Alabaster Star lost his wife a year ago to Diamond Dogs who claimed to be acting in the name of Nightmare Moon. Now that Luna is back and on the side of good once again, Alabaster doesn't know what to think upon being reassigned to a certain pos
Every day Celestia shares light and love with all the ponies of Equestria. In turn, they share their love with her. Still, the princess senses there is something missing. Something her heart longs for.
Cale was just a normal guy. Mid twenties, decent job, his own place. Nothing special. But one morning he vanished, only to wake up in the mystical world of Equestria. Meeting Celestia, he'll find that his life will never be the same again.
A King woke up from a coma and realizes that the legacy of his ancestors is threaten. To protect his subjects, and their nation he send a messanger to Equestria... hoping that his pride did not mean the end of Nocturia.
...You're right...I can't believe I didn't realize that... Then again, this is the first fanfic I've ever written. I guess I can't expect it to be amazing. If anything, I hope it'll become more original down the road...
Originality flows through this story, Not. Anyways, I don't really care, I think it's ok but, it's the classic 'Pony-wakes-up-with-amnesia' story.
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...You're right...I can't believe I didn't realize that...
Then again, this is the first fanfic I've ever written. I guess I can't expect it to be amazing.
If anything, I hope it'll become more original down the road...
1351960 Heh, don't worry, your doing a very good job for your first story (Mine was shit.....). Anyways, I look forward to updates!
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Chapter two is up. Three is coming soon.
"Then both heard four clops in rapid-succession...from the balcony."
I lolled at that line
>>Rainfall96
When you were talking about sharp claws and razor teeth, where you talking about the amnesia monster.
also how do you comment
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The teeth and claws thing, was referenced to a dragon. Foreshadowing...
And "Also how do you comment"
I don't understand...
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What I meant by comment was respond to certain comments in the list.
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Click the two bubbles to the right side of the comment you wish to comment on (?)
Right?
Thanks for the tip but right before I posted my last comment I found out.
Sorry, I guess?
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This is a really good opening for your first fic keep it up
Awwwwwwww its over
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Thanks. And it's not over. I left it open like that for a reason.
Your concept is good but your spacing is frustrating.
Divide them into paragraphs and separate who's talking. It'll help out a ton.
Also is he a colt or a filly? Your saying both to reference him a lot. a better word to use besides filly is foal.