Live is hard to Spike Drake, a young of 15 years, without magic in a world full of it. But seven girls have the power to calm down the beast inside him, if their status don´t get in the middle.
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Oh yeah, very amazing chapter!!😁😁
Yeah, I see things are getting more and more complicated. Not only his "final" meet with Thunder is coming, but he also managed to get the attention of Don Bruto himself. Now it is only miracle (and some protection from the Harmonys and the other who want Spike to live) can keep him alive..
I give Bruto his due, of all the beings who want to kill Spike, he is the only one who wants Spike dead not because he is a nomag (since Don Bruto is nomag too), but because it seems like after Chapter 6 events Don Bruto realized that Spike can be dangerous for him and his business. Who knows, maybe one day they will get face to face with each other!)
Also, I, of course, am not going to ask about how Fancy Pants erased memories of everyone who knew about the Incident (because it would look like I demand a big spoilers). I just want to say that this reminds me the "EG: Forgotten Friendship" movie, where there was a girl named Wallflower Blush, who used the Memory Stone to erase Sunset's friends memories. I don't know if this does exist in your World, but whatever method Fancy used, it seems just as effective as Memory Stone.
Since Thorax called Chrysallis "highness", maybe it means that there are some kingdoms in this World after all. (or maybe Chrysallis has got a big ego😅).
Didn't expect police to arrest nomag even when he didn't do anything. Looks like they are used to nomags being criminals.
And the last thing for now:
The Harmonys made their move. And I think that in Chapter 10 there will be a Dazzlings' turn to make their move!)😏
Good luck, girls!))
I love this Chapter But Come on give the man Spike a break Please it's Torture Not Seeing him happy.
Just to make a note Luck magic I read male succubus, did you mean incubus, but the rest is the best a well worth of the wait for the chapter. So its time for the harmony girls and the dazzling to team work against thunderlane's plan to be foiled at some point, and the argument with the short acquired elevator moment funny😄🤣
Thank you very much for the update, although when they cruise ship reaches its destination what going to happen? I don't know why but it feels like the beginning of a Far Cry 3 or Far Cry 4 scenario with a but with an touch of Uncharted or Tomb Raider mixed in due to the whole traveling abroad, hidden treasure exhibition, and threats of potential warfare on the horizon. If that is the route your going on the chapters to come please bring the action, I can't wait for it. Also will spike be fighting it out with Thorax or will you have them become friends? I cannot wait for spike to start showing everyone his badass side weather it be directly or indirectly he needs his time to shine. Why does Queen Chrysalis want Spike dead so badly and do we get to see Zecora also? I feel like these two would make for an interesting add on to spike ever growing drama filled harem. And last but not least thank you very much for your time reading this is your do and I look forward to the upcoming chapters
Also to fit Spike's mood right now and in the chapters to come might I recommend you have him either sing or play some songs from either XXXTENTACION, Juice WRLD, or Mac Miller I feel those 3 artist music can set the mood for some chapters. And will you be doing a Halloween special if so have Spike be either Jason Voorhees or Jigsaw I feel it works be interesting
Poor Spike, to still be treated like a plague during the cruise ride and now he made a bet and won resulting in the girls forced to leave him alone. And now he's got another spy keeping an eye on him.
TX: 'Spike you deserve the happiness of the world to those who love you or hate you, able to feel EMPATHY even if you don't, in the near future I hope to have the happiness you deserve, not with the girls, someone who sees you as it is and be happy with her or him.'
1- Okay, now what a stupid idea of giving Spike a gun, does Fancy want him arrested? The guys go to his cabin to see if there is any drug or weapon to arrest him, once found want to forget him in prison, could use your knowledge to create someone who can defend an exoekeleton system as an example.
2- And the victory goes to the assholes of T-WINGS, there was no way to ask for a NOMAG and Thunder knows it doesn't need to do anything I think it will adopt the sundust idea, it would be logical because it deserves all of them a misfortune.
3- - Girls, do you know why it wouldn't work? DUE TO THE LACK OF EMPATHY in the world there is no way the girls stay with Spike without making the world have EMPATHY for the nomag who are commenting on atromonic errors. You will never stay with Spike, FIRST SOLVE THE NOMAG'S PROBLEMS THAT THERE IS LESS DECRIMINATION, PRIORITY!! After winning Spike's heart, the mermaids are also in the same boat.
