Live is hard to Spike Drake, a young of 15 years, without magic in a world full of it. But seven girls have the power to calm down the beast inside him, if their status don´t get in the middle.
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Typo in the short description.
"Nomag" is from Harry Potter... Is this also a Harry Potter crossover?
I’m happy that Spike is alive and the Harmony Girls finally told him how they feel. I hope Spike can accept the Sirens as his lovers in the future but I hope those T-Wings morons accept the girls’ rejection or will be neutered by a harmony shot to the nuts
Wonderful chapter. Despite all the painful ups and downs Spike endured he's finally back with the girls, and even the Dazzlings who genuinely want him now. And among the T-Wings, Flash is in the dungeon, Sunburst has accepted defeat, and Thunder remembers the past Spike had blocked from him, the girls, and probably many others. I can't wait to see the reactions of the girls when they wake up and Twilight tells them the good news.
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No. It’s two dimensions merge into one and the people have earned hybrid forms and some didn’t
do we win or lose?
Are you trying to get us to smoke I 100% anti-smoking and vapor that stuff does horrible things to your health
Hmmm need more, also where is starlight unless I missed her in a chapter
I'm thinking some are susceptible to become hybrids some don't I'm thinking this is going to give some pretty bad backlash to those who have magic or are hybrids in the long run if anything happens to the flow of mana.
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Thanks, I will chek it hahaha
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I know hahaha, you would have see that I'm fan of Harry Potter, but in this case, nomag, in my story is not a Harry Potter's thing. My novel is about the racism so, I need a word that's suit with a very well know word in the real world (nigga) so, nomag hahaha
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Lovers I don't think so, as he only see them as friends but... who knows hahaha
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You can imagin what they would react... better AJ take the lazzo for stop them hahaha
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Exactly hahaahah, the reason? You will have to wait
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We win but, at what cost? Hahahah
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HAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA No man, I'm not trying to make you smokers, but think that (at least in my country) all the teens when they came to the years of go disco began to smoke and drink (between the 15 and 16 years old) so I'm based in that. Also, as you see in the story, Spike can't die because of ilness so, he can't get cancer, so... he do whatever he wants. If there are childrens reading my story please, don't smoke, is bad (if you are asking, yes I smoke hahaha)
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Starlight is in the story but... is going to take a long time till she appear (also, there would be a chapter where the G5 will appear, but only in one scene hahaha)
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Well, that's true, in my world, the mana, came with the stamina, those who train more their body and brain will have more mana that those who not. The magicians(pegasus, unicorns and earthlings) had more stamina in the brain, and hybrids (rest of creatures) in the body (muscles, bones...)
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So those that mean in one of the chapters or the bad ending epilog someone or something is going to tamper with the mana pool or the flow of it for their own gain?
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Probably hahahaha
11110951 Loser!!!
1- The girls took the step, but didn't move, didn't send fuck to society that they themselves created this monster and were worried about its reputation. Due to popular pressure from traitors, liars, psychopaths, sociopaths and a rapist I don't know only Soran did it but I think there's more than one (Seriously Dash still hasn't denounced this guy) Damn it, I think they really want to come back, Sundust would give congratulations moments ago, but it was in the middle too, and They Just went to help Spike had an excuse to face the Incubos. 1 point for mermaids.
Everyone ignored that a person was being hunted and murdered by the incubi, sick society.
Matter that I think magical society sees mermaids are seen as succubi and incubi.
2- Spike an asshole, better tell the truth because the longer they found out or someone else said that "he did" otherwise you can lose for real, everything and everyone. Horrible decision to erase the memories, if I did that do you a favor by not staying with her or not going to the same school.
Thunderlane goes slowly and he'll barely interpeat it even more capable of killing Spike in the process.
I think he was the Member of T-Wing o Spike, I think also their memories were erased, explains Sently Flash's fury, something in the memory is pissed off.
3- I have a theory that it was Spike with the girls who released the magic, it may even be that they changed their memory to say that it was in the fight against Discord.
This accident happened when we were all human, it has a lot to do with Spike's biological father, I think Spike's father can be an entity.
4- Going back to the chapter that Spike (Patriot) and Rarity were helping homeless people realize that wasted an opportunity that Rarity help Nomag Elderly and see the consequences of them only these people not Spike already have this kind of empathy, this created more than Rarity as her hypocrisy that everything she talked about the Nomags and Spike did suffers, would heighten her empathy and really see if she herself deserved the element of generosity. P.S: (I still think Rarity should cancel and punch BlueBlood in the face, just because he said in front of everyone he wanted her blowjob.)
