Live is hard to Spike Drake, a young of 15 years, without magic in a world full of it. But seven girls have the power to calm down the beast inside him, if their status don´t get in the middle.
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Where were you?
So? You guys went up against discord, right?
So he’s the principal and the teacher? Damn.
Twilight, shut up. Show some backbone.
Warn him.
Then do something.
B*tch, give him yours.
Y’all some pussies.
Ok, although they they didn’t place the bomb they did deserve that rage.
Now that is an apology. You wouldn’t even get that from canon villains. Just grow a backbone after this and you’re all good.
That is probably the dumbest question I’ve heard in this story.
Ohh. So he doesn’t to avoid getting angry.
I highly doubt that.
If there wasn’t any proof that he was the smartest person in that school, then there is now.
I wish.
They should be saying this to him.
Why?
I know celestia is disappointed while discord is looking down in shame.
Why?
Bruh.
So that means anyone can use it?
God particle?
Nomag
I would.
Why?
That was stupid.
May have been awhile, but it was worth it. But it looks like Spike's finding the girls being nice to him scary, especially with what Applejack did at the end. But given what he's gone through for years it's hard for him to accept any kind of genuine love from anyone without thinking it's all an act to lure him into more humiliation.
Oh! The next chapter!) It was a really good to read!
Though there is some thing that confuses me...
Soarin and Blublood's brothers got arrested....and they are not worried about it, not even slightly? I understand that being cruel to nomags is normal here....but these are their brothers (who are NOT nomags, I want to notice), and is it really normal for Soarin and Blueblood act like nothing happened?!
And after that, shouldn't their reputation become at least slightly damaged? "Brothers of Criminals", in fact, a bad reputation...
Now we got some information about Spike's past, Thunder got back, just like was promised. And also, Spike got the information that girls are aware about his disguises. I'm curious to see one day what is Spike gonna think and do about it.
Thunder seems special here. Though he still on the mean side of the world, but he was first of the boys who actually called Spike by his names and talked to him instead of beating him first. Well, I hope we'll see if Thunder will change his attitude towards Fluttershy, Rainbow and Scootaloo at least a little. After all, I guess, this is what Spike wants from him.
And yeah, I never wanted to start drinking alcohole, and I'm Definitely won't change my mind about this after reading this chapter. I don't know if Applejack was planning to reveal their secret about knowing of his disguises in the first place, but I think that alcohol played it's role in Applejack's decision...
And about Dazzlings...
I had a thought that they are watching Spike just to find a way to ruin Harmony's reputation. You know, come to think of it, I never saw in any chapter that they humiliated Spike. Even when Spike was thrown in the girls' locker in the Chapter 2, those three didn't tell Spike any insults and simply ignored him. Maybe Sirens didn't want to "spend their precious time on humiliating pathetic nomag" (if not something else).
But if it was only for ruining Harmony's reputation, I think they would have followed the Mane 7 too (you know, to find if they talk some "inappropriate" things about nomag). Why would they want to know about nomag himself then? Looks like the Sirens are interested in Spike in some way...I wonder what are they gonna do with all this information.
Good story so far! Have a nice day!!))
Ok i love this story the drama and the real life take on it. It will give me joy when spike comes on top or not but for now we hope that he can keep walking on this path
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Hahahahaaha I miss your comments so much, answering the question of god particule, is a thing that can create or destroy mater, like a real god and yes, everyone can use the fire ruby cause is not a magical artefact
That said a lot, but it could be false that Thunder said it was in his point of view since Spike's family was all Nomag, like they call him a killer for kills Nomag that in this world kills them is not a crime, it could have been an accident with experiment (proved very clever) or someone wanted to kill the nomag there and they blamed Spike and maybe Spike's ability came up that caused the accident.
I think I have no doubt that he is thinking about it to alleviate his suffering, as a machine that is easier and slower to feel, a way to stay close to them too without being Nomag.
I'm thinking the Elements of Harmony and Kara Sevda are evil only make poor Spike suffer.
