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Er, I think a sentence got cut off here.
Hmmm....so Rosewater is pretty sincere about courting Collar. And Collar is fighting with his own principals on being poly with the two/three mares that star in this story. For some reason I foresee that Rosewater and Collar are going to have a long honest talk at some point and it's going to be depressing as all hell.
I'm also assuming that we might get one of those balls that keeps being mentioned. I bet it's going to be a full on political battlefield the likes of which haven't been seen in a long time in either city.
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Dangit. I thought I'd fixed that, but apparently did not. The end of the sentence was
Silver Drop has known what's going on.
For the rest... stars I love your comments. And I'm fighting so hard not to say anything!
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Okay, I'm not sure what Roseate's endgame plan is. She's pushing and alienating her best military asset and setting up a secession crisis just as her foes across the river are more united and ready. Has she gone mad?
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Why must you tempt me to say things!
Seriously, though, she has a pathos, and the story will explore that more as it progresses. She's not acting out of random spite, and she has a plan.
There's still a few chapters of rewriting to do yet before I get back to where I'd originally finished the third draft revisions for everything, but I do have her plan starting to unfold more fully as time goes on.