Live is hard to Spike Drake, a young of 15 years, without magic in a world full of it. But seven girls have the power to calm down the beast inside him, if their status don´t get in the middle.
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That was a wonderful and tear jerking chapter. Spike was willing to kill himself and run away to keep the darkness inside him contained, but Rarity talked him out of it. He still feels like he's a danger to everyone, but he's putting his trust in all of them. And now the T-Wings will be out for his blood if they escape their arrest. And this new Legion of Doom are all looking to get the Fire Ruby regardless of who stands in their way. This whole story was one of the best I've read in a long time. And I look forward to seeing what the next season holds for Spike, the girls, and everyone. Though when the rest of the girls kiss Spike will they all suddenly see flashbacks to their greatest moment with younger Spike?
Awsome work on this chapter!
Really hope to see more to the story in the future!!
Now why do I feel like flash is gonna die
I have a feeling that this "Shadow" guy is one of LuckyMagic's most favorite characters in his story. Shadow is very similar to him, he even laughs a often as his author does, heheh. So if Fancy came with that syringe before, they could have prevent Shadow from coming back at all. But at least, they came in time to prevent him from taking control over Spike. So from now on, Spike will have companion to talk to when no one is around. Okay))
So he was the one who made Harmonys, Chrysalis, Torch and Discord feel pain in their heads. Surprising. As I see, Chrysalis decided not to tell Don Bruto about that mysterious pain that weakened her on the Bora Bora. I guess she was sure that no one will believe it. Just a pain in head out of nowhere. Who would believe in that? But maybe from now on Chrysalis will be wondering what was the source of that pain...And if she finds out...I feel that she will be surprised, hehehe!))
(Y algo me dice que si alguien intenta entrar en la mente de Spike en el futuro, también podrá ver a Shadow. Sin duda, ese sería un encuentro maravilloso. Y no sé si Shadow podrá vivir en Spike hasta el final de la historia, pero si logra mantenerse con vida durante toda la segunda temporada... bueno, tengo el presentimiento de que el capítulo 36 será su favorito, jejeje).
Heh, considering how much hatred was in Zephry's voice when he said about his hopes that Thunder will kill nomag...oh, I can barely imagine how angry he will get when he finds out who actually died on that island. Hopefully Zephry won't lose his sanity completely when he finds out that his idol is dead, and nomag remained alive, and that girls are still dating him.
T-Wings are under arrest now, as I see. We already know that their parents are rich and have a big influence, so I'm sure they won't keep under arrest for too long. So sooner or later, they will be free again. And now they figured out that Spike is the one who killed Thunder. Although they have no proof, the fact that Thunder went to another island to kill the nomag and did not return is certainly suspicious. I'm not sure what actually made T-Wings expell the Sunbrust from their group. He didn't say or do anything bad to them. I guess they weren't pleased with the fact that Sunbrust didn't even try to help them when they were getting arrested, which they considered as a betrayal.
For them, things surely won't be the same. Now there's only five of them left. And considering everything they went through, I don't think they would be after Harmonies anymore. Now their main priority is to avenge Thunder. I wonder if T-Wings are going to remember some things from their past too in the new season...Something tells me there will be things they will remember...
Something tells me that after what Dazzlings saw in their memories and after conclusions that Pinkie helped them all to make, they will surely put more effort in the future to find William, so Spike could get revenge for his sister and everyone else. Plus, Dazzlings would probably want to get answers from William himself about why he was killing the kids. Well then, I don't know if finding William is good or bad idea for them, but I wish them luck.
Spike now made his choice to stay with the girls. Hopefully, he won't have to regret it. Though, I feel that my hope might end up being in vain..Oh well, heheh)
This is the first chapter where we saw Don Bruto himself speaking. I remember LuckyMagic said that when Don Bruto wants to talk to someone remotely, he uses a weird way to do it. In this chapter he used TV with black and white static image. And he even distorted his voice, despite
that there are only his henchmen who are listening to him. Well...I guess Don Bruto follows the "You can never be too careful" rule. I don't know if Don Bruto has a family now, but I wonder if they would be proud to see how much their son has achieved.
