10013519 I was referring to actually making another story in the future or integrating different aspects of theories to the story. If you want to make a story a bit grimmdark, I have been on the fandom for a long time and in tumblr, so I know of a few.
Wow, you really are going full force with the rhymes. Well done. PD: Is this a remake? I could swear I’ve read this before and commented in some aspects you could improve yet Now that I’m reading it again it seems more than fine.
Just found this. You actually know the difference between the nation and the world as a whole, there are so many here that dont, you now have my attention. Let see if you keep it.
so far so good lets see how you continue
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If she saw that he transformed would explain that without making her knowing that he transformed into zebra forced
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I fix. Maybe is better? Maybe not. Probably not.
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I was referring to actually making another story in the future or integrating different aspects of theories to the story. If you want to make a story a bit grimmdark, I have been on the fandom for a long time and in tumblr, so I know of a few.
I would like to read more
so far so good cant say if its better or not only time will show
The idea is intriguing. Let's see where it will lead me to.
This som good shit.
Beginning could use some fixing up maybe, aside form that everything is good abd I would love to see more
Wonder if the glasses are there own SCP.
please more
Going well so far. Please make more.
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SCP-XXXX
Class: Safe
Secure Containment Procedures : Box
Description: Regular glasses that improve hindsight 2020
This truly does read like a shitty isekai, but I can't help but to love it.
Interesante...
I wish they didnt haft to be in a ponies form and just look human or something close
Wow, you really are going full force with the rhymes. Well done.
PD: Is this a remake? I could swear I’ve read this before and commented in some aspects you could improve yet Now that I’m reading it again it seems more than fine.
Wait is the author adding time travel
Just found this. You actually know the difference between the nation and the world as a whole, there are so many here that dont, you now have my attention. Let see if you keep it.
Seven seals, seven rings, seven brides for the scarlet king
A name that is a titel. This will be interessting. Vinyl... Huh neat!
Nice chapter. I wonder if Celestia can feel his aura and if its unique or has a existing flair to it.
please tell me this story isnt dead