Lol

"Because they're alkaline in water. Why they didn't keep the scheme, I can't say. Ponies just liked it better that way."

I see what you did there...

I came here for smut, but instead found fucking gold. This shit was fucking hilarious. I decided to read this with a bunch of guys in discord for shits and giggles and it was literally the opposite of what we expected. The scene with gallus and pinkie was definetly the top point. Like i said, fucking bravo my guy.

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Well, thank you very much. This is the most critical response I've gotten, and feedback is exactly what I was looking for.

The poor bug was beyond disgusted. She had no idea how some people could like this, let alone read fanfiction of their favorite cartoon characters going through this.

Clearly, Ocellus has barely even scratched the filthy, sticky surface of Rule 34 creations.

This is one of the top... 3, I'll go with... most creative and best-written vore fics of history.

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Why the fuck did you put this on a vore story