Live is hard to Spike Drake, a young of 15 years, without magic in a world full of it. But seven girls have the power to calm down the beast inside him, if their status don´t get in the middle.
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The memories, as you will see next chapter, are pretty dangerous for everyone hahahahha, read the chp13 and you will know
Oh dear, those were some tough bloody fights. And Thunderlane was sent over the edge and into a fiery death. But he pulled off one last trick reawakening the memories of that terrible day to the girls. Now that they know how will they see Spike now? And when word of Thunderlane's death gets around what will become of Spike?
Is this a slice of life story?
Okay, here's a little theory that William and Spike tried to resuscitate their daughter/sister by doing a ritual with the auto mechanics, the rest of you know.
than the second theory that magic was created from this ritual.
It should look like this......
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Just one thing Fucked him, he'll be wanted by the police
Spike hanging off the cliff Sam don't you let go don't let go reach
Yes yes let's get it
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I don’t know why they would have a negative view of Spike when the robot malfunctioning was not his fault. But I’m sure there is more to unravel in the upcoming chapters.
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I believe in sabotage, it took a while for William to come back and the animatronic malfunctioned, just a theory.
It was a pretty eventful chapter, with a lot of fights and plot twists.
It seems that from now on Fluttershy and Zephry's relationship will be put to a huge tense. If he is going to tell his and Fluttershy's parents that she is dating nomag, then she might end being kicked out from the house. But on the other hand, Zephry might not want to break his mom and dad's heart with this shocking discovery. So what happens later in Breeze's family, depends on his actions.
Well, seems like this time Spike hadn't done intentional murder. Yeah, in a sense, he killed Thunder by dodging his attack and making Thunder fall because of that. But on that point Spike only planned to save himself from falling, not to kill Thunder. So luckily for him, the time of his intentional murder hasn't come yet. However, this murder seemed to affect Spike pretty much. It looks like something inside of him is coming back. And whatever it is, it managed to affect only powerful magic beings on Bora Bora, while the others didn't feel anything. It even seemed to cease Chrysalis' power so she had to retreat. And Discord and Fancy have to stop it before something bad happens. It seems that Spike has more secrets that readers thought...
I see that eventually, Don Bruto's gang failed their task, though I must admit, they were pretty close to a victory. Chrysalis literally had the Ruby in her hand and she even used its power. But she made a mistake. She was too overconfident, and instead of coming back to Don Bruto with the Ruby immediately, she decided to stay for a longer time, which resulted in her losing the Ruby. I'm sure, Don Bruto won't be happy.
Now the heroes will also have to figure out what to do with the Ruby. Cause there's nothing that might prevent Don Bruto's gang from trying to steal the Ruby again later. I already know why it can't be destroyed, so I guess the only option here is to get this Ruby to a such place, where no one of Don Bruto's allies will be able to find it.
So the dragons finally appeared in this story. Impressive. And Torch here is an arm dealer. Well, it seems that he knows how to spin in this world. It is lucky for Torch that Chrysalis didn't leave him and his gang and helped them escape along with her and her best soldiers.
Considering that in your world dragons rule in a lot of eastern countries, and we all know how the relationship, for example, between Russia and America go in real life, I can guess that Equerica has a pretty hard relationship with dragons as well. It is lucky that there are no wars right now. Though, thanks for Spike, Equerica has the best army in the world, so if dragons from any eastern country decided to attack Equerica, the dragons would have had a hard time.
It seems that this animatronic's attack was planned by someone. And we already can guess who planned it. Maybe one day we will find out about his motives, but it seems that on that day things didn't go as planned, because the victim on that day was someone who shouldn't have been one at all.
It's kinda sad that Thunder didn't let Spike explain what exactly happened on that day when Tank was killed. But I guess author made it intentionally, so readers wouldn't get spoilers. Nice move, hehehe)
So the Subrust was the only one of T-Wings who decided to help Harmonies. Thunder had the other thing to do, but the others just showed themselves as a cowards...well, except another one, I think...
I must admit, there's something interesting about Flash here. While Blueblood and the other members of T-Wings (except Sunbrust) were very scared of the battle, he didn't show any fear. And the reason why he decided not to help the Harmonies was not so much fear as his contempt for them. Even when Chrysalis with the power of the Ruby captured every student on the island, Flash wasn't scared at all. He was angry and worried, but not scared. All this makes me be sure in one thing: If he and Spike fought and Spike had to kill him, Flash wouldn't be begging for mercy. He would be fearlessly shouting something like: "BRING IT, YOU FILTHY NOMAG!! KILL ME!! YOU ONLY KNOW HOW TO MURDER!!"
