Two years after they were taken, two years after they escaped, the Fog has returned to Canterlot and with it, murders and a brand new threat.
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At first I had thought Rainbow took Sunset's death the hardest, but I'm not entirely sure anymore. Then again, Rarity's apparent breakdown is being compounded by Sweetie Belle's disappearance also wouldn't help her mental well-being in the least.
Regardless, it's abundantly clear at this point that Sunset's apparent death hit all of the EqG six hard. Far harder than she likely imagined. Although she's so bitter about it I don't think just how badly it's hit them has truly sunk in for Sunset yet... or she's in flat out denial about it.
Rarity has shown some impressive detective skills... in Equestria at least. Her EqG counterpart should be up to the task as well if she has the proper motivation... which she sadly does. She is going to piece something together. Something that Sunset and her group have missed, despite all their resources. I just get the feeling she's going to catch that one vital clue they have all missed.
Thank you very much for the update!
This part with Pinkie, god it breaks my heart every time I see a scene like this, even though my most favourite character from M7 is Fluttershy, Pinkie is just too pure for all the horrors the world can throw at her.
And oh boy I kinda worried about Rarity here, Sunset wants the answers and something tells me she'll go too far for the fashion girl comfort in order to get them.
Compassion is a rarity in the fevered pitch of battle.
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Oh and Aria is gonna have very bad time for keeping Rainbow's visit to the hospital a secret.
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So far my impression is that's that Sunset simply doesn't care about how her death hit the M5, except for Pinkie, seeing this cotton candy crying makes anybody doubt his decisions. Or in case with Rainbow and Fluttershy she's outright furious that her death didn't hit them hard enough and they sort of moved on.
nice work.
Oh god the scene with Pinkie fucking brutalized me. My poor heart! How could you do this to me?!? It's so good!
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still absolutely loving the AN quotes
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looks like we boutta see if sweetie's three are in fact Legion or not, betting on yes
"dress. There’s garland around"
"dress. There’s a garland around"?
"The memories of their… coupling… is still way"
"The memories of their… coupling… are still way"?
"fragments of harmony will be pulled in to whatever"
"fragments of harmony will be pulled into whatever"?
Either works there grammatically, but I think the meanings are slightly different; I thought I'd check which you wanted.
"is going on in Canterlot,"
"is going on in Canterlot."?
"the dull wash of the screen’s light"
"the dull wash of the screens' light"?
Since there are three of them?
Well, more interesting developments here, various emotions, and another ending that leaves me wanting to know what happens next. :D
Thank you for writing!
Pinkie pie’s entire scene broke me... Seeing her heartbroken, emotionally Exhausted, and so depressed over unable to move on from Sunset’s “death” And her friends no longer speak to her with tears in her crying, Was too much for me to handle....
And now I wanna hug pinkie
At least, Sunset finally 'visited' her old friends... progress?
Pinkie is easily one of the more damaged characters in MLP, and that makes me so sad
Sunset forgives Pinkie: a step in the right direction.