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This seems pretty good so far. Take my stars.
94761 Thanks, you really have no idea what the means to me, to know that someone enjoys it so far.
This reminds me of The Secret Life of Walter Mitty.
will there be another chapter
94906 I've never heard of the book before you just mentioned it.
95123 Yes, there will be.
Epic!
sir i demand some moar....
failure to comply will result in a horrible end
...That didn't feel necessary...
138225
I'm sorry... I couldn't handle the fact that I probably wouldn't make an ending.... 
I don't like the ending so I'm taking that off...
138251 Oh well, I was going to suggest that maybe I had been a bit rude, but if you didn't like it either...
In any case, you're the author, you decide.
One thing though, if you add that ending back, please add a sad tag (or tragedy or something, that came outta nowhere and felt like a punch to the liver).
this is good and rushed i know i do the same thing but this is still good stuff
And so you died in your dreams embrace, dreaming of things you wanted but could never have, please why have you left us, looking at our lives and loves, please come back to us our Fluttershy, please come back to the land of the living and your love.
Almost made me cry
You bursted If I could I would hug you. 
You killed her off in use the most beautiful way that just plays your heart strings like a harp.
I wish your death and life.
So saaaaaaaad
155635 You honestly don't know how happy this made me...
164403 Seriously,what made you happy?
166471 I'm not sure
I read your comment over a couple more time, then started to question if you wanted to hug me, or kill me.
166958 I want to do both, it was just so good, but I dislike people who kill off characters, but you had too. It's confusing but just take it like it's meant to be taken, a paradox.
167354 The next statement is True. The previous statement is False.
169076 yes now you're getting it
im sorry but that ending ruined it for me. should of just stopped with applejack laying next to her. Fluttershy is my favourite but that ending only left me dissapointed in how much better it could of been i it stopped one paragraph before hand.
235326 In all honesty I don't care what you guys think of the end anymore, what's done is done, and that's all there is to it.
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So basically, you're saying that if we want a happy ending, we need to find another story.
Sure.
564039 Hmmmm, I guess so
"Sad" would have been more suitable than "Dark".
I was all happy! And then I died inside... I predicted the twist, but it still put a stake through my heart
Very well written, very interesting plot. All in all, a straight up brilliantly beautiful and painfully saddening story, thank you for the feels
Masterpiece
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Get fucked