• Member Since 29th Aug, 2012
  • offline last seen Jan 7th, 2019

The-Fiction-Master


I love to write stories.. Yeah.

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Its been years since Rarity has gone to Canterlot; business is great, her friends are just as great as usual, but something has gotten her down: She had no Stallion to guide her. But just when things get at a boiling point of depression, Fancypants is at her door. Fancypants has moved to Ponyville to be more closed to Rarity; but can they both confess their feelings or will their love be hidden from eachother forever?

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 5 )

Looks interesting, will read later.

It's a pretty good story so far, I like it.

Just a few notes: definitely try to slow down and add some detail, sometimes it seems a bit rushed. Also definitely wait until you have a full chapter done before you submit it. What you have for this chapter is really good so far, but the fact that it is unfinished kind of takes away from it.

Can't wait for more though! :raritystarry:

I implore you to write more.

Please continue this

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