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EEE thank you!!!!
Looking good so far, best bird, nearly to third.
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nearly to what?
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third base, though, the fluff and plot makes the wait way more worth it, when the actual smut arrives, loving all of it. also keep drawing your awesome art too, your style is amazing as ever.
Heresy! Griffon butt wiggles are damned adorable and there should be more of them!
That sounds like a rather horrifying combination for a stew, but the way she goes on about it later, I have to ask - was this from personal experience?
Another interesting chapter in the end. Bit more personal drama, bit more political drama. Surprised all the investigators had the subtly of bricks through windows, would have figured at least one would try and be indirect about things.
Looking for the next instalment as always.
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Gilda: "butt wiggles are ridiculous! there is no point to waving my ass in the air for all to see!"
Gabby, while heavily blushing : *internal disagreement intensifies!!!!!!*
actually no! I asked my three roommate for random dishes, and that's what they came up with. XD
Bricks are faaaar more subtle than canterlot ponies! don't insult such a wonderful object of our collective history! XD
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Thank you so much!!!
edits have been made.
As for the glass plot hole, I intended for it to fee like Gilda was skewing how long ago she wrote the letter on purpose. To lead Gabby away from her trail. She wrote the letter on the evening she got the glass.
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Ah, gotcha. I just didn't see a time between her making the rose buds (if I remember their name rightly) and her telling Gabby about the letter that she could have gone up there to write it. That might just be me though, heh.
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nipples
A few days later, and time to read more of a great story and make a few teensy weensy little corrections.
I asked Gallus if her knew why you were acting so funny recently...I brought up the letters and what not, and he said...something.
He instead of Her, and a bit of spacing after the elipses.
Gabby shook her head. "S-fine...seems we both have secrets, we should respect them."
Think you meant for that S to be an F, but I may be wrong there, and a little bit more spacing.
Gilda shook her head. "No...no you're right. I did lie to you. If we are going to uphold those damning pony moralities, well, I know honesty is one of em."
I was...I was very distraught when you were hurt, Gabby. He felt the information would benefit my mental state."
From what I can see, every ellipsis from this point onward has the same spacing issue, no biggie though ^v^
Now, for real commenting rather than just corrections, I do far too much of that -v-
Great chapter, and with some drama too. Not sure if it's cold in here or if I was legitimately shivering in dread when they started arguing, hoo! Though, something tells me the jig is up, and they both know it, even if they don't want to call each other out on it.
Keep up the great work Backlash! I'll be here, sweeping up behind ya!
Interesting story. Added to my read list.
*slow clap* way to go gilda, you managed to sus someone else for your awkward agrument resolution with out realizing it. I am sure this isnt gonna come full circle later, nah not at all.
Still it all started by unknownly giving her a traditional kiss(the beak nuzzle) trying to get a noddle.
i had a feeling luna was watching their dreams. Curious if this is gonna play a part later.
Very well done, the agrument was a clutch read and glad that no one was hurt to badly by it.
MOAR!(Edit) i just turned that page to only see that you have a new chapter up. Curse yoooou!!10789873
MWAHAHAHA new content shall always bee right at the ready!
this is so cute, but at the same time it's painful
stop taunting me and get to the reveal scene already aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa