Live is hard to Spike Drake, a young of 15 years, without magic in a world full of it. But seven girls have the power to calm down the beast inside him, if their status don´t get in the middle.
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I can't wait to see the girls get the revenge on Thunder Lane
Holy crap this was some chapter. Nice Spike got to finally enjoy a good birthday with the girls. And it was funny watching him get snatched up by several of them interrupting the other from a very passionate moment. But at least Twilight got to be more passionate with him, and got a glimpse from her past before everything changed, and now knows of Spike's pain when his sister died. But Zephyr's been tailing them and taking pictures to blackmail the girls, and now Thunderlane has cornered Spike on the beach ready to kill. And Discord has to deal with the changeling brothers while protecting the ruby. I sure hope the girls get to Spike in time before Thunder finishes him
Wow, that’s some birthday present.
Lucky
She can do that?
Favorite tea
Sunburst, you suck at lying.
22:45?
Sixteen is the legal age?
I honestly didn’t know that. I thought she was gonna propose.
Wow, he’s that short?
Why didn’t she tell him?
That is dope!
So her lightning also allows her to be a technopath.
That’s actually pretty smart of dash.
Who ever that was must’ve enjoyed the show.
Wait, do dragons exist?
There are different types of dragons?
They want to expose something big.
That’s actually pretty wise.
Okay, that’s actually pretty funny.
Genormishy?
How?
Okay, what are these powers?
I honestly forgot about that.
That’s a little bit confusing.
Wouldn’t that be suspicious?
Another shadow?
So this was before they got their magic.
Brown? Did the magic change her hair color?
Last?
What did she mean by that?
Who caused that?
Finally and you upload let's go
I know that I might be spoiling here but spike is gonna kill thunder and it's gonna get him tagged as a murderer by the students or maybe not ? who now ?
Happy for Spike getting the love he deserves but don't like how Thunder is using blackmail and attempted murder to get a girl who refuses after discovering her man been cheating on her since they've been together. Also about his relationship with both the Rainbooms and Dazzlings; I say have an open relationship since they all love Spike. Also hoping that Ruby saves Spike by giving him Dragon Magic before Thunder kills the poor victim
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I say Spike will nick him in the arm or leg. To avoid the courts from giving him an immediately guilty for being a nomag
a random thing:
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something else random:
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The girls? Are you sure? hahaha
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I think that things are going to get very more complicated in next chapter, I assure you hahahaha
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Well, many questions as always hahaha
First of them, yep, is that short hahahahaha (if you see the girls and him, for you to know, to Dash (the shortest of them) Spike is a head and a half shortest that her.
Yes, dragons exist here and are some types of dragons and the biggest ones are the berserkers, originals from the north (in our world, are the ones from alaska, finland, norway, russia...)
And finally, yes, the magic give him green color in the hair hahahahahaha
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Hope you like it hahaha
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Who knows, who knows, because are many types of murder... you will have to wait to discover it hahaha
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Blackmail? You sure that those photos are for blackmail? Hahahahaha
And I don't think that Spike would get powers, you know that, sometimes is better the intelligence that the force hahahahaha
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Like family guy said:
Who the fuck start a conversation like that? I just sit down hahahahaahahaha
And as usual, I am leaving my comment here!)
It's good to see that you're back with another cool chapter)
I must say that I actually expected that Twilight will be the one who will kiss Spike in this chapter. Although you tried to confuse us, when Twilight's first attempt was thwarted by Rainbow.
It seems that Spike's skill of inventing has some curse. The other inventions are succesfull, but when Spike creates robots...it doesn't go well eventually. I guess that he should never create any more robots, since they only bring death and pain to people. It is lucky that no one asks Discord to create a robot, because I think that Spike won't be able to bring himself to create another robot. Because eventually...it will kill someone.
So Zephry was the one who followed Spike with a camera all this time. I wonder what actually motivated him to do that in the first place. Maybe in the next chapters we'll find out))
And I wonder, was Zephry really going to upload Fluttershy's photo with Spike on the Internet? I understand that he is disgusted, but he knows that if he uploads the photo, his sister's life will be ruined. Does Zephry really want that? This is actually pretty mean. Although maybe he didn't really mean that he'll upload photo with Fluttershy as well.
In any case, I'm sure that Fluttershy won't avoid a "serious talk" with her brother in the future.
But now someone else has got these photos. Is that an enemy or a friend? Find out in the next chapters!)