They have to see, not only for Spike, but they want to fight for him for real, every day and year, it will get more difficult for them and it will become irresistible in the case of the Nomags, you can see extermination.
I'm wanting a story parallel to that someone is fighting for the rights of the nomag, these Harmonies are a shame in every chapter.
Its history lacks the progress of the Nomag, some change starts to have relief
Wow!)
For now, this is the longest chapter you've ever done, LuckyMagic!!
A lot of things explained here and new mysteries appearing!)
First of all, I like how Harmonies and Dazzlings had to work together to save the one they care about!) The only problem is that from now on reputation of Dazzlings will be damaged, because everyone saw them talking about saving nomag. Obviously, Sirens don't care about it, so everything is fine for now...but it's better for them to hope that their father won't find out about it...
Secondly, here was the information that Celestia and Luna had a chance to become a monarchs, but instead they chose to be high school teachers...
I can only say one thing about it - I guess now I understand why Blueblood doesn't talk to his aunts. I guess he thinks that his aunts are incredible fools, who could have been much more than they are now, and he feels very ashamed of them because of their desicion...
Thirdly, in some movies I saw a cliché, when the boss of a big gang kills the agent if he fails even one task...Honestly, I always thought it is weird way of punishing agents. I know, these bosses want everything to be perfect, but the good agents don't roll around on the road. And killing them just because they failed one task without giving them second chance...I always found it weird.
What's the point of saying that? Well, as we all can see, Thorax was given a task to kill Spike during that day. And Thorax failed. Obviously, Rich (who seems to be out of prison already) and Don Bruto will be very angry when they find out.
So now it's better for Thorax to hope that Don Bruto is not that kind of "cliché" boss and that he won't kill Thorax instead of giving him a second chance...
For now, I think I won't be asking questions about Spike's past, because now even Spike himself is going to look to the future instead of looking to the past...
Although something tells me that one day Spike's past will become the future...
We'll be waiting for the next chapter named "The Fire Ruby". Have a good day!!))
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Hahaaha well, my world, as I say always, is a cruel world, and step by step, the Harmony's are getting more in the rights of the nomags, but is going to be a loooooong travel. Of course you can say that Spike is an asshole because of the ereased memories... but think that, maybe was for good, not for him, for them, for all, somethings must to keep lock. Also, about your theory, only say that, one thing you say is true, the other not, I won't say which one is true, you will have to wait hahahaha
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Yeah, it was though to write and translate, but is worth it for me hahaha. As you read, so much things has been reveal like the brother of Thunder, Tank... and a thing that so many people surely has passed, What's that book that the Dazzlings used? Thats the real question of the Chapter, Why they have it? Why Spike know that book? Why he was scared? Things that everyone should thing. On other hand, the Celestia and Luna Choose, is a very important thing that will throw to a subplot on the novel and, as you know, blueblood is envolved hahahaha, I had just started writing Chapter 11, IDK when it will be updated but I'm sure all of you will love it hahaha
Don't worry, I agree that the biggest mystery in this Chapter is a book that Dazzlings have and which Spike knows about😁. I'll just say about something that is not important for now, but it might become important in the future chapters.
Spike told Sonata that if she remembers anything, she'll get herself killed. Of course, he wouldn't tell her what exactly is going to kill her, cause like you said "some things should stay locked".
And I'm sure it is good for Sonata that she promised not to try to remember...
...But there is one person who never promised that to anyone, and with time he keeps remembering more and more things. For example, he remembered his little brother "Tank", and Spike seems to be really scared about it.
And from what Spike said to Sonata, it seems for me that if and when Thunder remembers EVERYTHING, something very terrifying will come to kill him...
So if it is true, I think when the time of remembering everything comes for Thunder, it is better for him to watch his back too...
Have a good day <3
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Yeah, is dangerous for Sonata to remember what happen, and for Thunder, the same... but... what if the danger of Thunder, is not the same as the Sonata? Hahaha I can't say no more
I can already tell that you need to work on the grammar my dude, good concept though.
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Thanks hahaha, and I would do, every chapter I try to improve my translation skills, have a nice day
The more I view this stor, the more I want for Spike to just say "Fuck it" and just turn in the vengeful villain the world deserveds and burn it to the damn ground. The ungrateful bastards treat him like so much crap...they can all live in the soiled bed they laid with. Even the Harmony Girls are guilty...all this time they are trying to woo Spike...where the hell were they before?? Fuck these hypocritical bitches...
