The people who dislike stories without reading just because they do not like the kinks they represent should fucked in the ass with a stick.

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People will be people. Honestly I should have posted the story during a time when more stories were being posted, and thus it would be drowned out in new. That way I could have shared it with the groups where it's real audience would be. Pretty sure that's why my last story had a better like/dislike ratio.

But whatever, it is what it is. Live and learn.

Excellent read. I read your last story, and I was worried you were just going to be another one hit wonder. It's great the way you wrote Rainbow Dash in this. You made her personality compatible with her being an adult foal without her seeming out of character, while giving her and Fluttershy a believable dynamic considering their longstanding friendship. I sure hope you continue writing.

This was a really good sequel. I like how you went for something different here.

I hope you'll do more stories, either as follow-ups to this or as something completely different.

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Thanks! I wasn't sure I would make another after Evening, really. I had the first chapter sitting on my hard drive for about a year, but never got around to finishing it until now. Keeping the characters in character while doing uncharacteristic things was a challenge, so I'm glad to hear it landed.

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Thanks! I figured a perspective change was a good way to handle a sequel, as more "Rainbow Dash does baby things alone in her room" probably would have gotten stale the second time around. It was fun to have the dialogue between the two this time.

Aww so adorable

This....

This was truly adorable and stayed to the innocence of an otherwise taboo hobby.

Thank you, dear author. From the bottom of my furry, five-tailed kitsune soul. Thank you.

That’s adorable! Can’t wait for the sequel; I think… .

This fic was amazing I think it’s almost as good as the first time I read trough lords of the rings I’m a bit sad that it’s over I can’t thank you enough for everything this fic has made me feel and given to me and I hope the next one will get released soon but seeing that this one took a bit over a year to write I’m going to guess that it’s halfway done but it will surely be worth the wait thank you once more tomorrow is one of the 2 most stressful and busy days of the year so i need to get some sleep I’m thinking of read the entire fic again when I wake up before I go to work so goodnight

cute, I'll admit it!