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Gutterloo: They Knew

The story of Gutterloo by jmj with an alternative ending.

(Permission has been received to post it in this way. Be sure to check out the original story!)

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jmj

jmj #1 · Sep 10th, 2021 · · · They Knew ·

This is my favorite sequel of Gutterloo. Wonderful alternate ending. Thanks for writing it.

LeylaQuartz

LeylaQuartz #2 · Sep 11th, 2021 · 1 · · They Knew ·

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Thank you for allowing me to!

Fluttercry12

Fluttercry12 #3 · Sep 26th, 2021 · 1 · · They Knew ·

I read the original and hated it too dark for me but this is much better ending thank you

LeylaQuartz

LeylaQuartz #4 · Sep 26th, 2021 · · 1 · They Knew ·

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My pleasure. Thank you for reading!

n3k1dsk1llz

n3k1dsk1llz #5 · Sep 30th, 2021 · 1 · 1 · They Knew ·

Finally remembered to read this.

This was realistic. And I liked it. Everything that happened here is exactly what would happen in this situation.

BUT

Does she leave, or doesn’t she?

You leave us with that question and it’s almost a worse feeling than the original. And if she DOES leave…..I might need to flip the table that my laptop is on.

and THAT is what makes this good.

And if you have your answer to the above question, keep it. The frustration is amazing and feeds my brain with more ideas.