Maybe whatever happened in the past most have effected every thing, something are better left forgotten is a strong enfaces, that mean whatever happen in the past is still around and may be creating things so dangerous that the longer the world remains like this the more whatever or whoever is winning or losing or maybe neither depending on their motives.
Which means Spike may have kept some or did not forgotten the memories in his past and he has a big part to play in all of them, and the blame might not be on him, may be the danger is due to the ignorance of their past mistakes or something they did so horrible that they are willing to cross a dangerous line that should never be crossed.
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Spike sometimes feel like that totally hahaha, but he has some reasons to keep his "blood thirst" away
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What happen in the past was the main reason of all, something that more than a crime or something, was a sacrifice
By the way, the moment in which Fluttershy's secret is revealed to us is quite interesting. I liked how well the concept of succubi (which I hadn't heard much about before this story) was explained.
Fluttershy is probably the only one in the world who contains the poison of a succubus and at the same time remains a pegasus instead of completely turning into a succubus.
Now she is in love with Spike, and succubi power makes her obsessed with him and just him...
So, it actually creates one question in my mind:
"What if the one she loves dies?". And by that, I mean dies without a chance to get back to life. For now, it wasn't told how Succubus reacts on death of the one she is in love with.
If Spike dies and never returns to life, will poison of succubi let Fluttershy be able to get over it and find new "target" one day? Or Spike's death will make poison drive Fluttershy crazy so much that she will become completely different person, and never be able to become the same again?
Something tells me that maybe we will see it in the Chapter named "Consequences". Would be interesting to see how poison of succubi will make Fluttershy react on Spike's death on that chapter.
Have a good day, everyone!)
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Well, succubus are like vampires in my world, if they fall in love, is for eternity, of course, they can have another couple but never gonna be the same
The chapter consequence has to be multiple people making the most negative choices that might effect them in the long run or maybe a signal choices might have a cause and effect event that may link the others into one big mess. I'm feeling if the society is ever going to intervene in this relationship it not only going to cost the girls their boyfriend, maybe the entire worlds only person to advance and develop new forms of technology and maybe cause a back lash to all those who posses magic or are hybrids to have disabilities, taking away their magic, and a coma that no one can wake from.
This including the foolish politicians and people who allowed this to happen. Both the innocent and the guilty will be effected by this and will damage the society they built.
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Actually yeah and no, Consecuences is one of the alternative endings of the story (the bad ending to be more exactly) and because of somethings that, actually, you say, is going to be a very tragic ending
Also, if you are asking, what is the canon ending? Well, that question I will answer in Chapter 44: The Final Duel
A lot of magicals in a ship saw that Spike was out of a cabin and had a gun with him. And Shining was the one who vouched for him. And magicals actually can remember about that later...
Well, let's hope that after this cruise is over, Shining Armor won't have much trouble because of Spike.
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Shinning is going to have problems, but not because of that, when that happen, dveryone was busy passing of the nomag, they don't even care that he had a gun, most of them think that the Incubus kill him
For now, everything is going good for Spike. For the first time I thought: "Maybe he won't need that butterfly knife anymore!"
But on the other hand, Spike's traumas are still with him. And I remember that author told someone that even the Elements of Harmony can't help Spike, so it seems that his traumas can't be healed.
I guess the girls will have to come to terms with the fact that Spike uses the butterfly knife for...you know what.
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As you said, not even the girls can help him from his phantoms of the past and is going to be a large trip to Spike, to throw away the butterfly knife
That moment with Zephry and the drunk Indigo was really funny!)
My guess is that Crystal Prep students in this world are not as disciplined as they are in the original as they even get booze for themselves. (and in chapter 10 we can see that these schools are actually in a good relatinship).
Zephry very often acts stupid. And he is not the only one. The Snips and Snails are also acting stupid like him.
Of course, these three (Zephry, Snips and Snails) are also giving Spike a beatings when they meet...but I think that if Spike would want to get revenge on those who humiloated him, they would be his least targets. They are very weak and I'm sure that Spike could easily beat them if he wanted to.
And even if we throw away their hatred for nomags for a minute...they still don't seem to be nice. Snips and Snails are almost as old as Spike, but they really have problems with their big attraction to the girls. And Zephry is just getting into situations, which make Fluttershy feel embarrassed. I don't think that Spike could get along with them even if he had magic.
And I'm actually kinda interested if Zephry, Snips and Snails are going to give some affect to the plot. Or are they here just for "comedy part"?