4- Incubi and succubi well I think there are other discriminated races equal to nomag, if Don (for nomag) and Queen Chrysalis would have this relationship or business in this environment and Spike suffers consequences that he created will be related to his father?!
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Yeah, Don Bruto is very angry and concert of the danger of "The hooded one" (as he know as he didn't see his face) and problems are just getting started. Of course, the eraised memories is something that, for now, is not going to be solve and all have to wait to know what happen hahaha. I'm glad you like the chapter, stay update friend
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The ferris wheel of horror are just getting started, Spike has a looooong trip to get happiness hahahaha
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I can't say so much about thunder plan and the dazzlings and harmonys, let's just say that... they won't have other choice that unite forces hahaha
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First of all, thank you all for the comments and the support, although the destination is going to be more like Indiana Jones. The relationship of Spike and Thorax is going to be solve, but that is not going to happen soon. Thanks for the songs, I will keep them in mind. The thing of a halloween chapter and, in general, festivity chapters am not very fan of them, and my storie is already planned what will happen in every chapter, I really love jason and jigsaw, maybe someone would do a spin off of that. Sorry if I dissapoint you, really. Thanks for the support and the comments
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Also, the thing of the incubus, sorry, I didn't remember they had that name. And yes, the elevator scene was pretty funny hahaahaha
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Poor boy... let's hope things get better with time
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Hahaahahaha you are right in many points, but about the Fancy thing... he has what he has because of the knowledge of Spike, not him...
T-Wings nothing to say, just, they are assholes, and with time they get worst, I feel it hahhaah
Harmony's... they try to make things well, but they will have a looking trip to that
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HARMONY ELEMENTS AND HARMONY TREE ARE USELESS
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Well, if they have the elements, is for something... also the harmony tree in my World didn't exist, is just a sculture hahaha
Hey Luckymagic, not try to sound like a jerk here, but I noticed that there are multiple times in this chapter like where you have Spike say something to Sunset and it says, she said instead of he said. Right after that when she said something to him, you had Sunset's line, then it had a he said instead of she said. Again, not trying to sound like a jerk but please check the spelling before posting the chapters. Other than that, another great chapter and I can't wait to see what else you have planned for this story.
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Yeah, sorry for that, I had mechanical writting in Spanish and English (this is write without thinking in the spells and just write what the mind thought) and sometime because of that I had spells mistake, sorry for that, really I will be more carefull next time. Thanks you for the support and have a nice day man <3
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Your welcome. If what I wrote sounded really mean, I didn't want it sound like that. I just wanted to let you know. I can also somewhat understand the anger from when my phone sometimes misspells what I really want to type out.
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Yeah, is really annoying when that happen🙄
I almost forgot, This cruise vacation arc needs a music feature involving The Weeknd. Might I recommend the following songs Heartless, Part Monster, Binding Lights, Often, and Earned It
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I got one in mind of the weekend, also, maybe some songs I put you didn't know what are (like the one Spike was listening in this chapter or the one that Zephry sings) but that are songs that in Spain are very popular, in next chapter is going to have a lot of songs, essencialy, reaggeton and some electro, but maybe one of the weekend could fit
how about some of my recommendation of some for chapter 10 or maybe future chapters like [Little Wonders by Rob Thomas and This is war by 30 seconds to mars
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I will ear them this days and maybe there will be some of them hahaha
Changelings being actually sorta makes sense
T-Wings are really getting worse during the story...but there is still something hilarious about them!)
It is funny to see how helpless they are when it comes to building and rebuilding relationships! They literally can't come up with any other option than use nomag for help!😂 I don’t know how they found out about Spike's belt in the first place (maybe one day it will be revealed), but they are really lucky that it happened!))
I even remember how Spike said to himself that if it wasn't for him, T-Wings wouldn't have the Harmonys as their girlfriends. And it's definitely true!😏
And when they found out that nomag won't be able to help them, the only option they came up with is to kill nomag out of rage. But this option won't help them get Harmonys back, and they won't have a boy to make a dirty work for them. It seems lIke they don't think far ahead.
And now Thunder is the only one of their group who I can take seriously. He actually has a personal motives for nomag. And I should give him his due, in the Chapter 2 he showed some concern for Fluttershy. He saw that she was upset, and beat the nomag especially hard (and wanted to give nomag more beatings after school), blaming him for Fluttershy being upset. I remember he said, "He is gonna pay for what he did to Flatters." Looks like Thunder is somewhat concerned about Fluttershy's condition. Eh, if he didn't cheat on her, maybe I could call him a good boyfriend😞...
