When Twilight Sparkle is awoken by yet another strange sound in Ponyville, it seems like a regular day in the life of Equestria's smartest pony, but when half of the town is entranced by a mysterious, invisible entity that appears by the Town Hall, it seems that this time the threat to Equestria may be coming from places beyond everypony's wildest imaginations...
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Awesome.
Abyss: gazed into.
Thumb: turned upward.
comma abuse but still pretty good...
This gave me chills! Onward, laddy!
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Yeah, I have been known for this... Thanks for pointing it out, I shall attempt to reel it in!
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Don't worry, I do it all the time as well. Just a little work will clear that problem up.
Assuming this is based off of Titan: A.E., I like it so far. If it's not based off Titan A.E. then... I still like it.
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Yeah... I had wondered if that connect might be made... No, this story has no connected to Titan A.E. (A film I haven't seen in years and would like to seek out again). This wasn't the original title of the piece, but the one I used before had been used elsewhere, and I thought it polite to change it. Thanks though!
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oh it's all good. your creative appeal to my love of Titan: A.E. is what prompted me to come to your story in the first place :3
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Subversive Forgotten Animated Movie influence for the win!
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Indeed. And now if you'll excuse me, I'm feeling rather British at the moment.
Space-Time Anomalies? Hell No
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I can't tell if by this you mean "Oh no, what are they going to do?" or "What the hell? THIS again? What happened to originality?"
I don't blame you if it's the latter, I'm new at this and have little-to-no idea what else has been done already on the site... I should probably have read around a bit more before I started writing...
You're definitely bringing across the idea of 'fearing the unknowable' quite well, even I have a bit of fright in my mind just reading about the freaky space anomaly that has Twilight spooked.
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Oh No nothing like that
It because Space-Time Anomalies are often ended with world (Universe) destruction
Also i didnt see any Fic like yours :)
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Heh, thanks, it's good to hear that!
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Ahh, fair enough, you can never be sure here, and I know that the whole "alternate reality" thing has been quite popular, but I don't think I can say it is the same as most of them, we'll have to see
Thanks for the kind words though!
Notices a few typos within this fourth chapter, nothing that ruins the writing within the chapter itself though. (A majority of the typos seem to be just-past the half-way mark among the speech.
)
And might I add...
The plot thickens!