fist fic so dont be overly-expectant. crossover between MLP and Robert Jordans "The Wheel of Time"
The strange story of Pelane, sister of Queen Talana and Grand-Daughter of Rand Al'Thor, Prince of Dawn, Lord of the Morning, The Dragon Reborn.
A/N takes place In the future seen by Aviendha when she enters the Glass Pillars in Rhuidean.it should also be noted that in the Wheel of Time series, there is no mention of Pelane(which i should hope not, i just created her) and the only mentioned sibling of Queen Talana is her brother, who also functions as her First Prince of the Sword, as tradition dictates.
Chapters (4)
if you ever come across a word that is not explained to your liking i would be happy to answer questions or you can go to one of the many Wheel of Time fansites
oh noes... a thumbs down!
Interesting so far.
The story is still interesting, but I suggest that you start a new line whenever someone else starts speaking.
I look forward to seeing what happens next. I'll be following this story.dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_TwilightWut.png
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thanks for the advice
for anyone who has written WoTfanfics or created fanart, i would suggest joining the group WoT? and posting them so that we all might see!
For some reason, I got a kick out of this line.
Things just got really interesting as ***t just got real. I want to know how Princess Celestia knows of the Pattern.
This song seems to be very appropriate for "The Wheel of Time".
For some reason, I can Picture Min singing this to/about Rand.
Great chapter.
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oh i have big things in store... unfortunately i wont be able to update tomorrow because im pulling security for a high school football game :/ but ill update sat. i have to agree with you on those songs, and thanks for the compliment!
EDIT:also, i mentioned starting to write fanfics to my AP teacher and i think hes going for sabotage...3 different types of notes on 30 pgs of the book...and its all in VERY fine print
1146027 I'm glad to hear it and you're welcome. I hope that you have a good time at the game and I look forward to the next chapter. I'm also glad to see that you agree with me about the songs
Good luck to you when you take the AP Exam.
So he's making you take notes on it? I'm not exactly sure of what you're saying about the sabotage.
I take it that you're in an AP English class. I was in an AP Computer Programming course during my Junior year. It was just me and 3 Seniors. I got a 1 out of 5 on the AP Exam...And I got extended time. Oh well.
sweet someone finally wrote a WoT fanfic ^^ my life is complete now.
XD im gonna have to do a quick read through before i continue... forgot too many minor details
Short chapters O_o.
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Well, it's pretty good nonetheless
There are a lot of jumps in the narration, you never get any relationship building between the characters (aside from Pelane's comment about Twilights coloring). They are just suddenly friends? What happened between them? What did they talk about? How did the other's react?
So Celestia knows Pelane. This could mean she was a Seanchan, possibly the one the destroyed in Camelyn. But if that's true, who was Luna and how did she get hear? Is she the one who got turned into a skeleton? Or did Pelane experiment on both of them? If so, how many of those in Equestria are Seanchan? Way to impose conflict and mystery!
If only there were more crossovers of my favorite cartoon and epic book series . . .