Live is hard to Spike Drake, a young of 15 years, without magic in a world full of it. But seven girls have the power to calm down the beast inside him, if their status don´t get in the middle.
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Apparently, Spike would never have gone anywhere without his purple sweatshirt.
It is noticeable that he wears it everywhere - at school, on the street, I bet, even in the house he walks in it.
And I'm pretty sure he has had this sweatshirt since the days when there was no magic, because I remember exactly from the Sunset story that when she first met Spike, he was wearing this purple sweatshirt.
And he never appeared in any other sweatshirt. Looks like this purple sweatshirt is very important to Spike (considering that even in the picture it is depicted). Perhaps it was a gift from one of his family members (from mom, dad or stepmother). I wonder who gave him this sweatshirt?)
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You will see in future chapters who give him the sweatshirt and yes, it's very important yo him, even some nights he sleep wearing it
Great chapter, by the way!)
I liked the moment when Spike sang a "Game Over" song. Nobody even booed him after his performance😆
I'll also wait for the next chapters to find more about William Afron (And I hope we'll find out one day if Spike's father became a magical being or he is remained as nomag)
I'm not sure if the fact the girls finally broke up with the T-Wings is good news for Spike's life.
On the one hand, the Harmonies are finally free of these idiots, and only Thunderlane can guess that Spike is connected with this, and on the other hand, the T-Wings kept Spike's life only because he did the "dirty work" for them. ... And now, when there is no need to do this work, they do not need to keep the nomag alive ...
Now the only thing that can possibly prolong Spike's life temporarily is Thunderlane. After all, Thunder wants to end Spike in person, in one-on-one combat, and he is unlikely to want his friends to take this opportunity away from him.
Well, let's see how Spike survives this after the cruise!))
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Thanks hahahaha, well, the T-Wings will have to use Spike in the future so, he is going to stay alive (at least until Thunder takes revenge.
William Afton for now is a mystery what happen to him, but Dazzlings are going to discover some things in future chapters that is going to put them in a serious sitiation because *ahem* feelings will start to grow... I should left to do spoilers... maybe hahahaah
"Bad living together... I hear you kid" Aria told him "Our parents aren't exactly people you're comfortable living with either."
Hmm ... what she said to him was true or just made up to win his confidence?
Let me explain why I'm suddenly interested in this.
You see, this is the first story I've read in which one of the Dazzlings mentioned something about their parents. Even "The Girls Of My Life" did not mention their parents.
And finally it happened!) I should thank you actually!😉. Thank you)😆😆
That is why this moment is interesting to me. (maybe it is weird excuse, but still).
So i wonder, was this true what Aria said? And if it wasn't, then how Dazzlings' relationship with their parents is really going?)
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50/50 one of the reasons that made the personality of the Dazzlings is because of the relationship with their parents, but time to time
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Okay then, thank you again!))
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No problem at all :)
He is your source of income.
Already fucked with everyone, not that thinks in that sense.
Seriously as it is an element of honesty.
Thunderline, the prophet!
Dash, you don't need to go back to him, only the girls are still with pseudo-boyfriends.
23:59 =
00:00 =
If you fall for them, you are desperate and not a sucker.
I predict a Black Lag.
The worst that you live in the world with 0 EMPATHY, many friendships and family were destroyed, tell that to all nomag, born of family with magic or that their parents approached being nomag or children ashamed of having nomag parents
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You really are into my story man hahahaa I love your comments Tx, I always love what my followers thinks about the scenes and the characters. But hey, little by little the girls are changing their minds.
Why didn’t you just let him die?
That’s all he cares about?
Why didn’t he tell them that before they bullied him?
A princess?
Did he forget who put him in the hospital?
Don’t even bring up the elements, because none of y’all represent them.
Despite pretending they’re actually showing more support than the harmony’s.
Shut up, pinkie pie. He wouldn’t be in that situation if it wasn’t for y’all.
You know you’re trash when the dazzlings help someone before you do.
Yikes.
Do it outside the school, tell discord, tell celestia, etc.
Oh god. I’m really trying not to tear up.
You better.
Didn’t know they could do that.
Where was all this energy at when spike was getting bullied?
How?
Cake?