I was worried: are Spike's inventions being used against his people or extinction of the Nomag with such destructive power? If true, it will be traumatic. If the fire ruby is a power of science greater than magic, someone that the world is willing to exterminate or uses for testing the NOMAG = Humans, has this technology, screwed!!!
You didn't screw it up, you killed the guy, if he's still alive he's already a zombie.
On my list you're the first AJ, You're the fucking Honesty Element, even Pinke distrusted her own boyfriend, someone she felt before anyone else and Granny Smith is more of an honesty element than you, Twilight would deny Hell you're not in love with Spike would understand, but you never suspected and your boyfriend's lying face to you, you might be confused or want to deny it yet, that and also for Rarity it didn't take 5 seconds soon was sucking the BlueBloood in front from Spike in the car, I know women if the guy actually talked in front of everyone about a person to suck himself being a boyfriend the guy would lose all his teeth, not even with her angry look at him how to tell him 'it's not place to talk about it' or even threaten to cancel the night at the hotel
If Blueblood took a moment, he could be sucking on Spike, knowing Spike was emotionally repressing when sexually and would run away.
Elements of Harmony and Kara Sevda are evil, there is no punishment for them, able to use Kara Sevda to support their boyfriends using Spike as an anesthetic drug like Rarity sucking Blueblood.
I want Spike to find a Human who also helps him fight back and see that no one shows the empathy that in this world is 0. and begins to
Viva La Revolución!!!!
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Of course, Spike little by little is going to lose this fear, but time to time, I don't want to spoil things hahaha
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Well, let's just say that is not the first time they got in Jaime and their family has so much money so... they aren't going to spend so much time there hahaha, glad you like my story <3
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Thanks you so much, I expect that Chapter 8 would be sooner <3
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Okay, phew what a comments hahahahaa I'll try to answer the best I could. First, the accident, it was before the magic, when all were nomags, two or three months before, and Spike has only a liitle of guilty, but in the further chapters all of you are going to discover the truth. Now, the inventions, of course some of his inventions were used against the nomags but in reality are only to help anybody who need it and the last invention he is going to do with the fire ruby is for the good (then the things get a little twist but the original project is for good) ane the robot he was doing on robotic is just a little clue of the accident is your job imagine what happen hehe. And for the girls... I have no excuse for their behave... let's say that they were a little confuse and blind hahahah
I hope that I calmed some questions, thanks for the reading and the comments and to follow my novel
Have a nice day <3
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👍
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Thanks. So, is spike planning on getting revenge? That’s the only explanation I have on why he wants the ruby.
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Nop, he wants the ruby for a good action hahaha
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Wow, I actually never thought about some of these.
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Also, why is discord whispering to spike?
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Cause they are in class and no one has to know that they are "friends"
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Why did you say it like that?
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Cause they are not really friends, discord only see him as a support cash, rather see him as a living thing
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The elements of Harmony - The problem is the source of magic that is the elements of harmony, which proves wrong what happened in the world family, friends and loves approaching their loved ones for being nomag, for wanting status and power. This should alert the girls that the power of harmony should be diminished before having her difficulty using this magic. or do you not consider nomag as part of the harmony? They go wait for the girls to graduate and start charging for the service.
Kara Sevda - The girls don't suffer the consequences, and you say 'but it happened to Dash and the others....' this has nothing to do with Kara Sevda because the T-Wings are scoundrels, they are bastards and other names that I can't put it here, consequences will come with time. 6 years after the Discordia fight and magic release (if I was wrong) when Kara Sevda came out the girls felt about Spike when it was unmade and I think before that happened, and mixed feelings now. And Spike actually is the only faithful in this magic never betrayed anyone, who suffers most from the magic, love them that their good happiness is not even with him.
Because magic is bad and horrible, Spike could go looking for someone he can love or a place to be loved, as Discord said 'Love makes you crazy' Kara Sevda a damn, Spike is more affected than they girls, i think Discord know and enjoy it, love and can't share the feeling of being loved.
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Wow, that’s pathetic.
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Interesting.
