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What Almost Was

Warning: Story contains themes of murder, mild and suggested torture, and moderate blood shed. Read at your own risk.

On the night that Nightmare Moon staged her coup, Celestia failed to banish her. This is the aftermath.

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WrathOfGod519

WrathOfGod519 #1 · Sep 19th, 2012 · · ·

Pretty silly and out of character. Still a good read however. Could you describe the torture of Celestia in more detail?

unknownmercury

unknownmercury #2 · Sep 19th, 2012 · · ·

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Sorry it's out of character, I was trying my best to capture Nightmare Moon. As for Celestia's torture, I might try, but I've never been great with torture scenes.

WrathOfGod519

WrathOfGod519 #3 · Sep 19th, 2012 · · ·

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Well you did pretty much got nightmare moon spot on. Ridiculousness aside I'd certainty read it again.

Also you should make it more of a challenge for nightmare moon, and not have it all go her way (unless that's what you were going for and this is a one shot. you don't want this turning into a power-trip fic)

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