I don't know what brought so much bravery into Flash, but maybe it has something to do with his past...Who knows, heheh))
So yeah, this chapter seemed to get unlucky for Spike and also for the girls, since by now the memory about one of cruel deaths came back. It's a good thing that for now nothing bad happened to them, but now they will have to live with a memory of animatronic biting off the little girl's head...Some traumas might start coming back to them since now...Maybe chapter 14 will show us how they will go through it.
This is all I wanted to say for now. Have a good time everyone!))
(Por cierto, Adagio y Aria hicieron una buena referencia a Madagascar, ¡jejejeje!)
I am so happy that my guy spike finally threw some hands he needed it. Also I honestly I thought you were going to give Thunderlane the Anakin Skywalker goes to mustifar spa treatment special. I also feel he might come comeback in some way shape or form like how Darth Maul did. And lastly next chapter when you flesh out the backstory of spikes memories will you take a page out of FMA where alchemy was true to bring back the dead but it just went too horribly wrong(Because William Affton was just plain evil by then and left spike throwing spike under the bus to suffer)
Yeah that’s where your wrong because I know 7 girls who would deeply miss him and brutally murder you and hang your corpse up for everyone to see
Well… I did need to know that or have that image in my head.
Also discord… what the fuck?!
Okay now that was a good chapter so far.
Also oh no willam Afton is back.
Well shit
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Who knows what will happen now, only the time will say it, but what I assure you is that, things are going to get interesting and hard for our little Spike and his girls hahaha
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Well, some scenes maybe, but indeed not hahaha is more Detective/Superheroe/teeneger romance/drama novel with a little fantasy hahahaha
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Well, you are not really far for the reallity hahahaha
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Maybe yes, maybe no hahahaha
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He really fight for survive hahahaha
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Go ahead and read hahahahaha
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Well, is a little difficult to say what the girls would feel, but I'm assure you that they are going to still with him and for him and viceversa hahaha
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I can't say nothing hahahaah
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Hahahaha I love your comments, it always give me some encouragement to say some spoilers so, here they are:
For the Breeze Family is going to be a hard relationship with Zephry, but I can't say no more, let's say that the nomag thing is not the only one that bother Zephry
For Spike... now things are going to get real, for now on, the entire plot will get very hard for him... thanks that the girls are there for him
Don Bruto an the Monarchs, in season 2, arebgoing to be the main villians to defeat, and thing will get hard, everything, to get that Ruby... or will another villian show up? Who knows... hahahha
Flash and Spike are going to fight, but I don't know when... but I assure you, that Thunder's fight is a camp walk compared with him hahahaha
For the part of the memory I will say, that everything, everything that happen in my novel, everything start that faithful night that little Smolder dies in the jaws of Fredbear, so traumas will come back, they always come back hahahahahahah
(KABOOM? YES RICO, KABOOM HAHAHAHAHAHAA)
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Hahahahahhahahaha I can't say so much, just that, I ALWAYS COME BACK hahahahahahaha
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He wasn't going to end well if that happen, from the jail you go out, from the cementery no hahahahaha
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HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHA If you think that that is pervert, wait to chapter 18 (prepare your toilet paper hahahaha)
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He ALWAYS come back hahahaha
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Even when burned three times
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Hahahahaha totally
How the fuck does that make Spike a murderer?! All it showed was a horrible accident and Thunder showed it like Spike planned it!
I would like to say two things about Don Bruto's gang for now:
1. Chrysalis here is just like her from the show. She never surrenders. In the battle, even when all the odds were against her, she just stood there and was like: "Bring it!". She kinda reminds me of Shredder from TMNT 2012. Even though she is evil, but I'll be honest, she is a good Monarch.
I also must admit, Chrysalis has a big level of loyalty. When she got the Ruby to herself, she could have had a thoughts about oberthrowing Don Bruto and building the Empire all for herself. But no, she actually remained loyal him and she wished to build an Empire for him, not all for herself. Don Bruto is lucky to have such loyal members. But he is not lucky to have Filthy Rich as one of his partners. Knowing about his plan to get Don Bruto's business to himself, I can surely say that if Rich gets the Ruby, Don Bruto is doomed.
2. Through the story I see something suspicious about members of Don Bruto's gang. They never get a chance to see young nomag's face. The only one of them who actually saw Spike's face was Thorax. And I can surely say that their meeting on the ship was their first meeting.
