Damn these chapters are flying out all of a sudden

nice work.

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I'm currently in the midst of a writing marathon to try and raise money for my move through my Patreon. I'm dropping two chapters per week for the month of December, and may continue based on the popularity. But yeah, basically at the tail end of November I had a bunch of expenses crop up including a sudden need to move house, and so I'm leveraging the one main skill I've got to help ease that! My Patreon members get to read a chapter ahead in Dead by Midnight, in addition to be able to read all my original stuff I have up there.

Why am I so mad at you right now setting up a fight and we have to wait it better be good and revealing also I call sunset getting decked by aria lol

Hmm.Hmm.Hmm... It seems that our dear Sunset suspects the CMC of being the Legion afterall. Just as their actions shaped her future, her actions and theirs shaped the CMC's. A repeating cycle. But they have a handler eh? Someone who can traverse the fog? Could Rainbow Dash be their handler? She's been traversing the fog even before she became the Blight. If that's the case, it also means that the thief isn't the one who created them... Could RD have initiated them somehow on her own?

Despite not being in any way attractive

I VEHEMENTLY disagree! She looks amazing as a killer. Even better than when she was a human.

I can't help but wonder if Fluttershy is the Ogre of the East. She showed some strength when confronting Applejack and Big Mac about how Rainbow Dash was treated on the farm. She might also bear a grudge against the gangers thinking they attributed to RD's own fall. I also think if Fluttershy and RD are still dating, that Fluttershy would become aware of RD's abilities as the Blight eventually. Killers in a relationship, isn't it romantic?

“Whoever they are has a grudge,” Redheart says softly.

“Every Killer does if you look close enough,” I reply dryly. “Even human ones.”

The Shape/Michael Myers doesn't. He simply... is. There's no grudge to it. And that's one of the reasons he's so terrifying.

Thank you so much for the update! It won't be long before past killer meets the new generation.

I feel that, Dead By Midnight is somehow forcing Sunset to confront her past. Yes, she hates the girls, but I think this is going to force her to truly find closure with her feelings and just let it go. However, this is just my own observation.

It always amaze me that Zephyr can be not a douchebag parasite to his family, now let's see if he's gonna survive this.

Brigands have the run of these lanes.

Dispatch this thug in brutal fashion, that all may hear of your arrival!

"sent up to the Old Stain will be out last."
"sent up to the Old Stain will be our last."?

"It’s been there ever since I left Applejack’s. It's"
Applejack's what? Dream?

"dial Aria’s number she’s probably"
"dial Aria’s number; she’s probably"?

"I roll my eyes, Of course"
"I roll my eyes. Of course"?

Well. :D
I look forward to finding out what happens next! Thank you for writing!

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re the speculation that Fluttershy is the Ogre:
Ooh, interesting! Yeah, I could see it... I'll add her to my suspects list with Tempest.

Is it wrong that I never life flutter shy’s brother to the point where I hope he stays on that hook? Anyways, I cannot wait for the next chapter, because we’re finally going to see who are the Legion

First Applejack, now Fluttershy’s brother… something is happening. I can feel it. Something is tugging on the strings of Harmony and I’m getting caught up in it. I can’t let this go any further. I can’t let them find out that I’m—

You're part of this, Sunset. You and the new Bearers of Harmony....perhaps even the old ones too.

“You got scared and ran?” I repeat slowly. “From… what you thought… was a normal person in a hoodie?”

“It might’ve been a mugger or a thug!” He snaps, and lets out another cry of pain from the hook.

Ah, okay, so he’s a bigot. At the very least a classist shitheel. Not that he was wrong in this particular case, but the fact that his first assumption to someone existing near him in a less nice part of town was that they were a criminal didn’t exactly endear him to me.

To be fair, his assumption was correct. That hoodied person was a thug, albeit a glorified one with eldritch-powers behind them.

I can see where Sunny's coming from though, but there's a motto I like very much.

"Hope for the best, prepare for the worst."

A little prejedice is nothing if it saves a life.

Sunny. Harmony NEEDS the seventh person. Even though it went down FIVE, due to MORONIC desicions of some people, who couldn't live up to their potential. But yeah, Harmony is looking for you, and you have nowhere to run. X)