A Simple Repair

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KingSombraTheTyrantRuler

KingSombraTheTyrantRuler #1 · Jan 24th, 2022 · · · In the heat ·

Mint couldn’t resist those lips of his. They were soft, warm from tea and how the colt kissed surprised him. He was no amateur. Their tongues wrestled for a solid minute when Puff finally pulled back. He looked at him with a bright blush, like he also wasn’t expecting Mint to be that good at kissing. The young adult earth pony looks down, between his own forelegs. He was already hard. He peaked to the side, towards Mint and he noticed that he also had the same problem as he does.

1. It should be hindlegs, not forelegs.

2. It should be peeked, not peaked.

KingSombraTheTyrantRuler

KingSombraTheTyrantRuler #2 · Jan 24th, 2022 · · · In the heat ·

Puff sat down on the floor and gently spread his new friend’s forelegs, exposing his member for him to see. Then he moves his nose closer, taking a breath of his musk immediately nuzzling his rod. Mint looks at Puff, blushing like crazy. Their eyes meet, when Puff gently presses Mint’s member against his face, nuzzling it.

1. Hindlegs, not forelegs.

KingSombraTheTyrantRuler

KingSombraTheTyrantRuler #3 · Jan 24th, 2022 · · · In the heat ·

Btw, I loved this. You're getting a follow. :D

KingSombraTheTyrantRuler

KingSombraTheTyrantRuler #4 · Jan 24th, 2022 · · · In the heat ·

Also, I think you may have forgotten to mark this as complete.

Puffik

Puffik #5 · Jan 24th, 2022 · · · In the heat ·

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I am completely new to this site and writing fanfics in general.

English is not my native so I appreciate all the inputs <3 I will replace my mistakes shortly!

I'm glad you enjoyed your read, that made my day and my heart a little warmer, thank you!

KingSombraTheTyrantRuler

KingSombraTheTyrantRuler #6 · Jan 24th, 2022 · · · In the heat ·

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Ok. You're welcome.

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Mint Essence

Mint Essence #8 · Jan 24th, 2022 · · · In the heat ·

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Extremely gay and wholesome comment<3

Vauria

Vauria #9 · Jan 25th, 2022 · · · In the heat ·

Short and sweet, not bad. Might be missing something between chapter 1 and 2 though?

Puffik

Puffik #10 · Jan 25th, 2022 · · · In the heat ·

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I was thinking of a small small "in-between" but I decided to start slow and short.
When I write something else, it will be a little longer, more detailed <3

Thank you for reading, I really appreciate it!

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