He knows exactly what priorities should be top priority. And it seems that Don Bruto has got a lot of information about Spike from Fancy Corporation. After all, he somehow found out that Spike also protects the Ruby. Maybe now he even knows about Spike's good inventing skills. In addition, the measures Spike took to hide his face in the warehouse must have also made Don Bruto realize that Spike is not as simple as he might seem.
Looks like a lot of things are going to expect us in the season 2. It will take a long time to see it, but we'll wait!) Have a good time, reader!))
Me seeing shadow spike
*pulling out cross*
The power of Christ compels you!
So are they ever going to tell him it was his father who killed his sister or does he already know?
Like the new cover art
11390917 I think Spike knows by now that William did something with his robot back then. But he keeps blaming himself because it still was him who built that robot. And if Spike hadn't built it, then William wouldn't have been able to do the thing that led to his sister's death. So yeah, in Spike's logic, he still has a huge part of blame for this, because he was the creator...
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True but do you get the feeling that his sister is still in that Freddy suit?
And maybe willam built a back door to enter programming or new commands
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For now, I'm more focusing on the present time of this story. Only time will tell us more about the past.
I really enjoyed how rarity was the only one who convinced him at the end. She deserves him
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I really appreciate how you like this story Wildcard, mostly because was your harem stories with Spike what inspire me the most hahahaha and yeah, that's the mechanic, when the girls have the first kiss with him, they will remember one of the best memories they have with him hahahahaha. Also, this "Legion of Doom" as you call it, are going to be the main villians of the seasons 2... well, mostly the main hahahaha
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I'm sure you will hahaha thanks you so much <3
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Who knows... who knows hahahahahaah
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Fair enough.
Now all we do is wait for season 2 of this to come out.
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Like the new cover art
Sorry for writing another comment, since you are sure very busy and don't have time to answer comments (teniendo en cuenta que no respondió a mi último comentario y comentarios de otras personas.), but hey, you can answer at any time you'll want, I have enough petience to wait for a long time, heheh!))
You know, I must say that chapter 14 was pretty interesting chapter. So much interesting that I forgot to think about one thing. And only now I remembered this.
...What about Spike's butterly knife? Something tells me that Spike is still gonna have to use it for some time. But the main point is: Why didn't Spike use butterfly knife in his fight with Thunderlane? Thunderlane took his gun away, but Spike didn't even try look for his knife. He didn't even think about it during the fight. And actually, that knife could have done Spike's fight with Thunderlane easier for Spike. Plus, when he tried to kill himself, he also didn't use his butterfly knife. So, maybe I missed the moment that explains it (sorry if I really did), but...what actually happened to Spike's knife? Why that knife wasn't used during chapters 13 and 14, when it was needed more than ever?
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The probable reason as to why Spike didn’t use his knife is that the author is writing this story as it goes instead of planning it out to the end. As a result, details such as this tend to get lost as the story progresses.
However, I could be wrong, so take what I say as a grain of salt.