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Yeah, it's a shit, but don't worry. All will be going up time to time
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I have to admit that Kara Sevda is a little injustice with poor Spike and the girls now are like a baby with a gun, something stupid but I think that all of that will change soon hahahaha
Sorry to bother you again😅.
I just remembered a scene from the previous chapter and thought: Basically, I understand how in this world nomags are distinguished from many other magicians in appearance.
For example, pegasus have wings, and unicorns have a horn.
Spike has neither one nor the other. However, I know that earthlings also have neither horns nor wings. And the scene that I remembered from the previous chapter, was when the store clerk recognized Spike as a nomag just by looking at his face "Under the Purple Hood". But why did the salesman not think that Spike, for example, could be one of the earthlings? Like I said, they don't have wings and horns too. So, I'm curious, what is the difference in appearance between earthlings and nomags?
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The fact that is different to nomags and earthlings is that the earthlings have horse ears and are pretty tall, even with a hood, the horse ears are noted. Spike don't have no horse ears and is the smallest in the school hahaha and never bother me, I love to answer questions.
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babies with guns?! More like an atomic bomb, Kara savda is no guarantee of true love and fidelity, both of which can betray your partner.
empathy periphery than Kara Sevda, it seems that the girls have residency to this magic and Spike who is Nomag is like slave to magic has no defense like a prison. Better if they had empathy, but the world they built has absolutely 0 of it.
with empathy it would be justified that the girls saw the truth and went too far.
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It's a guarantee of true love, but not fidelidad, for that, must be trust each other and for know, they barely know, but time to time
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Hope so
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Kara Savda is cursed
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Love could be sometimes a curse
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empathy>>>>>>>>Kara Savda
You know, some time after I read that your story is inspired by the Dragonlord story, I read that fanfic too. (I read "The Girls Of My Life" fanfiction a year before I got to know your story).
And now, comparing the story of "Dragonlord" (the part where Spike didn't awoke his powers yet) to the "Under the Purple Hood" story, I want to note a few things:
1) As far as I remember, in "Dragonlord" Spike suffered from the fact that he became more and more invisible to the world, and was even partly glad that he was being bullied, because Spike is at least to some extent visible ... But something tells me that your Spike would give a lot to become invisible. At the very least, he wouldn't have to get nearly fatally injured as the crowd shouted, "Kill him! Kill him!" every day. And he wouldn't have to cut himself to curb his anger. So yeah, you were right when you told underrated Drake that his Spike had a better time than yours😈
2) If in "Dragonlord" Discord tried to help Spike in his own way just like that, out of kindness, then Discord in this story helps Spike to stay alive for partnership reasons. A bit harsh, but it makes sense that Discord is worried more about his future. So I'm not complaining, hehe)
By the way, I wonder how Discord learned about Spike's inventive skills and why did Spike initially decide to give Discord the rights to his inventions? I hope we find out one day.
3) While Spike doesn't have a single friend in your story (which makes sense considering he's the only nomag in the school), Spike the Dragon had one friend - Big Mac. He was friends with him, although Spike had no magic...
But...in your story, Big Mac was not mentioned in any chapter. Even after Apple Bloom's rape, the Big Mac didn't show up at all (although I'm sure he would have broken many bones for those who hurt his sister). And I'm just curious to know what happened to Big Mac in your story? He just...doesn't exist here?😕
4) And one more thing:
Spike's grandfather also appeared in Dragonlord, who before his death decided to remember him and apologize to Spike for forgetting about him. And that got me thinking - shouldn't Spike from Under the Purple Hood have any other relatives? I'm not gonna ask about his uncles or aunts. It is quite possible that neither Spike's father nor his mother had any brothers or sisters. But what about Spike's grandparents (his father's parents and his mother's parents). How are things going with them? Are they all dead for some reason (even though Spike is only 15 years old), or do they just have nothing to do with their grandson?
I would also like to explore the structure of this cruel world a little better in the commentary, but I'll do it sometime later!)
Have a nice day!)
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Well, thanks for the obsevation, and to anwer the last part, his grandfathers are all dead but one of his relatives is alive, his uncle (for mother part) but he didn't know that his nephew is alive, but he will discover time to time.
