Help).

Introduction, added 6th May 2018
A piece of the Past - PT 1, added 5th Nov 2017

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XD I know, it's weird and awesome.

Great story so far i will be keeping up with it!!

I usually don't like intermissions. But you really know how to keep things interesting :D , looking forward to more of the past and present of this story!

When will this update? Been a long while

Certainly a much better design than the original.
It's fluid, spelt correctly and shows that you've grown in your skill. So all I have to say is, well done.

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