So Discord's powers are lowered in this story. I suppose that if Discord had his full power, he would have gone insane and been very dangerous even for his allies. It's good that now he'll have some help. Although I wonder where is Celestia and Luna?
And one more thing:
I'm surprised that Thorax manages to put a good fight to the ones who are magically stronger than him. In chapter 10, he was fighting against all Harmonies and Dazzlings. And he was actually winning! (until Spike came up with his plan). One of the main girls said that they could take down a lot of incubu without a problem...It seems that she was lying. How did Harmonies defeat Chrysalis, if they can't even defeat just one incubu right now? And now there are two of them. Maybe you, LuckyMagic, actually lied to us. Maybe the Incubu are the ones who should be in the first place of your tier list!)
I'm sure the fight will be hard for the girls and Discord.
Also, someone caused the explosion of hotel? Is there a new enemy in horizon? Well, we should wait to find out, heheh)
Have a good day everyone!😁
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Are we ever gonna see the dragons?
So he does have magic?
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Well, LuckyMagic told me long time ago that dragons are going to be very important in the future of this story, so yeah, we will surely see them. And about Spike having magic...well, author told me that in some accident magic only changed the color of Spike's hair (and eyes as well, I guess), but that's it. It didn't give him powers. And I don't think that Kara Sevda counts.
is he ever going to get magic?
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Hahaha seems that this chapter leave not only you, but everyone with more questions than answers that everyone of them would be solve in future chapters as always hahahaha
But the last question I would like to say that, I'm not lying in anything, but think that my magic is a little different, one thing is the concept of have magic, that is the power that a living thing have in it's (the pegasus had more magic than earthlings), and other thing is the power that living thing get (because of exercise, yeah, like gym).
With this, what I say is, yeah, the incubus could be less powered in magic, but if the exercise like an army (what they are) their power increase, and Discord didn't exercise so much and the girls, in chapter 10, had their power lowered because they transferred some to Twilight to do the Za Warudo hahahahaha (or maybe... when Cryshalis... they had help hahahaaha)
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What Wardoun said hahahahahaah
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Short answer: No, never (unless...) hahahahaagah
I wonder...
I wonder if Thunder from this world has a dream in his life.
You know, even the worst person has something to dream about.
I remember that original Thunderlane actually wanted to be a Wonderbolt. He trained with Rainbow in academy. And he really succeeded. He became one of the Wonderbolts.
I wonder if UTPH Thunder has a dream to become one of Wondercolts. After all, he trained a lot, so he might have a change to get in the team.
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OI stop being insane, ONLY i CaN bE InSaNE! HAHAHAHAAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
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Of course, he has dreams, and one is enter the Canterlot Football Club and have a big family, but for all, his biggest dream is become famous hahaha
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Jo jo jo, you dare to challenge me? Let it be HAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH...(EVIL LAUGHS IN SPANISH)
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HAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHHAAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH HAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHHAAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH HAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHHAAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH HAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHHAAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH (EVIL INSANE LUAGHTER IN MAORI)
anyway whens spike going to get some pussy?
Oh dear, it seems that there is going to be spam by laugh competition. After all, everyone has his (her) insane side, it's just that everyone has it differently.
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Hahahahaahahahahahaha you give me good vibes engineer, and I can beat a descender of the New Zeland natives hahahaha
And in Chapter 18, is not that he will have pussy, he is going to get drain out hahahaahahahahhahahahahaha (#prayforlilspike)
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Hahahahaha don't worry, spam is good two, three times, not all time hahaha, and yeah, everyone has an insane part, the thing is took advantage of it haahaha
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Oh ok. Gotcha
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really? we can be brutal, I mean, I can take on 3 guys and barely feel their attacks
Heh, you know, I think there is actually one plus in that explosion that interrupted Spike's and Twilight's hot situation.
(Considerando que Twilight iba a "divertirse" con Spike en la playa, en realidad fue una suerte que la explosión la detuviera. Porque si no fuera por la explosión, Spike probablemente habría tenido mucha arena dentro de su pene después de su tiempo con Twilight, jejejeje.)
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Hahahahaha I wouldn't doubt about it hahaha
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I think that the less problem to "lilspike" is to have sand when it comes to that situation hahahahahahahaha
Maybe Discord should have given the Ruby to Celestia or Luna and pretend that he has it.