Also Big Mac is alive, but he don't live with his sisters, he live with his wife in Applelossa. But is going to appear in the story, don't worry
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Other thing, the relationship between Discord and Spike was something really strange because some things that all of you are going to discover in a chapter along with all the past of Spike explain, the bad thing is that the Chapter is... the 35... sorry but you'll have to wait to know exactly what happen to the sibblings, father, stepmother and uncle, although during chapters, some clues will be discover, stay update hahaha
Fluttershy, you cant be more right...I can really see Spike using this Fire Ruby as a way to get his revenge on the entire society in general...what better way for a "nomag" to get even than get powers that could overrun any logic, just rage...And this may seem strange, but I really get a lot of MHA vibes--Deku was originally considered Quirkless, like Spike in this is a nomag, but then Deku recieved on of the most powerful Quirks from none other than All Might and now he is among the most powerful. What if Spike has powers too, draconian in nature, but they are dormant, and they needs a spark to manifest??? Just wondering...because Spike is a ticking time bomb, and if he hasnt killed himself first, he's gonna be the death of millions in the future...The dog will fight back if you keep provoking.
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He don't need powers to rip them, I assure you hahaha
Well, I said that I would try to consider the structure of your cruel little world in the commentary, and today I will do it without postponing the matter indefinitely. (And after that I will try to write less often, otherwise you have things to do, and I am distracting you)
It is noteworthy that magic greatly influenced the lives of the inhabitants of Equestria (if their world is called that). It can be seen that many of these unicorns, earthlings and pegasus have long forgotten that they were once people without magic, and if they have not forgotten, then they are disgusted to remember those times.
It will forever remain unknown why not everyone has magic in themselves. Maybe these are some issues of evolution. For example, if Darwin's theory is correct, then it still cannot explain why not all apes evolved to humans.
So yeah, I guess there always can be some unexplained things!)
As I can see, everyone's popularity and reputation depends on magic. I feel that if T-Wings didn't have their magic, they would have much less popularity even with their sport skills. For example, no one in school (except for Crusaders, I guess) didn't start to respect Spike after he went to fight with Thunderlane to protect Scootaloo, and actually defeated him. Instead of being surprised of the fact that Spike protected the innocent girl and getting amazed by his strength, pupils (and Iron Will) just started to see Spike as a monster and wish him death. I'm sure that if Flash did it to Thunderlane, he would have been hero for the whole school. But Spike didn't become a hero for them...because he is nomag...
So yeah, magic is the only key to a good reputation here.
But also, as I can see, not all the nomags are as unlucky as Spike. For example, Don Bruto (who was mentioned here as a big narcotic developer) is a nomag too, but still has a big gang of people (who are nomags too) and his business is getting really good. Even Filthy Rich himself has to make deals with this nomag to stay on board. And it doesn't look like anyone can stop Don Bruto, since police even with magic powers couldn't arrest him...Seems like nomags actually can roll like cheese in a butter in this cruel world, but for this they should have a good connections and be the experts in illegal things.
I don't know who rules their country, but the nomags were very lucky that the ruler was not Hitler-like, judging by the fact that the country had not issued a decree on the total extermination of the nomags. I am sure many people would support this decree. It is even interesting who they have as such a merciful ruler there?
But...it seems like nomags are not the only ones who has a bad time in this cruel world.
Laws are still working on their country, but a lot of magic beings don't seem to respect laws much anymore. "Who is stronger is right" - is the only law that works for them here. And sometimes even magic can't help a poor victims of lawlessness. For exampe, the Crusaders were raped (except for Scootaloo, who got a beating instead), but Rainbow, Applejack and Rarity couldn't do anything. Even with all their powers, they are completely helpless against the rich people with a good connections and big reputation.
And magic doesn't seem to give ALL the possibilities. Discord, while being a spirit of chaos, can't invent something by himself and has to relate on Spike.