It’s always the quiet ones.
Not gonna lie, that does sound fun.
Why would that matter? You’re a princess.
Do they?
It should have been a physical one.
She’s not entirely wrong, but she needs to use that for motivation.
She’s not wrong.
Zecora was wrong.
Finally, grow some back bone.
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The comment of Fluttershy confesion make me laugh very hard hahahaha always the quiet ones hahaahhaah
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The ok’d saying popped in my head when she confessed.
About time the girls dumped those losers.
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I didn't know what would you say when Fluttershy litterally "eat" spike in future chapters hahahaha
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Things are getting interesthing don't you think?
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I don’t know what I’d say if that happened either, but I’m pretty sure I’d come up with something.
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Yes, but they still got a long redemption arc ahead of them.
Well, if I remember correctly, Spike's Changeling belt is now broken by Applejack who tore it while ripping it off Spike. Hmm ... what if the T-Wings want him to turn into someone for their mission again, and Spike doesn't have a belt? Well, let's hope Spike can and will have time to bungle himself a new belt. It is his invention after all.
Also, Twilight here seems to be the voice of reason for the other Harmony's.
She is the only one who doesn't seem a little crazy for Spike, and likes him "just a little bit". Also, unlike the others she doesn't seem to have any sexual thoughts about Spike.
And the main thing, Twilight is the only one who understands that they can't be 100% sure if Spike likes them too.
Looks like relationship between Spike and Twilight is going to be special!)
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For the changeling belt don't worry, will come back (is one of the arcs of the story) and yes, the most Suecia relationship is going to be Twi and Spike hahaha the next 2 chapters are going to be two of the most important so stay update hahahaha
Oh, don't mind me, I'm just writing a delusional comment here!))😅😅
As far as I can see, Spike's life was much better in the days before the Incident. From what Thunderlane was saying, Spike had people dear to him besides Sunset and his half-brother and sister, but he lost everyone ...
The description for this story says that Magic ruined Spike's life at many points...
But now, after I've read the chapter and thought about the information, I'm starting to think that...
That the description is wrong. Magic did NOT ruin Spike's life. Why? Because...his life was already ruined. It was not magic that became the disease that killed Spike's own mother. It wasn't magic that made Sunset stop being friends with him. All people dear to Spike are dead (given Spike's apparent hatred for his father, his father, in a figurative sense, is no longer alive for Spike, because a man whom Spike once loved and respected died in him).
And magic is not to blame for this. Cancer is to blame for the death of Mom, and the fear of Sunset herself for her reputation is to blame for the breakdown of Sunset's friendship with him. But then Spike still had a life.
His life was destroyed after the loss of the rest of his loved ones (such as Garble and Smolder) and the Incident is to blame for this. The Incident ruined his life, not magic.
The magic only sprinkled salt on a long-formed and always fresh wound. It made almost everyone hate the beings like him. And the beatings that Spike gets, he actually thinks that he deserves that.
And even if Spike had magical powers, it would not bring back those he had lost. Therefore, it is unlikely that the possession of magic would have changed something in his ruined life in a positive direction...because the traumas would still be with him...
I don't think magic made Spike's classmate and the other people so violent. After all, judging by the fact that they were not Spike's friends even before the advent of magic, they have always been the way Spike sees them every day now. They simply did not show their nature to the fullest, fearing responsibility to society. And now the magic just allowed them to remove this responsibility.
So I'm not surprised that Spike doesn't hate magic, because it wasn't the magic that ruined his life...
Good luck!))
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Wow don't worry, I like this type of comments, is true, magic didn't destroy the life of Spike, but it can't let him grow, but in future chapters you'll know more relevant information of Spike and the magic hahaha
Awesome, loving this, please keep going.
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I will hahaha
The fact that our dear sirens are so diligently searching for information about Spike's family in order to find a reason to send him to prison is very remarkable ... But I'm wondering, why complicate things? After all, it is enough to simply inform the police that this nomag attacked another student and almost beat him to death. There were many witnesses, they will confirm it, and that's it, he will go to jail in the blink of an eye.
