11217591 Displaced is like an Isekai, except there's lore behind it. There's also the fact the Displaced may visit other worlds and meet other displaced.
This is good ! This is hilarious and stupid and i Love it ! all the humor , the godly banter, All of it keep going this is a great chill and giggle like a school girl fic.
11217744 Isekai can be good. Yeah, the formula for them is generally the same. But they do try and mix it up in some way between different shows. When it comes to writing some weird stuff, nobody will ever beat Japan.
11217929 True. But much like most Displaced, too many Isekais make the main character overpowered, give them a harem, make them gain powers too quickly with zero effort. There is some good isekais though, but they're hard to come. Like Overlord and that one isekai i'm having trouble remembering that involves the main character who ends up waking up at the start of the after every time he dies.
Welp... I'm sold. I better go grab a poncho and an umbrella cuz I know I'm in the splash zone for this one. Should probably grab an oxygen tank too considering I'm going to be dying of laughter.
11217670 yes, that's a typical displaced, being they become ONE overpowered being, like one of the displaced here can turn into ALL the gods from 'SMITE'.
what you need to understand is that in those other displaced stories, no matter what, the overpowered person is still just one guy.
Super fanfic d'habitude les fanfic avec des dieux ils sont pas super mais franchement tu as aimé captiver dès le premier chapitre je recommande à tout le monde de faire ce truc c'est un vrai c'est vrai bon j'abuse un peu mais j'aime vraiment le truc quoi
11218123 да, для этого мне понадобится переводчик.
11218112 désolé de dire que je n'ai pas de calendrier de téléchargement défini, comme beaucoup de mes lecteurs sur d'autres fanfictions peuvent en témoigner.
Note: NO I do not speak EITHER of these languages!!
I havent laughed this hard to a 40K story since Lord Telis.
As for overpowered?
Nurgle as Farming gets All The Apples. Slanesh get All The Changelings. Khorne gets Griffons, Minotaurs, Dragons? Tzeentch gets Twilight, Starlight, Sunset, Moondancer, and Grandmaster Lyra?
So, who gets Spike and Pinkie?
Unless this is the lead up to Luna getting kicked out a thousand years ago, in which case,
11218228 Hey author, I would suggest you delete this comment and block this account. It's a bot, one that posts to a phishing website. The mods mentioned an issue with these accounts but don't have a fix. The best we can do is delete/block so no one gets their shit stolen.
Also, this really only seems to be an issue if you end up on the front page, which you are currently so be ready for more comments like this. I regularly get a slew of these jerks.
I really like it, while you may not be as experienced (like most) what you have is a great fantasy... And a load of bravery for even attempting to do a sex god and somehow actually managing it to make sense. Not a lot, but reader will allow some unsensecicle things if they are 'cool' enough. Also some criticism, try making shorter sentences. I know I ain't the best, but do as I say, not as I do.
displaced story? you mean an isekai
Here's hoping Celestia gets imprisoned when she has to urinate.
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Yep! What a too paranoid Bitch!!!!!!!!
That doesn't really sound that different from most displaced, actually... Please respond to this comment.
11217591
Displaced is like an Isekai, except there's lore behind it. There's also the fact the Displaced may visit other worlds and meet other displaced.
I like this so far
I think he just had the best time in his life. Please let Tzeentch use his sorcery to create the ents from Middle Earth to live in the everfree forest
I love this story, this is gonna be one of the few good Displaced stories aint it? Please don't ruin it with crossovers pleaseee.
So much glorious chaos! ITS BEAUTIFUL!!!!
This is good ! This is hilarious and stupid and i Love it ! all the humor , the godly banter, All of it keep going this is a great chill and giggle like a school girl fic.
Could someone provide links to the pictures used in the cover? They look awesome.
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Isekai can be good. Yeah, the formula for them is generally the same. But they do try and mix it up in some way between different shows. When it comes to writing some weird stuff, nobody will ever beat Japan.
Love it so far! Just don't go the Grimdark or Moronic Sitcom path, please? I see potential for both, but hope they won't be.
