Marigold is a young earth-pony stallion who feels like his marefriend is out of his league. She's kind, pretty, and very talented. Adding onto that, she's also a Crystal Pony! Quite the gem, one might say.
Detecting the subtle signs of self-esteem issues, his marefriend invites him over to the Crystal Empire to spend some quality time together. He takes this an opportunity to figure out what he means to her.
[A Submission to the Valentine's/Hearts and Hooves Day contest]
[Rated Teen for Innuendo]
[Contest Rules in Author's Notes]
Chapters (1)
Hey!
Glad to see you've finally published this story!
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Glad to have it out. Unfortunately, I sorta had to repurpose it for the sake for this contest, so my original vision isn't exactly all there. It's better than to just leave it stagnating, unpublished and not being worked on.
Glad to see you're still around doing well (hopefully!)
That ending...omg that ending...
I was not expecting that at all.
How could I miss such an obvious connection?
Hahaha this was good
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And now you can expand if you so wish
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:o I could!