4- Incubi and succubi well I think there are other discriminated races equal to nomag, if Don (for nomag) and Queen Chrysalis would have this relationship or business in this environment and Spike suffers consequences that he created.
Damn!! I feel so stupid now!!😅😅😂😂😂
You know, I never gone very deep into FNaF franchise. I seen people playing these games when I was younger, and I also knew some things about animatronics, who have kids' souls in them, and I also knew there was a Purple Guy who killed them and made them like that...
But...I...I...
I never knew until today that his real name was William Afton!! Damn, maybe if I was deeper into this franchise, I would realize that Spike's father is a Purple Guy much sooner!!(*facepalm*)😅😅
I decided to read some info about William...and I kinda start to regret it, because something tells me that maybe (just maybe) if I read all of this, I'll get too close to realizing what Spike's father did, and what happened on the Incident before time...
But much to my relief, I see that you've made some changes in the FNaF story. For example, if I remember correctly, all of William's children died, the younger of them, Cassidy, wasn't an exception, and in your World, the younger, Spike, unlike Cassidy, is still alive. And William there also died, but in this World he just dissapeared.
I really thank you for adding changes!)) I hope the Incident will stay a mystery until the right time!😉
Have a good day!!😁😁
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Yeah, most of the T-wings are really stupid except for one especifically that I'm not going to reveal, cause it would be a big spoiler, but is not Thunder.
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Discriminated not... but afraid of them yes hahaha you will see in future chapters
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Hahahahahahahaha everyone expect that this "crossover" is going to be Fnaf but with mlp characters, but for all to finally know, this story is original, not a copy of the copy, you will be surprised with the things that are coming hahahaha
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Oh! Okay then!)) Yeah, I'm being very naive sometimes. Well, at least now I know the truth, and I can calmly read more about FNaF story, not being afraid of "knowing too much about your story"😂😂.
Thanks for information, it made me feel completely relieved!)
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Hahaha no problem at all
More and more characters appear and are mentioned in this story. Heck, you even managed to mention Svengalop here! This is the first fanfic that I read, where he was mentioned!))
I see you added a lot of characters from FiM series. Even Thorax and Chrysallis are here. And maybe Sombra is hidden somewhere in this story too!)
The only thing missing is the famous friendly duo: Starlight and Trixie.
I wonder if they will appear in this story or they don't exist here?
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I can't say anything, but still very characters to appear and all have a roll in my story, ones more important and other less
I’m really hoping that soon spike will actually be able to do things with the girls, and that someone I hate dies :)
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Hahahaha things are going to start getting interesting, don't worry
Since "Under the Purple Hood" is original story and not a copy of FNaF story, then it is obvious that your William Afton is different from original Purple Guy.
And we also know that Spike hates him for his crime that will be revealed when the time is right. And if Spike met his father again, he would have killed him without hesitation.
I'm just saying it would be interesting to look at this from the other side. I mean from your William's side. If he was still alive and was asked if he would have killed his son when he met, what would William answer?...(I hope this time I didn't screw up😂. Bye!😁)
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Hahahaha that's something I can't tell, but I assure you, that they will meet in a future
You know, the fact that Spike has got his Belt back is really good, but it can lead to the problem. What kind of problem? His gun has some frequency jammers...but his Changeling belt doesn't.
And given to everyone's paranoia about nomags, I'm sure, after the cruise ends, the security will want to check the little nomag again, in case if he, for example, created some bomb during cruise.
And if security detects the Changeling belt, which, by their opinion, only militaries and some gangsters could have and which that nomag didn't have when he entered the ship...well, there will be one more trouble in the list...
Let's hope Spike will figure something out when the end of cruise will come.
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Well, the following chapters are going to get very exciting and let me tell you that the security for the changeling belt is the last of the preocupations for Spike, let's see what is going to happen hahaha
Of all 8 characters, there were only two (including Spike) whose mind was always stronger than their heart.
It, of course, is Spike, and the second character was Twilight. During chapters she was the voice of reason for the other girls. She always reminded about how it is dangerous for all of them to date a nomag, and tried her best to prevent her friends from doing something risky. Shw liked Spike, but just a little bit, and Twilight's mind always was stronger than her heart.