And actually yeah, why on the day Spike beat Thunderlane, none of the students and teachers called the police to arrest Spike and instead let him continue his studies at this school? If all these students really wanted to get rid of him, they should have taken this opportunity...Or is it legal for the nomag to beat other students to death?
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Very good question, the fact is that for them is more funny beat him every day and call him killer (psycological bulling) than arrested him, they want to to take the lays by their own hands, but the Dazzlings is other thing that you will discover by time
As I noticed, the Elements of Harmony occupy 1st place in the scheme of powerful creatures, and mermaids occupy 6th place in this scheme ...
But at the same time, the Dazzlings are not at all afraid of the Elements of Harmony. In this chapter, for example, they were not afraid to anger Fluttershy, who, judging by the scheme, as a Pegasus, is certainly weaker than them, but as an Element of Harmony is much stronger. And when the Elements of Harmony united to fight them together, the Sirens, of course, did not risk it, but at the same time they did not show a drop of fear.
Throughout the story, the Dazzlings, being much weaker than the Elements, are not in the least afraid to offend and anger them. After all, even Spike, who has nothing to lose in this life, showed fear of the Elements in this chapter when they spoke to him, knowing that they could kill him in anger. What is the reason for such fearlessness?
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Simple, did you saw the movie Rango? When Rango fight Jack the last scene? He was clarely in disadvantage, but he didn't show fear and when that happen, Jack became to have fear. Dazzlings the same, they know that if they didn't show fear, the others will have
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Mm, smart move!) Too bad that I couldn't realize this...Maybe because I only saw the movies where this Rango's tactic was usually used only by positive characters!😅😅
First and foremost, your story is so GOOD that I actually had to make an account just to say something. Secondly will spike have a glow up/training/time skip arc our purple wearing friends seriously needs a chapter or two where he gets some needed R&R plus therapy he would really benefit from it. Third thing is will he get a revenge arc where he just breaks his leg off in someone's ass? Weather they're magic users or they're nomags as you call them, all that abuse he's suffered practically at the hands of the town can't just go completely unanswered like nothing has happened. We need to have him go on demon time even if it's just for a little bit. And finally when will the next chapter be released I can't wait for it
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Hahahaha is a tactic that all can use, not only heroes, also villians
Also, if you do listen and like my idea and he does get a training acr. I nominate that he gets a body type and fighting style of someone either like Baki Hanma, John Wick, or Red Hood because the Magic used will be coming after him fighting fast, hard, and dirty and they won't be taking any prisoners so spike must do the same.
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Hahahaha thanks you really, well, no therapist will ever take a nomag in his consult, but the revange arc... yes, but time to time, there are many chapters until that. Chapter 9 is on the road but is going to be a long chpater so you'll have to wait a little more. Thanks you for the support again and of course, have a nice day <3
Well, I guess now that William Afton is gone, Spike is getting food money to keep him alive, and buy parts for his inventions, from Discord.
But there was a period in Spike's life when there was no one to give him money for a living. The period between the Incident and the girls' victory over Discord. After all, then Discord was still a villain and did not need a young inventor.
It will be interesting to find out one day how Spike survived during this period of time!))
Good luck with making Chapter 9!👍👍
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You'll find out in future chapters more about the past of Spike and some people that keep close contact with him hahahaha stay update
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Hahaha training is a good idea but my Spike didn't need muscle training, his knowledge, creativity and inteligent are his best weapons
Many creatures in this world have magic. And, of course, they can use it to cast spells. However, they also cannot cast spells immediately after birth. They needed somewhere to learn how to use magic to cast spells. (although the Elements of Harmony probably somehow managed to learn how to use magic to defeat Discord).
There was no moment in the chapters where the students learned new spells (or maybe I just missed it, who knows😅). I wonder if their school has a magic class or something like that? I'm sure that if there is, then no one sees Spike in This lesson (after all, what is the point for a nomag to go to this lesson if he has no magic?).
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The point is that the magic in my World is learn by the ages by itself, is something that in future chapters you will see, Flurry Hearth, for example, is a baby and she cannot use her magic because she didn't know that she barely exist.
Not many Spikes from various fanfiction have the habit of consuming alcohol and smoking. I believe Spike started doing this because of the mood after the Incident and it became a habit afterwards. I have wondered more than once why Spike has not yet contracted any disease about his habits. And at the moment, I have a theory that every time Spike is magically healed, magic, in addition to healing wounds, also cures his body from the harm of smoking and alcohol.
