• Member Since 27th Jan, 2021
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TheRayH


Spanish, Brony since 2013 and with a creative story writer (mostly). Favorite pony: Twilight Sparkle; Favorite EG: Sunset Shimmer; Favorite G5 Pony: Izzy Moonbow

Comments ( 3 )

I don't comprehend. Wallflower and Fluttershy don't have what it takes. They speak in adenine riddles and protray legendary memto with fervor. if only they could brighten their day with the power of welshman so that understanding can be comprehend. Thigh that is mysterious, it is already over.

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Ok, looks like i need to clarify something:
- 1st of all, thanks fot the comment; i've been waiting for so long for something like this.
- My idea is to tell a romantic-sexual story between the 2 shy girls and that maybe can create OOC situations. I didn't planned too much the story, it asore inside my head and i had to write it before i forget about it. Also a bit sorry i didn't answered before, some of the words you wrote are a bit confusing, i think there are some spelling errors. I'll try to make it a good story, worth to be told (and i hope i can do that).

I would recommend an editor, the opening is clunky and hard to read. Good premise though.

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