You, LuckyMagic, didn't let Don Bruto and his people see Spike's face on the camera. And I can understand that, cause Spike made a disguise for his face, so they wouldn't find him. But even though they can already identify Spike by his sweatshirt, you still prevented Pharynx from seeing Spike's face when he was looking through Fluttershy's memories. It is very suspicious, I must say. I'm starting to think that Spike and Pharynx met each other in the past, and if Pharynx saw Spike's face, he would recognize it. (y Don Bruto también reconocería la cara de Spike si la viera). Suspicious, suspicious...heheh!)) And something tells me that it will take a lot of time before Don Bruto or Pharynx will be able to see the face of the "Hooded One". Alright then)
This is all for now!)
1: I know for a fact William is gonna show up in this story
2: it grinds my gears but William is just the perfect villian and anyone who works with him will always get the shit end of the stick poor spike. The trama is real idk how anyone would be able to live with the guilt of your creation being tampered with by your own dad just to get his sick thrills.
I like that u introduced starlight can’t wait to read about her more and other characters u have in mind
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Yeah hahahaha there is the thing was an accident? Really? Hahaha
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I can say that most of the monarch are totally loyal to Don Bruto, mostly because he is like a father (or in this case a Godfather) for them, like part of his family, even if they know that he is a nomag, is the only nomag that they respect and, in some ways, fear hahahahaha
The reason why they didn't discover the nomag's face will be answered by the time hahahahaha for now, I can only say that is necessary for the plot hahahaha
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Well, that's the thing that Spike has been through all this years, with it's downs and ups, but he still alaive (idk why, but he stay hahahaha)
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Starlight, Gabby and some other characters will be comming back or show up in the next season hahahaha
About these wet dreams that Discord has about Celestia and Luna. We already know that Luna has an ability to enter dreams. Isn't Discord afraid that Luna might look into his dreams when he sleeps and accidentally find out how he sees her and Celestia in his dreams? Who knows, maybe she already knows about these dreams of Discord...
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Hahahahaha you think that Luna and Celestia didn't know about his wet dreams? And also, you think didn't have done it? Hahahaha
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I would say "Oh my...", but something tells me that I'll have to wait until some of the other chapters (maybe chapter 17) until I could surely say that, heheh!))
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Well, Discord have his fantasies... but Spike... I wouldn't say Oh My... I would say OHHHHHH YEEEEEAAAAH hahahahahaahaha
Hm...considering that Spike and Thunder were fighting on the island where the Ruby was and where volcano was still erupting and that Thunder's wing wasn't working because it was damaged by a bullet, how was Thunder going to get out of the island after killing Spike? I guess he didn't think about it at that moment. It seems that even if Thunder succeded, he would have died on that island anyway, not being able to get out of there.
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Well, that's true, but in the moment that Thunder take Spike to the island of rubi, he wasn't thinking that he would get hurt, and less in the wing. In the hypothetical scenario where he wins... well, yeah, I think he would actually died in that island hahahahhhaahaha
I have to say, this season I already see one similarity between Spike and Don Bruto. If they have a goal, they go towards it with great perseverance.
Spike had a goal to find the Fire Ruby. He certainly spent a lot of time making sure it really existed and doing the necessary translations and research to discover its whereabouts.
Spike also wanted to survive the battle with Thunder. He showed good fighting skill, he managed to escape from death when Thunder threw him off the cliff. And Spike even managed to save himself in the last moment when Thunder was about to "help" him fall. His arm broke, but he remained alive.
Though I don't know if Don Bruto would have had the same level of perserverance in that situation, but considering what Spike told about him in one of previous chapters, when Don Bruto has a goal, he never gives up until goal is achieved. And, of course, Don Bruto and monarchs will keep trying to get Fire Ruby either until they have success or until they all will be defeated for good.
So yeah, maybe we will see some more similarities between those two nomags in second season. What I can say for sure, at least one similarity can be discovered in the first season, hehehehe!)
(Por cierto, te envié un mensaje privado hace un tiempo. No sé si lo viste o no, lo digo por si acaso. Ese mensaje es sobre un gran tipo, que recientemente se fue de este mundo...)
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True they are very similar... very similar... mmmm... hahahahahaha, I expect that the 2°season will leave all the answers to your questions... or meaybe adding more hahahaahahaha who knows hahahaha (and yeah I forgot to respond your dm, I will do now hahaha)
I understood that reference