When Twilight and Venom took down Riot, the rest of the symbiotes all agreed to take willing hosts and live new, peaceful lives. But one particular symbiote managed to escape Equestria. And he has no intention of joining the good side.
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Idk why but I'm really craving tomato soup right now.
This is getting too revolting to drag out. Either we will be reaching the conclusion soon, or I'm just gonna opt out of this.
please tell me we're getting close to the end. that is nightmare fuel for everyone.
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Well it IS a fic involving Carnage so I felt I needed to explore his depravity a little further. But it may be a comfort to know that I do plan on wrapping this up in idk probably around five more chapters and those will likely not focus as much on murder. But no further spoilers in that regard~
... he made a mistake, killing the rest of the mane 7 will backfire
Umm...
Are you ok? Like, do you need someone to talk to? This...wow.
I'm glad you started uploading this more frequently, it is one of the more interesting stories I've read. Though I am expecting there to be some big climactic fight between carnage and venom, if so, you'd have to make at least one of the chapters pretty lengthy. Or maybe you have something else in mind for the ending? Either way, I'm excited to see.
............. and like that....... I'm out. I'm fucking out. I love Carnage as much as anyone but this was.... this was utterly revolting and disgusting and just downright TOO edgy to deal with.
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Nah I'm fine and dandy and honestly I wrote worse in my Gravity Falls fanfics Payment in Blood and Paying Recompense. Actually.
...wait let me think
Yeah there was a scene in Payment in Blood where a guy got burning oil poured onto him and another got their eyes scooped out with a melon baller and yet another just got his skull repeatedly bashed into a floor until it eventually caved in and killed him so those got pretty gruesome too.
I actually like to think Twi got off lucky here with Carnage ending it with the bite, I mean he could have just pushed her the rest of the way under and upon reading the Safety Data Sheet for hydrochloric acid I discovered that it does very very NOT FUN things to your eyes. It might sound weird but something about writing extremely violent scenes is cathartic to me and I of course do not condone these sorts of actions in real life.
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Despite how terrible things have gotten, I have to see this through to the end, which, according to you, will not take much longer.
R.I.P Twilight Sparkle.
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Fair enough, thanks for making it this far.
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Well you're a stronger man then me.
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You honestly let me down with this latest chapter. It's been getting harder to deal with... but this one was just.... this FELT edgier and forced. I actually LIKED your last story just for clarification. This one.... uh uh.
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I appreciate the feedback and I understand everyone has their limits. Personally this felt like a natural continuation to the story for me and it was something I've had planned since I first started the outline for it, as part of my exploration of the full depth of Carnage's cruelty. But I'm sorry it came across as forced anyway, I didn't intend for it to be like that.
I am done this was a step too far, shame
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It didn't help that this came across as a 'I need to make Carnage look dangerous' which is something we know very fucking much. And I... just never liked him being with Sunset. He works best as bonded with someone LIKE Cletus. So this just felt all kinds of OoC for him but I got over it because maybe I thought I could like it... I can see that I was wrong.
I have no words. I understand that you have to show Carnage at his worst.
Can't wait to see what happens when the rest of the human elements and later Princess Twilight and Venom find out about what Carnage has done!
I am going to throw up. I just... ugh. I have limits, and I dealt with frickin' Cheerilee's Garden!
This... there's no way this is making its way out of my mind now. I will stick with the story until the end since it's my policy to do so, but I don't think the story is going to be good in my eyes. Like... you took a step too far. (I just don't see how this story could end in a good ending now...)
Please tell me there’s gonna be a way to bring Twilight Sparkle back to life
Death to human characters tend to be better then than pony characters. All thing considered this wasnt that bad, nice work.
Did you really have to have him kill Sci-Twi?
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Alas, this was necessary for the storyline I wanted to write. I don't like the concept of main characters being able to avoid death just because of being main characters. Carnage treated Twi like he would have treated anyone else who got in his way. This is all in-universe, of course.
Out of universe I'm aware that I as the writer didn't have to write it this way. But I still wanted to, I like exploring dark fics where no one is safe from the villain. I understand why other people might not like that but it's still a creative decision I decided to make in writing this. There's plenty of stories where bad stuff happens but all the good guys survive. This simply is not one of them I'm afraid.
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I wouldn't've minded a mauling bad enough that it left her out of the fight for the rest of the fic unable to do anything with the promise of continuing her suffering until he gets tired of tormenting her and of course as means to break Sunset Shimmer.
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Doing it in the second fix of a series like this. Yeah NO. you now pollute the previous story with thos move
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Don’t want to say it, but there are few ways that Sunset will not be dead at the end of this. Mainly because the first chance she has she is gonna end herself. This was just too cruel for her, it is a surprise her mind has not simply suffered a breakdown. If they save her, they’ll have to put her on Suicide watch and therapy for years before she can even start to be normal again.
