Two years after they were taken, two years after they escaped, the Fog has returned to Canterlot and with it, murders and a brand new threat.
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That's what I meant, yeah. One thing I've mentioned in a few of my blogs is that Dead by Midnight really is about trauma, but more about what happens after the fact. It's about how people interact and relate and react to trauma, and how it manifests, using the story and the magic and all of the supernatural stuff as a way to tell that story.
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Well, you, sure as hell, succeeded.
A-a-nd here begins the battle of all against all!
Although I was expected meeting between Sunset and Rainbow on the bridge. But it looks like that will have to wait.
nice work.
Gotta admit, I was a surprised to see Sunset flirting with Wallflower like that. A bit brazen considering she's already involved with Tempest.
We knew that Rainbow/Blight was harvesting something from her victims, but... Fog? That seems really kinda odd to me. The killers produce it as they breath, and the survivors can use it to heal and such... and I think they were concentrating the breath of Adagio and Sunset to help heal Sonata... but how can people in the moral world be a source of fog? And if killers produce the fog, and the Entity has several still under it's control, why does it need fog brought in from the mortal world?
Thanks very much for the update!
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Well there's possibility that mortal people have fog in them but it isn't arranged into any comprehensible gen structures and therefore doesn't grant them any supernatural abilities and just sits there inside their bodies.
I don't think that killers produce the fog just like that, in Entity's realm there's fog everywhere and in a great quantities but in real world there's probably very little fog in the atmosphere and that's what cause killers to produce it. The production process itself is something I can't really guess about but the most sound version for me that it's works similar to blood, the killer release small bit of fog from itself, then wait for it's internal reserves to regenerate themselves and repeat. The lack of fog in the real world can also be a reason why older killers can't exist in it, because they are almost all fog and need a proper supply of it.
As for why Entity needs a fog supplied from the real a world I guess the answer should be obvious, Sunset's stunt and thief's actions severely depleted his reserves and Old stain can't fill them back up only feeding on the trapped people's fog and hope.
I'm both glad and disappointed that bridge meeting gone so well and yay the war between the murder machines with supernatural powers, let's hope that Canterlot will survive.
The walls between the sane world and that unplumbed dimension of delirium are tenuously thin here...
oooh fuuuuuchhhh
they don't even know wallflower's at play oh man oh no
"that they're not, besides, this one"
"that they're not; besides, this one"?
"rational and, against all odds all three of my sisters are pretty"
"rational and, against all odds, all three of my sisters are pretty"?
"She brushes away puts two fingers to the skin"
Missing word(s)?
"takes a grip on the handles of Sonata’s and wheels her"
"takes a grip on the handles of Sonata’s chair and wheels her"?
"Uh… seconds try’s the charm"
"Uh… second try’s the charm"?
Thank you for writing. :)
Magnificent. Keep it up.
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Thank you! That's definitely the plan! Glad you're enjoying my work.
I’m Not surprised that you added and then did a little bit of Sunblush at the start. I hope that isn’t a sign that you’re teasing a break up between Sunset and Tempest... Also, it was pretty sad to see Sonata In a wheelchair, looking so fragile and weak. I knew that the Nurse was the most sensitive and weak looking, before she became a killer, but I never knew that will be the after effect of escaping the Fog....
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If you remember how she was in Dead by Sunset, and at the end in the epilogue, Sonata has been in pretty bad condition ever since the Entity messed with her. As for Tempest & Sunset... well... you know me, I already have like, 90% of the story written in my head (and like, almost all of the first act written pending a lot of editing).
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I know, but it still breaks my heart to see my favorite happy girl still very weak and has lost a bit of her smile
I have a feeling that Sunset just missed Rainbow.
Now comes the war...