(Por cierto, veo que has cambiado. Literalmente, hace una semana todavía estabas riendo locamente (lo que me recordó a "Joker"), y en realidad vi eso como tu característica única. Pero después de ese tiempo dejaste de reírte y te pusiste más serio. Actúas más como "Batman" ahora.
Como preguntaría "Joker": "¿Por qué tan serio?"😅
¿Estás bien? ¿Algo pasó?
Ah, y lo siento si mi español es terrible😅.)
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For Snips and Snails there is nothing more I can said hahahahaha, they are just there for fun, but Zephry is going to be very very very important in the finals chapters, why? You will have to wait for it
(Y estoy bien jajajaja solo que se me han olvidado las risas porque escribo rápido las contestaciones, estoy de exámenes y es lo que hay😅, muy buen español por cierto jajaja)
I think the chapter "The Fire Ruby" will raise new questions. For now, my main question for this chapter will be: "If Fire Ruby breaks into few pieces, will its pieces still have the power?".
I remember I saw a movie where the magic stone was broken, but its pieces still had the power of that stone.
And I am just thinking that maybe if it works with Fire Ruby, then Spike (if and when he gets it) can break Ruby in two pieces and one piece give to Rarity, and the other one keep to himself. I remember that Rarity has shown a big interest for a Ruby in chapter 7.
So yeah, for now this will be my main question for a chapter 11.
Heh, let's see one day how that chapter answers this question!)
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I will spoil you, with the penguins of Madagascar
*The Fire Ruby brake*
Rico: Kaboom?
Skipper: Yes Rico, Kaboom
*planet gets destroyed*
Hahahahahahaha
This will be explain in future chapters hahahahaaha
Very emotional. Happy I found this!
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Hahahahaha thanks you
Sometimes I thought about the moment that many people's memories of the terrible event of the past were suppressed. (This chapter was what made me think about it again.)
Apparently, the injuries of none of those who were at the incident did not disappear. They are clearly incurable. But they can be suppressed.
So I'm sure that both the girls and some other residents of the city still have psychological trauma, but they are in a suppressed state. In general, it is quite justified and interesting move.
Spike's injuries are not suppressed. Sometimes I thought: "¿Por qué Spike simplemente no suprime sus propios recuerdos sobre todo lo que sucedió en el incidente y sobre sus amigos muertos, para que los fantasmas del pasado no lo atormenten?"
And then obvious question came to me as an answer: "Entonces, ¿cómo le explicarán Discord y Fancy a Spike a dónde fueron el padre y la madrastra de Spike?"
Spike lost his life back then and, unlike with others, the suppression of memories will not allow him to build a new life.
Plus, the horrible events made Spike less naive and soft. And I'm sure, if Spike was the same as he was before the incident, he wouldn't be able to survive all these years, and all these beatings and racism would bring him to death very quickly...
So I think there is some good things for Spike in keeping all these memories...at least there is someone who still remember the ones who died.
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Of course, the ereased memories block the trauma, but if they remembee, the trauma will come back. Also Spike did a great sacrifice for not eressed his memories, but all have consequences as you will see
(Buen español por cierto, ha mejorado👌)
Se desconoce cuántos países existen en este Mundo... pero quizás el planeta tenga algunas similitudes con nuestra Tierra.
Se menciona en la historia que ese país, donde está Canterlot, se llama Equerica. Seguro que suena como América, jeje. ¡No me sorprendería si Equerica en el mapa mundial se parece a los EE. UU.!)
Y además... vi que uno de los futuros capítulos (capítulo 21, para ser más exactos) de la historia se llama "España".
Me siento un poco confundido acerca de eso. Parece que habrá una España real, y nuestros personajes principales irán allí en el futuro... Hm... sí, hay similitudes con la Tierra. Tal vez incluso veamos a nuestros héroes atravesando el Océano Atlántico. (Quiero decir, si hay similitudes reales con nuestra Tierra, entonces tendrán que atravesar ese océano para llegar a España desde su versión de América)
No sé qué tan importante será ese capítulo, ¡pero esperaremos para verlo!))
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I will answer this in English for everyone who want to know and they don't know Spanish, so, my world is basically our world, changing the names of the countries with the excepcion of Spain, Why? Well, that's will be explain in that chapter and is pretty important because, our little Spike, is very envolve with Spain because, spoiler: her mother was from Spain. So, things are going to be very interestings hahaha.
(Increible el buen español que sabes para escribir un comentario entero así jajaja, enhorabuena y gran progreso👏)