And so, as long as Discord, Harmony's and the others continue to heal Spike from the beatings, he can smoke and drink alcohol as much as he wants😈. Heh, if this were true, I would say it is smart!))
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Thats a very good question that no one has see until know, my Spike is a boheme as you can see and almost every part of the chapter is smoking a cigarrete or drinking an alcohol, why he doesn't get sick? That something that in Chapter 10 will be discover but a little spoiler, he is inmune at some toxins and not because the magic or healing hahaha
You are the second Spike fanfic writer that I've seen who mentioned Peewee in his story (for me, the first writer that I've seen who mentioned Peewee was underrated Drake). I noticed that Thunderlane mentioned this Spike's pet. Does this mean that phoenixes existed in this world even before the advent of magic?
Also, I see that you have added an avatar for yourself. Well, now I at least know who I will associate you with when you laugh ominously in the comments!😆
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Peewee in my story is not a pet, is a childhood friend of Spike that something happen to him in the past. That will be discover in the future, the names that mentioned Thunder are all childhood friends of Spike. And yes, I thought that it was time for put an avatar whats better than a karl heisenberg avatar? Maybe dimitrescu but for that, we got Fluttershy and Applejack hahahahaahahaahahahahaha
You know, I see that some locations with names from FiM series are here. (like Canterlot-city and Appleloosa). I wonder, is there in this story the town of Ponyville and the camp of Everfree? (I remember that the camp of Everfree was in one of EQG movies).
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Yeah, but in this case, Ponyville is the neighborhood where lives the Harmony's, also everfree is a route through the forest of the island where Canterlot is
Can’t wait for ch9. 😁
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Hahahaha soon will come
Yeah, the Fire Ruby brings back old memories of the "Secret of my Excess" episode in me.
I remember how Rarity wanted to get it, and how Spike, out of the kindness of his heart, gave her Ruby.
(The only thing that upset me a little was that after Spike walked around the city in the form of a huge monster, no one, and even Spike himself, then in any of the episodes even remembered this. And Fire Ruby was never mentioned anymore in the series)
In this story as I see, the Fire Ruby is much more important. This is a necessary part of Spike's invention for Discord to fulfill his dream.
I don't know if Rarity in this story would want to get Ruby if she saw it, but I don't think Spike would give it to her. After all, for Spike from FiM, the Fire Ruby was just a festive dinner, and for Spike in this story, this Ruby is necessary for an important invention...
Also, I know that in FiM Dragons are not afraid of lava and they lIke gems. As I see, the Dragons in this story do exist (even though we still didn't meet any dragon here). And who knows, since the Fire Ruby is in volcano, and if in this story Dragons like gems too, then there is a danger that Spike may very well meet the Dragon in this volcano, who will not want to give Ruby and will try to burn Spike to prevent him from reaching Ruby...Be careful, Spike😞.
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I remember that episode with great joy, it was the first time I see my favorite character taking a little plot and interesthing making the baby dragon a killer machine litterality (and a good candidate to take the Orange Ring, if we where in a Green Lanter universe) and they could play so much with that... but not, LET'S MAKE SPIKE A PUPPY IN EG! (sorry that thing is a sensitive spot of my heart that still hurt) So I decide to put the Fire Ruby as one of the main arcs of my story, making it a strange teseract that can make or destroy matter. Rarity of course is interested in the gem but this time Will not get it easily.
Also, dragons exist in my story and will get important in future chpaters but in that volcano for Spike meeting a dragon, is the less of his worries. The Kulahaihea didn't just hid it in a volcano without some securities... good luck spiked boy, you will need
I see that Crusaders are also attractive here (judging by Snips and Snails' reactions on them). But it seems like that Snips and Snails are the only boys around Crusaders age who are crazy about them. Are there really so few boys around the age of Crusaders in this school? It seemed to me that they, like Harmonies, should have crowds of fans.
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They have fans, but not of their ages hahaha (someone call the police pls). Also, there are few boys of their ages but they are also interested in them only that I don't already mentioned them.