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True. But much like most Displaced, too many Isekais make the main character overpowered, give them a harem, make them gain powers too quickly with zero effort. There is some good isekais though, but they're hard to come. Like Overlord and that one isekai i'm having trouble remembering that involves the main character who ends up waking up at the start of the after every time he dies.
Welp... I'm sold. I better go grab a poncho and an umbrella cuz I know I'm in the splash zone for this one. Should probably grab an oxygen tank too considering I'm going to be dying of laughter.
Quite interested to see where this goes.
It was good I can't wait for the next chapter keep up the good work
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yes, that's a typical displaced, being they become ONE overpowered being, like one of the displaced here can turn into ALL the gods from 'SMITE'.
what you need to understand is that in those other displaced stories, no matter what, the overpowered person is still just one guy.
not FOUR.
Do they Celestia, do they really?
This... now this is good content!
now who is this entering the ring?
Super fanfic d'habitude les fanfic avec des dieux ils sont pas super mais franchement tu as aimé captiver dès le premier chapitre je recommande à tout le monde de faire ce truc c'est un vrai c'est vrai bon j'abuse un peu mais j'aime vraiment le truc quoi
Et si tu pouvais me dire quand est-ce que tu publies des nouveaux chapitres ça serait sympa tu sais une fois par semaine une fois par jour
11218112
Говори на всем понятном языке, это будет вежливо.
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Re:Zero?
11218123
да, для этого мне понадобится переводчик.
11218112
désolé de dire que je n'ai pas de calendrier de téléchargement défini, comme beaucoup de mes lecteurs sur d'autres fanfictions peuvent en témoigner.
Note: NO I do not speak EITHER of these languages!!
This is entertaining. Please, continue.
aight, to the favourites list you go
I havent laughed this hard to a 40K story since Lord Telis.
As for overpowered?
Nurgle as Farming gets All The Apples.
Slanesh get All The Changelings.
Khorne gets Griffons, Minotaurs, Dragons?
Tzeentch gets Twilight, Starlight, Sunset, Moondancer, and Grandmaster Lyra?
So, who gets Spike and Pinkie?
Unless this is the lead up to Luna getting kicked out a thousand years ago, in which case,
Who gets Pinkie?
sorry I'm not very good in English I forgot that not everyone speaks French
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Changelings, dude. Change. So it's Slaanesh and Tzeench.
11218131
That's the one, thank you.
DO NOT CLICK THAT LINK JAMES GILLIGAN POSTED, ITS A FAKE SITE CALLED FIMFICTON THAT ASKES YOU TO LOG IN!
Hrm.... Princess Twilight, Priestess of Tzeench. I'd love to see the author's take on that.
And just like that, you sold me.
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Hey author, I would suggest you delete this comment and block this account. It's a bot, one that posts to a phishing website. The mods mentioned an issue with these accounts but don't have a fix. The best we can do is delete/block so no one gets their shit stolen.
Also, this really only seems to be an issue if you end up on the front page, which you are currently so be ready for more comments like this. I regularly get a slew of these jerks.
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thanks for the heads up, didn't really reach the website because my browser refused to connect.
thanks Firefox! saved my bacon (although I know better than to try and log-in to sketchy sites.)
11218322
what, and teats/crotchtits ain't sexy?
please
11218315
Change, and Intelligence?
11218404
hey come on man, don't judge someone for their tastes.
let people like what they like.
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And lies.
keep at it
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pathetic reason and you know it
I really like it, while you may not be as experienced (like most) what you have is a great fantasy... And a load of bravery for even attempting to do a sex god and somehow actually managing it to make sense. Not a lot, but reader will allow some unsensecicle things if they are 'cool' enough.
Also some criticism, try making shorter sentences. I know I ain't the best, but do as I say, not as I do.
I am so into this fic! Can’t wait for more, the comedy is gold, the memes!
Also, I pictured this when they first appeared in the Warp.
preview.redd.it/e2o99i4tlmo51.png?width=960&crop=smart&auto=webp&s=9921b21ae39ad62e02ca9e911685a4cc7d03d787
I like
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I am VERY upset I didn't find this picture before! do you think people will let me get away with changing out the cover art for that one?