Question why didn't Spike just try to kill himself again not that I want him to do it but that just seems like a more logical decision for him to make instead of just running away
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Hahahahahaa yeah, shadow is one of my favorite characters, is like the representasion of the deepest and darkest feelings of Spike, he is going to be a thoughtfull adversary to everyone from now till the end of the novel hahahahaha
Oh Zephry, zephry, zephry... let's say that we haven't see anything yet hahahaahahhaah
The T-Wing from now, aren't going to be the same, they will change... for bad hahahaha and if you say that Thunderlane was a unstoppable opponent... you must prepare for Flash Sentry hahahahahaha
The Dazzlings, The Harmonys and The Crusaders must be more unify than ever before, not only for the search of William Afton or the Monarchs of Crime... for Spike, to be with him... and to stop him hahahaha I can't say anymore hahaha
I will just say that Don Bruto is one of the most important characters and with a very weird and sad story that only future chapters will solve hahahaha
Sorry for the inactivity but is has been a rought week for me, but don't worry, I will ask every question and comments everyone let me in the comments, sooner or latter hahahhaahaha
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What Wardoun said hahahaha he feel blame anywhere and yeah Shadow Spike is like a demon so... THE POWER OF CHRIST COMPELS YOU hahahahaa
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Thanks you hahahaha is the official one in Wattpad in the Spanish version
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Yeah, that one was a very cute scene and Rarity deserve as like the other to have Spike hahaha
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Don't worry, it will come soon hahahaha
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If you want the answer just tell me... I said in any moment of the Chapter 9-10-11-12-13-14 that Spike brought the knife with him? Hahahahahaahahaha
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Well, I guess that Spike just thought that it was useless since the Harmonys will never stop to search for him, if he was dead, they will eventually found his body and revive him due to any spell or science manner, but if he was alive, he would be scape from them, thats the reason hahahahaha
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This doesn’t work so quick get the holy water….
We still do have holy water right lucky…right?!
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Okay then why didn't he think of throwing his whole body into the lava
I must say, all these moments where it was mentioned in passing that Harmonies ruined some of Don Bruto's plans in the past, make me wonder:
Why are Harmonies still alive?
I mean really. When Spike burned just one warehouse, Don Bruto sent the agent to kill him. But for some reason, he doesn't send anybody to kill Harmonies, the ones who were fighting against his Monarchs and ruined some of his big plans. I know that they are not important for Don Bruto right now, because if he gets the Ruby, they won't be a threat. But back then, Don Bruto didn't even know that Fire Ruby really exists. I understand that Harmonies are very strong. But hey, Don Bruto, for example, could always send the agents to their houses so they could slit girls' throats while they sleep. So why, after everything the Harmonies have done to ruin his plans, are they still alive?
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That, detective, is a good question hahahahaahahaha but unfortunately I can't say nothing hahahahahaha
About the synopsis: Usually, after some big events, stories give heroes time to rest. But yours is not one of them, hehe. It's nice to see that the Monarchs aren't postponing anything. Already the first chapter of the second season, and one of them is already planning to attack the young nomag. Now that's efficiency!😈
Shadow also isn't wasting any time and tries to take control. I guess it is boring for him to wait, hehehe!)
I know that we must wait for the other two chapters to be made until we will be able to see the first one. Heh, it will totally be interesting!)
This comment will touch on one "Spanish" topic, so it will be written entirely in Spanish. You may not like this one, Lucky Magic, so read at your own risk, hehehehe😈.
Sabes, cuando era niño, solo escuché algunas cosas sobre la antigua tradición española llamada corrida. Solo vi algunos chistes con toreros, toros y trapos rojos en caricaturas. Entonces pensé en la corrida de toros como algo muy divertido y sin daño para el toro...
Jejeje... es gracioso que... que fue solo después de ver la película "Ferdinand" que finalmente descubrí que los toros se matan en las corridas de toros. Justo a la vista del público. Y realmente disfrutan eso. E incluso si el toro sobrevive a la corrida, todavía lo matan después del espectáculo. Como decía Ferdinand: "El toro nunca gana".
Escuché que a muchos fanáticos de las corridas en España no les gustó la película "Ferdinand", porque esa película "estaba mostrando su tradición como algo malo". Y recuerdo que esta película había dado vida a muchas discusiones en España.
No sé si eres fanático de las corridas de toros (después de todo, también eres español, vives en España y probablemente incluso viste este espectáculo personalmente. Y es posible que no te guste el hecho de que toqué este tema) ), y no sé si viste la película "Ferdinand", pero si me preguntas, me siento neutral con esta tradición española. Por un lado, entiendo que en nuestro mundo del siglo XXI, las corridas de toros, donde se matan toros para la diversión del público, parece un poco... bárbaro para muchas personas modernas. Pero por otro lado, entiendo que esto es una tradición antigua para muchos españoles, que se ha ido pasando de generación en generación, y si dejan el toreo, será como un crimen para ellos. Así que sí, estoy tomando una posición neutral sobre esta tradición.
