• Member Since 9th Sep, 2012
  • offline last seen May 15th, 2014

Eastwing


Just here ta read

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A mysterious colt awakes in an alleyway having no memory whatsoever. No name, no clue as to where he is or how he got there.

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 16 )

Originality flows through this story, Not. Anyways, I don't really care, I think it's ok but, it's the classic 'Pony-wakes-up-with-amnesia' story.

1331047

...You're right...I can't believe I didn't realize that...:facehoof:
Then again, this is the first fanfic I've ever written. I guess I can't expect it to be amazing.
If anything, I hope it'll become more original down the road...

1351960 Heh, don't worry, your doing a very good job for your first story (Mine was shit.....). Anyways, I look forward to updates!

1352057

Chapter two is up. Three is coming soon. :pinkiehappy:

"Then both heard four clops in rapid-succession...from the balcony."

I lolled at that line:rainbowlaugh:

>>Rainfall96

When you were talking about sharp claws and razor teeth, where you talking about the amnesia monster.:applejackunsure:

also how do you comment:applejackunsure::derpytongue2:

1362492

The teeth and claws thing, was referenced to a dragon. Foreshadowing...

And "Also how do you comment:applejackunsure::derpytongue2:"
I don't understand...

1362576

What I meant by comment was respond to certain comments in the list.

1409390

Click the two bubbles to the right side of the comment you wish to comment on (?)
Right?:derpyderp2:

Thanks for the tip but right before I posted my last comment I found out.

Sorry, I guess?:applejackunsure:

This is a really good opening for your first fic keep it up

Awwwwwwww its over:fluttercry:

1514205

Thanks. And it's not over. I left it open like that for a reason. :ajsmug:

Your concept is good but your spacing is frustrating.

Divide them into paragraphs and separate who's talking. It'll help out a ton. :raritywink:

Also is he a colt or a filly? Your saying both to reference him a lot. a better word to use besides filly is foal.

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