The girls can't get revenge on Diamond Tiara and her gang, they can't talk to nomag in front of people without their reputation being damaged. And neither Discord nor girls can't use magic to make everyone change their mind about treating Spike as a piece of garbage...So yeah, magic may be useful, but not Always...
With all of the above, I am very surprised that your story will have no less than 35 chapters. It seemed to me that Spike's chances of surviving here chapter by chapter were getting closer and closer to zero (for example, in this chapter Spike was REALLY close to being killed by Flash). Because of this, I really thought it would only last until chapter 12. But it seems like this world doesn't want to end everything so quickly. Well then, let's see what happens to Spike and how he will manage to last until Chapter 35 and longer!)
If I recall correctly, the most powerful magical creature in your history is Flurry Heart. Although, it seems that she does not go to school yet (or maybe goes to another school). I don't know if Flurry Heart, the most powerful magical creature, will meet Spike, who is a nomag... but I wouldn't mind to see how would they react to each other.😆
Have a good day everyone!😉
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Wow, sincerly I am a little amazing of your comment and I like it a lot. I see that you are very interested in my World and are not only 35, are 47 hahaha, and all of you say the same, but let me do magic, I asume you that is a loooooooooooong novel, you are just see the top of the iceberg I am very happy that more and more people get into my story and even give it a structure like you. Yes, this cruel World, who has more magic and more money, more difficult is to fight them.
Is curious that you mentioned Don Bruto because is one of the pilar of the future chapters, yes, he is a nomag, but one of the causes because he is not caught is because no one except their more confidential employees know him in reality. Also the money helps hahahaha.
Flurry heart, another important thing, she is a baby, and is going to be important, also Spike is going to know her but time to time. Thanks for your comment, and you don't bother me, I love to answer comments.
Have a nice day <3
You know, a long time ago I read one of the book from "The Young Samurai" series, where a boy from England who studied martial arts in Japan was forced to fight one of the teachers. That teacher betrayed his own daimyo. He hated the boy, just because he was a "gaijin" (meaning "stranger, barbarian." That's what they call foreigners in Japanese in a rude tone), and used him for years as a beating bag when he showed a new moves. And when in this book the boy had to fight with this teacher, the boy successfully withstood the blows of the teacher, since over the years of beating he acquired a certain degree of immunity to his blows.
Why am I saying all this? It's just that in this story, it's impossible not to notice the fact that Spike has been beaten for an enormous amount of time, and I have no doubt that he will receive many more beatings ahead. Do not forget about the pain that he regularly inflicts on himself with the knife.
And so I wondered, in theory, is there a chance that beating and cutting Spike with a knife will slowly but surely make him less susceptible to punches and pain, so much so that if he has to fight some enemy to protect those around him he cares about, then he will be able to stand up and continue to fight even if he is hit with a sledgehammer?
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In theory yes, he is almost inmune to pain, and when somebody fucked with the ones he care, enter in a frenesí mood (like the beating of Thunder) he don't listen and practically don't notice the pain. You'll see the dark side of the nomag in future chapters hahaha
I remember Sunset telling the girls about her acquaintance with Spike. And I also remember that you wrote in one of your replies to someone that the Incident that left Spike alone happened right after Spike first met Sunset...
And as Sunset mentioned, she and Spike were friends until the magic awakened, and Diamond Dogs started teasing her about hanging out with a nomag.
This suggests that Spike continued to communicate with Sunset after the incident.
I am sure that the events of the Incident had a profound effect on Spike's condition (this is especially noticeable in this chapter).
But...Sunset has never mentioned in her story that Spike has changed in any way since the day she first met him. I wonder why Sunset has never seen Spike depressed?
In many chapters of the story, Spike displays strong emotions (especially when people dear to him are suffering). Hmm...was Spike better at hiding his feelings back then?
He also seems to be lucky that Sunset didn't seem to once inquire where he lives during their friendship (well, so she can visit him), and never once tried to follow him to see his lodging (and so discover that Spike lives alone). And who knows, maybe then Sunset would have had a long and serious talk with Spike to find out what happened to his family.
(Also, these Diamond Dogs have never appeared in any chapter. I wonder, what happened to them?)