¿Por qué incluso decidí mencionar este tema, puede preguntar? Bueno, en realidad, uno de los capítulos (el que se llama "España") me hizo pensar en ese tema. Después de todo, parece que en este capítulo Spike y las chicas van a visitar tu país de origen, LuckyMagic. Y quién sabe, probablemente oigas hablar de las corridas de toros allí. Tal vez incluso verlo si les gusta. No sé si a Spike y a las chicas les gustará (bueno, estoy seguro de que a Shadow les gustará), pero puedo decir con seguridad que hay una chica a su alrededor que odiará más las corridas de toros después de conocer esta tradición. Cierto amante de los animales, jejeje😈...
Have a good time, everyone!😇
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Hahahahaha as Batman said: "Crime didn't rest" but yeah, I like that in the story didn't pass so much time till the action comes back (sorry for this two weeks of silence but it's been rough time here)
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Hahahahaah don't worry, I don't mind to talk about tense topic or "politically incorrect topics". Well, the Bulls here in Spain yeah is a tradition and I even participated in a subgenrer of the traditionals Bulls call, "Encierro" or "Lockout (literally translate to english)" where the Bull is not killed before the show. I don't mind about this tradition, I don't like the idea that the bull get killed but, what I can do? Many spanish people like it and give money to many families (such as farmers, meat commercials...) so I'm also neutral here. In the Chpater call Spain, would be many references about the steriotype of my country (what I found funny cause some of them are totally true, the tipical ¡Paellas, toros, ole ole! Hahahahaha). But that chapter also is going to be very emotive cause remember, Spike's mother was from Spain (thats why her name was Marta, without the H).... and yeah, Shadow will be dressed as a Torero hahahahaha
Now, after Chapter 14, there's one thing I can surely say about Iron Will...
This is the first story in my memory where he did something heroic!
Remember Chapter 2? Remember, when Spike lost control of himself and almost killed Thunder? Now that I read Chapter 14, I can surely say that if Spike killed Thunderlane back then, Shadow would have taken control over his body (Discord wasn't around in that chapter, so there was no one to bring a syringe with medicine). And although I don't know how strong Shadow is, and I don't know if he does stand a chance against the whole class (which also includes Harmonies, which are among the strongest magical beings), but considering that they all were in shocked state, Shadow could use it as an advantage, so something tells me that there would be A LOT of corpses in the gym.
So actually, by hitting Spike, Iron Will not only saved Thunder. He saved everyone in the gym. Hell, he even saved Spike himself without realizing it! He is a hero!! Yes, his method was brutal, but Spike wasn't hearing anything around him back then, so Iron Will did what had to be done. For now, he is the only nomag's hater who I can tip my hat to.🤠
My congratulations, Iron Will! You're hero! Of all nomag's haters you are the one who deserves to be famous! You saved everyone! And you actually did something good to the nomag, even though you didn't realize it😉.
Yo, very good first season🤌 looking forward to the next chapter. Blow us away👍
And yeah, it's kinda sad that after such a heroic action you, Iron Will, will be lost in time of UTPH story like tears in the rain...(pero tal vez aparezcas con la multitud en un capítulo misterioso llamado "Ciudad Loca", quién sabe, jejejeje)
I had a suggestion for spike if it’s alright
I’ve been watching dragon ball super lately and I say a villain called zamasu/goku black/corrupted zamasu
and was wondering if spike could gain a power similar to that but not insanely op? It could be useful for future endeavors imo
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Personally, I don’t think that Spike needs superpowers. He is literally a super genius. If he can create a pill that cures all sickness and heals all injuries, then it is possible for him to create anti-magic technology to level the playing field for himself.