And if any more people will die through carnage, especially people she knows, it will get only worse.
Damn really gave Sci-Twi the Mami bite death from Madoka.
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So does that mean sci twi is gone for good
Please tell us there’s gonna be a way to bring twilight back to life.
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Everyone, those who wants twilight back in the story, take a look at this pole.
Here
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if she co mes back..i comeback
nice work
Sunset wouldn't cooperate with Carnage, so he had to break her. We can only hope he doesn't end up pushing her sanity beyond the brink.....
I can't believe Carnage kills Sci-Twi. Out of all the Mane Six/Seven girls (human and pony alike which I like both), Twilight Sparkle is my personal number 1 favorite, and Carnage murders her. I wish Twilight could've used her geode magic to make a teleport escape from the acid bath. I hope She-Venom Princess Twilight comes back through the portal, bcuz I want her to inflict so much pain and agony onto Carnage after she tears Carnage off of Sunset for what he's done. What will Sunset do with Sci-Twi's geode after the end of Carnage? Give to Princess Twilight, keep it for her to remember, or use it with the help of her friends and Princess Twilight to bring her back to life with their combined friendship magic
THIS SHOULD BE HOW THE STORY GOES. PLEASE ANYONE WHO WANTS TO SCI-TWI SURVIVE ADD YOUR PART in a reply.
Realization dawned on Twi's face. In a flash, she understood that her friend wasn't in control. She narrowed her eyes and her geode shone, magic glittering around it, and Sunset could see pony ears forming from the sides of her head as she started to pony up again. Her heart soared, maybe this would be it for Carnage...
Then Carnage's hungry jaws reared over Twilight head until out of no where, a black fist connect to Carnage face and punched him straight into a wall. It the pull Twi out of the acid onto the floor, Twi looked up to thank her savior only to see a black and bulky monster with a face similar to Carnage's.
Twi immediately backed away from the monster until it raised it's hands "don't worry we're a friend." it said in a deep voice.
Twilight dispute her burns raises an eye brow "'we're'?" She repeated. The monster face peeled away similar to Carnage but then it showed a face Twi was all to familiar with.
"Princess twilight?!" She shouted seeing her other self's face. Princess twilight flashed a sheepish smile before kneeling down to the injured human version.
"I'll explain everything later right we need to fix you face." She said trying hard not to throw up seeing Sci-Twi injuries. She extended her hand over Sci-Twi and then a black strand extended from latched on to her and stared covering her body all the way up to her neck.
Sci-Twi felt tingling all over her body while questions flew through her head: what was her counterpart doing here? How did she know to come here? What was this black stuff? And what she and it doing to-
"There! That should do it." Princess Twilight said pulling Sci-Twi out of her thought, the black goo peeled off of her revealing that the burns the acid had left were completely healed! As if they were never there.
Sci-Twi was speechless some how this thing had helped repair and replace the skin and possibly muscle tissues she lost in the acid. She turned to her now much bulkier and Blacker counterpart and startedunleashing a barrage of questions " How? What? Where? When? Huh?!" Or at least tried to with how confused she was at the fact that she almost died in acid, got saved by her counterpart and that the red serial killing monster was-
She gasped and turned to her Counterpart with what she just saw.
"Princess! That thing it has control of Sunset-" she was halted when Princess Twi placed a finger to her lips.
"We know. Venom and I came back to check on Sunset and he sense him nearby." She explained as the two then turned to see Carnage getting and screeching in outrage at the black suited princess. Princess twilight glared back at the monster who tried to use one of his friends to kill another, Venom sensed her anger and said in hope 'Let's kill this red freak and get our friend back?'.
She smirked as black goo covered her face and she spoke in a deep tone "Let's!". The two symbiote suited girl stared each other down before roaring a charging and then got caught in a grapple.
Sci-Twi kneeled on the floor, watching the two fight as she brought her hands together, 'please other me , she prayed, 'Please save Sunset from that monster.'
I almost lost my lunch, and that's only happened one other time out of thousands of stories.
I almost cried.
I was mad.
You gut punched me and have absolutely captured Carnage in the flesh.
The only creature that terrifies me out of all the Marvel universe.
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I'm glad I was able to capture the sheer horror of Carnage, though I also apologize for the gut punch. It was rough to write, for sure
on a scale of 1 and yes that I want carrange dead im on YES. Now then lets see how dark this gets from here.
I've read a lot of pretty disturbing and dark stories. They don't usually bother me all that much, but this... this one made me nearly pass out. Literally one of my worst fears is seeing someone being submerged in acid, and being forced to watch them suffer as they slowly melt to death. I once watched a movie like that, and it's haunted me ever since. I honestly don't know if I can stomach this story any more.
I'm really sorry, but I was not prepared for that and I don't think I can continue reading this...