Firstly, I actually thought that since Ruby can destroy matter, Discord could use it to turn Pharynx and Thorax into nothing. But on the other hand, if Discord takes the Ruby out of his pocket, then there's a big chance that one of the incubus will steal it right from Discord's hand before he uses it. So yeah, it's better for Discord not to risk.
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Exactly, but also, he doesn't use the power of the ruby because is very powerfull and can be very dangerous for the others, Spike could use it because he was alone on the island, but, who know hahahaah
I'm still waiting for the the point where Spike proves everyone right and why nomags are hated, but I am assumimg this chapter is gonna prove the opposite--I guess Im still a vengeful bastard that wants Spike to destroy the world to make everyone pay for his pain and suffering...
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Hahahaahahaha time to time pal, time to tima don't worry hahahahaah
Interesting. Since Thunder actually had a lot of exercise in his life (he isn't called the strongest student in the school for nothing), does that mean that he also has very strong magic inside of him? If so, then it's better for Spike to hope that Thunder doesn't know much magic spells. Cause if Thunder can use, for example, levitation spell, then Spike has no chances...
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Well, actually, Thunder can't cast any spell, because he is a pegasus hahahaha but Spike better warm up, he has an anormal resistance, speed, and force, only his rage can give Spikey a chance so, need to be quick and intelligent to fight him hahahaha, you will see in next chapter
So Don Bruto never leaves any business unfinished. So I guess his agents will keep going after Spike (after all, Don Bruto ordered to kill him, and Spike is still alive), but this time more carefully, probably like agents of Professor Moriarty (if you ever read Sherlock Holmes, you understand who is that). But for now, this isn't really matter. Cause if Don Bruto gets a ruby, he won't have to worry about Spike, since Spike will be just like a inconspicuous atom, when Don Bruto gets a power of god.
(Lo único que todavía me molesta de Don Bruto por ahora es... si de alguna manera estuvo relacionado con el incidente. Tal vez se revele en el capítulo 35. Después de todo, ese capítulo no se llama "Don Bruto Marequentis" por nada. Creo que descubriremos más sobre su historia de fondo allí.
Tal vez sea una estupidez de mi parte pensar que podría haber una conexión entre un traficante de drogas que vive en algún lugar muy lejos de Canterlot y que ni siquiera parecía saber sobre la existencia de Spike hasta ahora (después de todo, Don Bruto no reconoció a Spike por su sudadera) y el incidente que sucedió en una ciudad, y del cual pocos recuerdan...
Pero bueno, recuerdo que nadie pudo encontrar una conexión entre el simple maestro Moriarty y los intentos de asesinato contra Sherlock Holmes. Pero Sherlock sabía de esta conexión.
Entonces, puede que ahora esté pensando en algo estúpido, pero todo es posible jejejeje)
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I agree spike gets dragon powers but due to inexperience he lets his anger take control and kills thunder . Though I’m sure the girls will help him through it
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Well, I can assure you one thing, Don Bruto and Spike have more similarities than differences hahahaha both wants the ruby for different thing but with a common one hahahaha I can't say no more
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If hypothetically Spike get dragon powers thing will really get hard, he wouldn't be able to control them because of the traumas and the anger, it could be an apocalypse hahahaaha
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Ah I see, is spike a hero or anti hero in this ? I always wondered lol
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Depending of how you consider Spike itself haahahaha, you can consider him a hero, a villian or antihero, that only depend of you hahaahah
I must say that yeah, your Spike has a lot of similarities with the canon one. Both Spikes did a lot of things that are pretty hard for being like them to do. But there's one thing that they could never do, even with support from friends. This thing is called "forgive himself". Yeah, every time when girls do something not nice to Spike, he forgets and forgives easily, but when Spike messes up himself, he can't forgive himself and that leads to consequences. I still remember how canon Spike screwed up by trying to frame the Owlovicious (cause Spike thought that Owlovicious is going to replace him), and when after this Twilight told Spike about how much she is dissapointed and that Spike doesn't act like Spike she knows and loves, he couldn't forgive himself and ran away from home.
And sometimes, the support from friends is not enough for someone to forgive himself. Cause despite the support that your Spike got from Twilight in the day she remembered, he still kept blaming himself for the other 8 years.
So yeah, both Spikes are able to go to the volcano, bravely stand up against the dragons, even save the world with the risk of them dying. But with all of that, forgiving himself is still impossible thing for them to do...