If he is able to, then the question is why doesn’t he? He has the money to purchase materials and the space (abandoned apartments) to perform experiments. If he is concerned about abusing the technology, that is a problem of character. If he is worried about the technology falling into the hands of NoMags, while understandable, the NoMags would still not be in the wrong in using it to combat the tyranny of Mags.
Overall, I think the shadow was a bad addition to this story. I just see it as an effort by the author to make Spike a more pathetic character for us to sympathize with and cheer for. However, that is unnecessary when you have Spike’s status as a NoMag, the loneliness of being forgotten and abandoned by friends, the responsibility of destroying his family, and the racialism of the world in which he lives.
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Or he could just go all iron Man and create armor for himself
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Yeah yeah it is but I just have to get this off my chest am I a jerk for thinking Spike is an idiot for staying
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No, you’re not. Personally, if I was Spike, I would have left years ago.
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I know right him staying is putting his friends in danger because of shadow and he knows this it's still a good story but it doesn't make sense for Spike to decide to stay
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When I wrote my previous comment, I wasn’t thinking about the Shadow endangering his friends. I was thinking about how his friends, despite having their memories erased, mistreated him.
In other words, his friends are just horrible people in general. If I was Spike, not only would I have left them a long time ago, I would not associate with them now.
The Harmonies perfectly encapsulated the quote of US President Abraham Lincoln: “If you want to know a person’s true character, give them power.”
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I just realized that, due to being a super genius, Spike could create a machine that literally gives him superpowers (including magic).
This is potentially a major plot hole in the story.
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And also the fact that Spike doesn't use the changeling belt all the time so he doesn't get discriminated against when he heads out
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Basically, we can both agree that the drama up to this point is contrived?
From our conversation, we provided ways in which Spike could have had an easier life. From using technology to either disguise or empower himself to simply walking away.
In the most recent chapter, he created a device that allows him to travel through a portal to any place on the planet. What’s stopping him from inventing a similar device to allow him to travel the cosmos or to other dimensions where he meets sapient life that treats him better?
It is possible for him to go to another dimension where the Harmonies are not horrible people and haven’t been run through by other guys (especially the T-Wings). It is possible for him to go to another dimension where he, and he alone, receives credit and money for his inventions.
Overall, the more I think about this story, the more I am upset at the waste of potential that is Spike as a character, as well as how awful everyone else, with exception to Fancy Pants and Fleur de Lis, are as people. Yes, this also includes Discord, Celestia, and Luna.
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Yeah we can oh and also one other thing I like to get off of my chest the issue with the main 7 and the sirens why don't they just beat down on the T-wings already I mean seriously 😒 it is clear that the T-wings are weaker than them so why do they always let them mouth off
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The Harmonies don’t do it because they want to protect their image. The Dazzlings, well, your guess is as good as mine.
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Since author himself is not here yet, I think I can jump in this conversation.
I was here for a long time, and saw a lot of answers from author, so I think I can try and give you some explanations.
1. Spike could create a machine that would give him magic powers.
True, but I remember that author gave someone a warning about what would happen if he got these powers.
Spike has mental traumas. Magic is not a thing that is easy to control with some machine. So theoretically, if he gets the powers, he won't be able to control them because of his traumas, and it might lead to apocalypse.
2. Spike can be in disguise permanently.
Author already answered that himself. He said that yeah, Spike thought about this option, but he prefers to be himself. Seems that he just doesn't like the idea of being someone else all the time.
3. Spike could just leave in the other world.
Yeah, Spike can create portal to the other dimension, but he doesn't like playing with these things (I remember author's answer).
Think of it. Spike has no idea which dimensions exist out there and while he can built the portal, it is unknown in which dimension it might lead. Haven't you watched Gravity Falls? Yeah, here is no Bill Cipher that would instruct Spike to built portal in his dimension. But the risk that Spike could accidentally built portal that might only bring some evil from out there to his world is still high. So yeah, it's too risky.