But in this chapter...Twilight has changed. Seems like Twilight knew what is going to happen if Pinkie wins, and honestly, I expected that Twilight will say something against that plan...but when the time of Spike and Pinkie's competition has come, Twilight was clearly For this plan, not Against it. She seemed to be forget about the consequences of dating nomag, and she completely cheered for Pinkie (though given to her logic in the past, she should have cheered for Spike in her mind).
And if Twilight from before would be relieved by Spike's winning, then Twilight from now seems to be as saddened as the others.
It looks like Twilight's mind lost the battle against her heart after all. And I have to admit, Spike was really close to losing that battle too...but he won. He won the battle against his heart again.
As the saying goes: "The hardest battle is the battle with yourself." And this is battle that Spike, in a sense, won a long time ago...and battle that he can't lose, because of what could happen if he lost it...
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Well, sometimes, the mind lose and then win again, as live, the emotions are a Rollercoaster, but Twilight is so Twilight... you will see in future chapters not only how complicated is her mind, but also the relationship between her and Spike, that in my opinion, is going to be the most heart-warming of all the 10
Well, I was already thinking about Spike’s father. Now I suddenly wanted to think about his mother. And I'm not talking about his stepmother, but about his own mother...who, unfortunately, died of cancer...
I remember Spike talking to Rarity about her, disguised as a Patriot. He didn't say much (quite understandable, I don't think he could trust Rarity All the information about her). but from what he said, we can understand that Spike really loves her and likes remembering her.
And judging by the fact that no one in city, except Spike himself, knows about how she died (For example, Iron Will said that Spike killed his mother and father), her name is unknown for everyone (including us, readers) too. I hope we'll know her name one day!)
I always wondered, why no one in Canterlot remember Spike's own mother. She wasn't a part of the Incident, she died a long time before it.
For now, I have a theory that before Spike's mother died, their family lived in the other town, and after she died, William Afton moved in Canterlot city with Spike.
I'm sure, if Spike's own mother was now alive, she wouldn't have turned her back on Spike, but her life would have been a nightmare because of the fact that her son is a nomag...
Eh...in a sense, she is actually lucky that she died before the Incident and magic awaking...at least now she can rest in peace...
And one more thing:
There is a very popular thing in movies and stories that I call "Farewell talks". I'm sure you know what this is!)
And I wonder, when Spike's own mother was sick, but still alive, did they have a "Farewell talk" or Spike couldn't get the chance to talk to her one more time before she left this world? And if they had that talk, I wonder, what did she tell him? What were her last words?...
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Well, since Spike was a little child when his mother died, the farewell talk wasn't take place, but in incoming chapters, the relationship with his mom will be discover and how years later, he take the farewell talk.
(There is nothing special here!!☺😅😅)
Considering what Spike went and still going through, it makes sense that many readers who sympathize with the poor boy want him to take revenge on his abusers. Perhaps someone is already trying to imagine how Spike, using his inventive abilities, creates, for example, some cool equipment containing dangerous weapons. I confess, I have imagined something like this many times. Yeah, maybe it is something that Disney would have done quickly😅...
But after reading this story further, I decided to think more about the topic of revenge...
Revenge is a very controversial thing. For some, revenge is good. This gives them satisfaction and the feeling that they have achieved justice.
But for some, revenge only leads to more trouble.
For example, a person who is being avenged for something can get angry and take revenge in return, which will lead to a long cycle. And who knows when it will stop...
Also, for someone, the revenge received will not be enough, and he will continue to take revenge throughout his life, radically changing from the inside...
But the worst thing about revenge is overstepping the boundaries.
I remember reading the novel 'The Count of Monte Cristo'. The main character, Edmond Dantes, was supposed to have a good future, which he honestly deserved with his hard work...but due to the fault of three people, his future was destroyed, and he himself spent more than 10 years innocently in prison.
Edmon eventually escaped from prison, found out who set him up, and set himself the goal of taking revenge on them.
He managed to ruin the lives of these three people...but on the way to his revenge, Edmon unwittingly caused irreparable harm to many innocent people.
Subsequently, he greatly regretted this...
So yeah, revenge can destroy not only people in guilt, but also innocents.
...Now about Spike from 'Under the Purple Hood' story. If no one minds, I'll compare him to the Spike from 'Feral World' story (which was inspired by story here. 'Feral World' is a good story, though in my opinion love relationship between girls and Spike started a little too quickly there). Of course, Spike from 'Feral World' is different from 'Under the Purple Hood' Spike (because is he was the same, it would be more like copying than inspiration).
