Two years after they were taken, two years after they escaped, the Fog has returned to Canterlot and with it, murders and a brand new threat.
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"the smooth bone handle of the knife that Father gave me when He made me new again"
[checks]
Well, I'd already gathered it wasn't Rainbow after all, and from the color of those question marks I'd started guessing you. But hello, indeed, Wallflower.
So, is this in the past, and if so, has she already been seen but not recognized? Or is this a new piece(/player?) moving onto the board? :D
And what does this mean for my speculations that Rainbow or someone else might already be working for the Entity here? What has she been up to?
Interesting. :D
"moment I touch it can hear"
"moment I touch it I can hear"?
"and a whole marble of reality"
...Because, of course, we needed more mystery! :D
"He always sees me"
I guess the Entity took that request at the end of the side story as a jest; from the looks of it, Wallflower's fine with that, and she quite possibly meant it that way herself.
"words no one but would ever read or"
"words no one but me would ever read or"?
"He told me I would need the Fog to stay strong out here. I still need at least a little bit now and again, not as much as my older brothers and sisters would, but I still need it."
Interesting. Assuming that's true... what's different between her and the others here?
"WOULD MATTER THEN!?"
Missing word(s)?
Well, that was interesting. :D
Thank you for writing. :)
Good to see an update on Wallflower and The Entity, I'm curious about who "The Lock" is (I'm still betting its Sour Sweet).
Any particular reason The Entity doesn't want Adagio or Sonata though? They're killers too after all.
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The Lock isn't Sour, it's something else. And yes, there's a specific reason the Entity wants Sunset.
I still think the Entity should be referred to by female pronouns instead of male. I gave my reasons why over in After Sunset. Then again, if the Entity is genderless, perhaps it becomes whatever the killer wants most out of it. The Ghost Face wanted a father better than the one she has, and I would think the Blight would want an actual mother figure compared to the bitch she got instead.
The Prodigal. The Harvester. The Thief. The Lock.
So the first one is Sunset Shimmer I guess? I would have thought she was more of the Thief instead, but I guess not? The Harvester is Rainbow, considering in After Sunset it referred to her "My Harvester"? But I'd ask why the Entity wants her if it can interact with her as she is now?
No clue about the last two if Sunset is the Prodigal instead of the Thief. The Lock.... something to do with the closing of the Equestrian portal, perhaps? The Entity wants a way to re-open it to have a way into Equestria, perhaps? This is guesswork so I don't count it as spoiler material.
Who wins in a Stalking stare-off? Ghost Face or The Shape?
Thanks for the update!
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While the Devs definitely do refer to her using french feminine pronouns (partially because everything is gendered in the french language) I'm more in the camp of the Entity being a kind of neutral existence. Sunset calls it Old Stain, and mostly refers to it as 'It', while Wallflower views it as the supportive Father she never had. Rainbow doesn't view it as a mother because she doesn't view it as anything particularly positive. More like an employer if anything, she doesn't really have an emotional connection to it, which I'll delve more into as the story progresses.
As for why the Entity needs Wallie to contact the Harvester on its behalf? There's a really good reason for that.
And the Lock... well, we'll get to that.
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If she has no positive connection to it, why call it "Father", then? And honestly, she seems to think far more positively of the Entity than she does her mother. She seems genuinely content and more at peace at the end of After Sunset. So in a way it has been a positive influence on her.. for a given definition of positive, at least.
I look forward to seeing what you've come up with.
Fair enough. In stories I like I just enjoy theorycrafting about the world and such.
Ghost face joins the party, Sunset better remember her or there gonna be brawl... Who am I kidding there's GONNA be a brawl regardless of what will happen.
Welcome home, such as it is.
nice work
Well HELLo Wallflower. Let's get ready to tango.
This is such an awesome set of stories i have read each one multiple times. I can't wait for the next chapter.
Here comes the fucking Ghostface.... Get ready for Jump Scare City....
"The Lock"... Sunset's Journal, isn't it?
...please ...please tell me there'll be a happy ending. mybe bitter-sweet ending but please, at least give everyone a chance for better lifes.
Ok, this was a surprise
I guess I'm too used to Wally being part of the background in any story she isn't the portagonist of. Here it seems she's actually important.
I need to read more.
Well, holy hell... A girl from abusive family is a hunter now. And she is out for Sunny. Too bad Sunset too strong now. She survived hunters when she was "mortal", now she is a hunter herself.