Live is hard to Spike Drake, a young of 15 years, without magic in a world full of it. But seven girls have the power to calm down the beast inside him, if their status don´t get in the middle.
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Yo this right here is the best I've ever read it super good congrats you have made a masterpiece
10851296
Thanks, really, and this is just the beginning <3
Invention?
Then, you would have deserved it.
Who cares?
That’s her own fault.
What does she mean by that?
Did she give him the finger?
It would have been so hilarious if rainbow just struck her.
I wouldn’t care.
There are some crazy motherf*ckers in this story.
He was going to pay for it.
Did this bacon haired b*tch knew he cut himself, but still bullied him?
Yes the f*ck she is.
Is she talking about caramel or spike?
Partly?
What the actual f*ck? Are these girls bipolar?
That boy has a name.
Power what?
But, what’s stopping them from beating your a** at school?
What?
That would have been so good to record.
Even as a nomad my boy still coming in clutch.
Doesn’t he mean prison?
He never touched her.
Don’t they have gods at their school?
My boy may be a nomag, but he’s also the GOAT.
10851396
I already comment
10851650
Really?
This has been getting really good. Hopefully all of the girls will stop calling and referring to Spike as nomag around him and amongst each other. And Spike won't have to put up with any staged abuse by the girls just so they can keep their reputations spotless around others.
10851861
Yes, between them, they Will stop calling him nomag in private but... they Will have problems in public if they show afecction to him and you'll see that in the coming chapters
10851396
Hahaha I really like your comments Pete, for you to know, bipolars is not the correct word, they are confuse, they don't know what to do, follow their hearths or their minds, and is a internal battle that in few chapters they Will solve (partly). Is a cruel World what I made.
10852005
Thank you. It comes from experience. What do you mean by partly?
10851861
Really? That’s what you’re hoping? I was hoping the students get a foot up their a**es.
Sorry, but I'm already in love with story hahahaha. The plot and the content are so dark and deep! Maybe you should re-read and fix some pronoums mispellings later, because sometimes it gets a little bit confusing when there is "he" regarding to a female character and "she" regarding to a male.
Still, this is a work that I could not idealize even in my best dreams (I was writing a story in a fanfiction website for my native language, but unfortunately my procrastination and lack of creative ideas left me with nothing more than 3 chapters).
I hope that you don't mind my bad english, because I am from Brazil, and I hope that you keep up your insanely good work!
10852018
Partly because in the final part of my novel they commit a very hard mistake... but let's not spoil things
10852046
Don't worry mate, I'm from spain and I don't mind the bad english, and yes, maybe one day I'll re-read the story and correct the spelling mistakes but just right now am writting the Chapter 7 and I want to finish all the novel first.
10852048
Wait, so there are parts?
10852088
Yeah, this first chapters are the first part of the novel
10852096
How many parts are there?
3 or 4 parts, is a large novel
10852107
And you said they commit a hard mistake? Also, you forgot to hit the reply button?
10852166
Yes, a mortal mistake they Will commit, and yes I forgot the button
10852176
On a scale of 1 to 10 how bad is it?
10852188
It depends, how much you like Spike in this story? Hahahahahah
10852197
Yikes. That bad?
10852203
In that case, 10/10, you are going to suffer, sorry hahaha
10852206
Does it have something to do with those multiple endings you talked about?
10852208
The mistake is Canon, the ending there are only one Canon (the good ending)
10852223
So the mistake only happens in the good ending?
10852228
Nop, the mistake is part of the Canon story, the things that don't happens are the bad and neutral ending
10852269
So the mistake happens in all the endings?
10852287
Yep, in all of them because without the mistake, it won't have ending
10852303
And the good ending is the canon ending?
10852307
Yes, it is, but in my opinion I prefer the bad and neutral but I want this story to end good, but only this time hahaha
10852309
Does something happen in those endings?
10852349
Well, in one everyone is happy and in the other two, sadness everywhere
10852356
Is that why you prefer them? Also, what do you mean by this time?
10852366
Yeah, I prefer the sad ends, and by this time I mean that in the next stories, are going to have one ending and is going to be a bas ending
10852409
Oh ok.
I already started the Chapter 7, a little spoiler, Spike is going to be discover with the Changelling Belt by one of the Harmonies, Thunder is going to come back and a little only a little of the past of Spike would be discover and left a lot of cuestions for next chapters, thanks all of you for the support again. Have a nice day <3
10853680
Thanks for the heads up. How long is the wait?
10853963
One week or something like that
10854016
Oh ok.
10851396
The reason why they do it in public, well mostly, is because of fear and/or pride. Likely the former.
10852309
Glad you decided that.
10857668
That’s kind of a bullsh*t reason when you think about it.
10857690
That's the point hahahaha
10857668
Exactly hahaha
10857678
Well, I don't really like the idea of a good ending, but I think that Spike deserve a good ending in this story
10858509
I know. Doesn’t make them anything less of cowards.