Like UtPH Spike, FW Spike lost his parents, and he was also getting bullied by the others just because of his race. But what is the main difference between FW Spike and UtPH Spike? FW Spike does care about himself, and this is why he decided to leave the city and making decision about getting revenge on some bullies was very easy for him, and revenge was very sweet for him. UtPH Spike doesn't care about himself, in a sense, he thinks he deserves the pain, so why should UtPH Spike get revenge on ones who hurt him?
As Spike said some time ago, he can't stand when someone who doesn't deserve it, is suffering.
And when he beat Thunder, he wasn't doing this for himself, he was doing this to stand for Scootaloo. And I'm sure, if it was FW Spike, he would have been happy about beating a bully. But UtPH Spike, despite how Thunder treated him, wasn't happy about beating him at all. He even wanted to apologize to Thunder, when he gets out of hospital. So judging by this, beating his bullies won't make Spike happy...
The only person Spike wants to get revenge on, is William Afton, of course. And I have a feeling that Spike wants revenge not for himself, but for ones, who suffered and died because of William's actions.
So, it means that for now Spike will only get revenge for ones who dear to him (like beating Thunder for humiliating Scoots and getting DT and her gang behind bars, as a revenge for what they did to Crusaders). Too bad that revenge for the others is giving to Spike himself more and more problems. If he didn't care about Harmonies and Crusaders, he, for example, wouldn't have the problems with Thunder and Don Bruto now.
...Let's imagine that one day Spike began to take revenge for himself on everyone. What will this actually lead to? There are probably billions of magic creatures who hate nomags. I don't think Spike has enough resources to defeat Everyone, he can eventually get overwhelmed...
And his revenge will also lead to the fact that everyone who hates the nomags will subsequently say to those who once stood up for Spike: "You see, we warned that this nomag is a monster, and you idiots did not listen to us! That scum creature should be destroyed!"
That is, in a sense, by starting to take revenge on everyone, Spike will only prove to his haters that they are absolutely right about him...
And who knows what will happen to Spike if he, on his vengeance path, will accidentally hurt Sunset, Twilight or any other girl he cares about...It is hard for me to imagine, what would happen to Spike's mind, if some of them died because of him...
So maybe it is better for Spike and the ones he care about if Spike will hold himself against wish of getting revenge for himself, if it ever appears😞...
(Did you read this until the end, reader? I'm kinda surprised!☺)
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The revenge is one of the things that this story take. Many readers tell me that my Spike should take revenge but, if Spike take revenge, he will lose the onli principle he has, he would no longer be him. Even with William he would doubt. But there will be circumstances that will put in tense this moral of our spiked boy. Things are going to start getting serious. I think that Feral world of Wildcart is pretty good of course, but I prefer an Spike that his worst enemy is himself hahhaah
Something tells me that every Sunday you have a lot of work, so I hope that my long comment did not distract you then.😅
Today's question is very short))
Every time I think that the Sirens are mermaids here, I think of some TV show (which I don't remember much) where some girls could turn their legs into a mermaid tail while swimming in the water.
So I'm wondering if the Dazzlings here decided to swim underwater (since they have gills, this shouldn't be a problem), would they be able to turn their legs into a mermaid tail?)
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Sunday is my day off, that's why I answer so later hahahaha and the question, actually, in chapter 8 I mentioned their transformation. The three can breath and swim very fast in the water, but also in the air. They transform their legs into golden siren tail hahaha
I remember Fancy mentioned a security camera that was in the commercial port.
Also, judging by the fact that Fancy called the surveillance camera server "our", I suppose it means that this and the other security cameras belong to his company (maybe, if what, I am not expert in such things, sorry😅).
And as we know, police was, of course, interested about who did burn the warehouse...
And there is one mystery about all of this:
Why Shining Armor (or someone else from police) didn't come to Fancy (or whoever owns the camera) and demand the information from security camera on commercial port?
Of course, Fancy wouldn't give the information from that camera to some hackers and bandits...But police has the whole right to demand information from security camera, so that they could solve this case. Then they could see that the warehouse was burned by a 'hooded boy in a sweatshirt'. And since Spike is always wearing the same sweatshirt, it wouldn't be very hard for police to identify with time that the warehouse was burned by that little nomag...
And if Fancy dares to say 'no' to them, the police will have a good reason to suspect that Fancy is hiding something bad...
So why wouldn't police just come and take the information in security camera from Fancy?
Did they forget about that camera, or is there something which prevents police from taking the information?