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Scoot Along, Scootaloo

This is the unofficial origin story of a pegasus foal who grows into the young filly we all know and love today

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Starlight Nova

Starlight Nova #1 · Oct 9th, 2020 · · ·

This story's premise confuses me. Isn't Scootaloo already a foal?

Comment posted by Arioch Starr deleted Oct 18th, 2020

BellChime

BellChime #3 · Mar 15th, 2021 · · ·

Dang, that's terrible.

Her parents silently bade her farewell through tear-filled eyes. They turned and staggered back the way they came with their hearts full of misery and self-absorbed pity.

That's one way of putting it.

After a long-winded explanation, however, her reluctance became less discernible and acceptance became more perceptible as the understanding of the positives of his explanations outweighed the negatives.

What are the positive of abandoning your preschool aged child?!

I don't think the parents are supposed to be in the right, but it would help the story flow better if the parent's logic was shown from beginning display. It will be thoroughly nonsensical, but I'm just having a hard time grasping "loving parents" to "It's for the best that we leave our preschooler to fend for herself"