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Well the dimond dogs mess with sunset because she was meeting with a little kid, not because he is a nomag cause at that time, there was no magic and when the incident happened, Sunset wasn't his friend anymore, but she notices that one day to other, Spike change his personality radically but she didn't know what happen
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Oh, thanks! Seems like I forgot some details of her story. I'm sorry about that!😅😅
I would also like to ask something about the Dazzlings, but I'll save that question for the next day!)
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Hahaha as you like, I'm here to answer your questions. Have a nice day <3
Magic in this world has divided people into three main types of creatures:
Earthlings, pegasus and unicorns. (there are also alicorns, but they are rare)
Each of these species has its own differences from the others, but they all have one thing in common - they all have pony traits.
However, the Dazzlings are...unique in this regard. Firstly, there are no pony features in their appearance, and they are mermaids (moreover, they are apparently unique of their kind, since there are no other mermaids in this story). And secondly, their magic is also different from the magic of others. The trinity, like the canon Dazzlings, have necklaces that are able to gain power from the wrath of others.
I wonder why Dazzlings are mermaids? What's their backstory? Did they always have this power? (even before Discord was defeated). It is hard to believe that the Elements of Harmony, which contributed to the spread of magic, could give the Sirens a power contrary to the principles of Harmony.
I have no doubt that these Dazzlings also have magical voices that can influence the minds of others, just like Canon Dazzlings. Well, apart from the familiar seven girls, but the Dazzlings can easily anger any of them and gain magic from their anger...
This is actually not the only question about Sirens. I have some things to do, so I'll send other question later. For now, bye!)😉
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Okay, the magic in my World are not only unicorns, earthlings and pegasus, I only explain in chapter 1 the most common magical species but there are more that can be equal or even superior in magic that the main three, somo of this are: Mermaids (like dazzlings) Griffins, Sucubus, Dragons...
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This is a little scheme of the power creatures (most powerful to less):
-Alicorns and elements of harmony
-Mysticals (like zecora)
-Dragons
-Unicorns
-Sucubus
-Mermaids
-Griffins
-Pegasus
-Diamond Dogs (the creatures, not the gang)
-Earthlings
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Thank you!) Now I understand this!)) Now I'm back and I'll write the next question!)
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Hahahaha no problem
And it seems obvious how their magic works. Dazzlings, as befits sirens, drive others crazy with their singing. In addition, they also feed their powers with the negative emotions of others. It would seem that is there something incomprehensible in how their power is arranged? ☺☺
But no, there is one mystery in the principles of their abilities!)...
The mystery is how their powers work in Spike's case.
The day Spike went berserk and beat Thunderlane, he had a tremendous amount of anger, I bet his anger was even stronger than Rainbow's. Her anger fueled the Dazzlings' necklaces...
But for some reason, when Spike got angry, the necklaces didn't glow, the green smoke didn't come from Spike, and the Sirens didn't get extra power from HIS rage. In Rainbow Rocks, the Sirens could absorb energy from anyone's emotions...but for the sirens in this story, for some reason, in Spike's case, it didn't work. I wonder why? Was there something special about Spike's anger that prevented the necklaces from gaining strength from it?
It is also seen that the Dazzlings are attracting a lot of male attention. And this is not surprising, because Dazzlings are Sirens...
...But then again, in Spike's case, it's not the same. While other men go crazy over the Sirens (the T-Wings even cheat on their girlfriend with them), Spike...pays no attention to the Sirens at all. The only moment when he drew attention to one of them, was when Aria fought with Applejack, and even then Spike looked at Aria not with adoration, not with lust, but with...simple curiosity.
It is unknown if Spike ever heard their magical singing (the Dazzlings could very well perform in concerts), but I wonder if the Sirens once performed for everyone, using magical voices to fuel the listeners' emotions and make them do what they say. (like the canon Dazzlings in Rainbow Rocks), and if Spike accidentally heard them chanting while passing by, would he be affected and subdued by their singing, or does Spike have some kind of protection from the magical voices of the Sirens?